Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/16/06 10:07
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

I loved this! I hope it will continue!!

Author's Response: I'm so pleased you like it and thanks for such brilliant words of encouragement!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/16/06 9:57
Chapter: Truth, Lies and Curses

Magical! Best chapter!! Oh bravo, you made Snape and Harry friends! I always wanted JK Rowling to do that...obvoiusly she did the opposite... I'm so glad Snape didn't die, since he started being nice to Harry... I dont honestly mind that much McGonnagall!!!

By the way I noticed instead of "Dedalus Diggle" you put "Deadalus Diggle!!!" Lol I found that funny, since he actually did die... did you put that on purpose??

Anyway I'm so glad Snape is good!!!!:) Maybe it will change my mind to him in the Half-Blood-Prince...

Author's Response: Just a typo, I'm afraid! I will leave it in though :) And as for Snape and Harry being friends at the moment... ~ S x

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/15/06 14:08
Chapter: The Darkest Hour

I don't like this chapter, it was much too humilating...I'm surprised Ginny isn't in tears with Hermione. I realize this is the Darkest Hour....*shudders*

Author's Response: Yes, this is getting pretty dark now... the true darkest hour is coming up though, I hope I don't scare you too much! ~ S x

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/15/06 11:22
Chapter: A Second Departure

Itz scary!! I seriously think Snapes gonna die!!! Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!

Author's Response: ... you'll have to wait and see...

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/15/06 11:13
Chapter: Hogsmeade

Haha!! I LOVED that last bit!!! It was funny, it made me laugh!!!

Author's Response: I'm so pleased! :)

Reviewer: purplepills
Date: 06/15/06 9:13
Chapter: Unwanted Power

I have read thus far and found it quite nice. The only bit I think you should think about changing is Harry blushing all the time like some stupid girlwho is half in love. I can state for a fact that boys do not, I repeat, do not blush. Well, they turn red, or their face might flush with emotion, but they definitely do not blush, and its not right to write that. I hope you do not mind but I did find all that blushing rather tiresome, and he does seem to be doing rather a lot of it here. Best of luck, anyway.

Author's Response: Harry has never been my strong point, and nor has boy's emotions! Occupational hazard of being female :) I'll try and cut down on the blushing thoug - I've just re read the story and he does it way too often so thanks for pointing it out! Thanks for being honest though, ~ S x

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/14/06 15:22
Chapter: A Difficult Decision

That wasn't quite as exciting as the other chapters, but pretty good!!

Author's Response: This is the calm before the storm... you won't have long to wait until the action is back full force!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/14/06 15:08
Chapter: Accusations

I was glad Severus made it to Hogwarts safely!!!
I didn't like that chapter much. Too scary.

Author's Response: I hope i didn't scare you too much! ~ Stormy x

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/14/06 14:48
Chapter: Unexpected Departure

So Snape is a...? Bad or Goody? Im so confused!! But I think it is goody because he HAD considered to tell Dumbledore. Was that panicky figure him? Lol I think Snape is going to die soon...not sure...

Author's Response: Snape is... good, bad, in the middle or a combination of them all - I'm just not telling you which one yet :) And as for Snape dying soon...

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/14/06 13:27
Chapter: The Power of Suggestion

Hey I liked that ending! Supurb!!!
I wonder what happens next...

Author's Response: Thanks so much! ~ S x

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/14/06 13:08
Chapter: Christmas

That was quite good, first attempt. I like it, though I don't understand why Ginny started avoiding Harry...

And oh yeah, what happenedd to Draco?
I never seen a story so long without him bothering Potter...

Not complaining, I think Draco's a git!!

Lol Can't wait till I finish reading this!! (as in knowing what will happen next)

Author's Response: I'm so pleased you think so - fluffy romance isn't really my strong point! And Draco is, um, busy at the moment... You'll fid out why in FoO.

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/14/06 12:43
Chapter: The Three Attacks

So... I don't get it, what did Dumbledore do to the letter?? What..??? Plz contact me with the answer or contact me on MSN.

Author's Response: I'll contact you as well but in case you check back here, Dumbledore was just checking to see whether the letter was genuine. Because the ink turned green, it was genuine. I hope that clears it up! Stormy x

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/14/06 12:25
Chapter: First Game

I did like it. But now I feel bad. Manchester is going to be ruined now isn't it? And Voldemort possessing Harry... I'm scared!!

Author's Response: I'm pleased you like it and Manchester will reocer, don;'t worry :) Voldemort will soon, er, be otherwise 'occupied'...

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/14/06 12:13
Chapter: Unwanted Power

I really thought Kingsley was a Death Eater then, well written!!!

Author's Response: Excellent - that's what I wanted you to think! ~ S x

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/14/06 11:58
Chapter: Not a Threat, But a Promise

i loved the chapter, it is full of dangerous points! what happened to malfoy who stepped out of hogwarts?? oh i get it...he mite be one of da death eaters!!

Author's Response: :) I'm so pleased you like it!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/14/06 11:54
Chapter: Not a Threat, But a Promise

I loved it!! You got me hooked in alright!!! Itz as good as JK Rowling!!! I love your latin words too!!!

Author's Response: As good as JKR? Lol, that's the best compliment anyone can give me with regards to my writing! Thanks so much for your encouragement, ~S x

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/14/06 10:57
Chapter: Invisibility

I loved that chapter! Though it was a bit scary when the Ministry Worker disappeared!! Hehe keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: Scary is good :) well, at least I think so! Glad you're enjoying though ~ S x

Reviewer: luvinhp
Date: 06/14/06 7:27
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

This story was great!!!
I reall liked it......

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Stormius_Willow
Date: 06/14/06 6:10
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

this story was awesome! so are your others. keep writing.


Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/13/06 14:34
Chapter: Going Home

good song!!! pity, i thought the song was too short...but I suppose its very hard to make it long...cause poetry's not my thing!! hehe like it, keep the nxt ones rolling too!!! but i don't really get that last bit...what coincidence???

Author's Response: Poetry's not my strong point either! The one in FoO is longer (well, at last I think it is!) and the last bit being a coincidence...

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