Reviewer: tarawent
Date: 04/25/05 9:14
Chapter: The Clamcelo

Cool orb thingy!! That was a great idea and I assume will come in handy for future chapters. Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!

Author's Response: It will come in handy but maybe not as much as you think... :) Chap. 5 is coming soon - it's called "Going Home"...

Reviewer: grindelwald
Date: 04/25/05 8:58
Chapter: The Clamcelo

Once againm great job, I really like the idea of the orb. Keep up the great job...please update asap..ta;)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the idea of the orb - I wanted a change on the usual Pensive. Chap. 5 has been submitted so you shouldn't have to wait too long!

Reviewer: jsmarriner
Date: 04/19/05 12:54
Chapter: The Remittomissum Charm

Keep up the great work!! Maybe im just spoiled or something but I would love to see your chapters about double in length. You have the talent, that much is obvious. Youve got me hooked on this story. Just like any "dealer", increase the dosages with longer chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments - they're really useful as I know what I need to do to improve. Chapter 4 has been submitted at about 2,500+ words but chapter 5 is well over 3,000. I hope that's more about the length you want - or do you want them longer still?! I'm really pleased you're enjoying it so far though, and longer chapters are coming right up!

Reviewer: Pleione
Date: 04/19/05 8:40
Chapter: The Remittomissum Charm

Great story so far, can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks! And you shouldn't have too long to wait until chapter 4 gets accepted!

Reviewer: malko050987
Date: 04/19/05 5:00
Chapter: The Remittomissum Charm

Great chapter, i can't wiat for the next to be approved. I have one question. Will Harry win in the end? And will you add some romance to this story or you'll focus on angst? 10!

Author's Response: I'm not going to tell you what happens in the end, am I!!! lol, only joking; as I'm thinking of writing a sequel (year 7) I'm not going to kill him off in this story though, if that's what you're worried about :) As for adding romance - I will do but not that much as I get a bid fed up with it after a while! Thanks for the 10 and I hope you'll enjoy the next chapters as much.

Reviewer: tarawent
Date: 04/17/05 17:18
Chapter: The Remittomissum Charm

Wow!!!! Great story, too bad I read all three chappies at one sitting-- now I'm really on pins and needles to see what happens next. Udate soon, please!!

Author's Response: lol, I didn't realise it would have that effect on you! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story too and chapter 4 has been submitted so you shouldn't have long to wait!

Reviewer: tarawent
Date: 04/17/05 16:59
Chapter: Floo Powder

I just found your story. Good job!!! Nice first chapter-- it leaves me wanting more. I'm adding you to my favorites!!

Author's Response: Thanks - I'm glad you're enjoying it. I hope you like the rest of the story as much!

Reviewer: vigal
Date: 04/17/05 16:40
Chapter: The Remittomissum Charm

Ok one question are you related to JKR?? That was a truly amazing chapter well the whole story actually. I apprichated (sorry about spelling) the work you put into the story especially that latin verb as I don't like when authors make up new funnky spells and there is no basis for the word. So again please continue the wonerful work!

Author's Response: No, but I am English! lol, I'm gald you like the Latin verb - there's another one coming soon in chapter 5. I'm really pleased you're enjoying it so far though!

Author's Response: Oops, I meant chapter 4; sorry!

Reviewer: Magic2081
Date: 04/17/05 3:51
Chapter: Floo Powder

Wow! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep writing!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it - new chapter coming soon!

Reviewer: grindelwald
Date: 04/17/05 3:05
Chapter: The Remittomissum Charm

Wow brilliant, omg...te suspence till the next chaoter, plzpzplzplzpzlz update asap

Author's Response: I've added chapter four so you shouldn't have too long to wait! And I'm really glad you like it, it makes my day when people write reviews like that. :)

Reviewer: grindelwald
Date: 04/16/05 16:07
Chapter: Trials and Suffering

Bloody hell, Ur evil..loljk,, superb chapter, Great , great , great..plz update soon

Author's Response: *Evil grin* of course I'm evil... :) lol, not really. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far though!

Reviewer: jsmarriner
Date: 04/15/05 14:08
Chapter: Trials and Suffering

Once again well done. Alot of action going on and the pace of the story is fast. You are deffinately comming out of the gate strong. Once again all I could ask for would be more details/filler. Keep the pace the same but stretch it out with good old fashion story teller elaboration. Again its a good story.

Author's Response: Thanks - and the story will slow down after the next chapter; I was just keen to get the ball rolling a bit. It'll fill out really soon, I promise.

Reviewer: jsmarriner
Date: 04/15/05 13:55
Chapter: Floo Powder

Nice opening attention grabber!! Very well done. I only wish it would have been longer.

Author's Response: I was considering about putting the first two chapters together but I decided against it. The chapters will get longer as the story develops though. If you've got any suggestions though on the sort of 'fillers' you want to see though, feel free to email me!

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 04/14/05 16:34
Chapter: Trials and Suffering

Great start! Way to start with a big bang. I'm thinking that someone in the Order just decided to knock him out when they couldn't stop him from seeing the memories.

Author's Response: Good guess; it's close - but not quite! All will be revealed in the next chapter. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far though!

Reviewer: vigal
Date: 04/13/05 10:55
Chapter: Trials and Suffering

Oh I like the story!! what the hell is up with harry? (porden my language) OMG... very good details and all can't wait to see what happens

Author's Response: Wait til chapter three and all will be explained...! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far though!

Reviewer: malko050987
Date: 04/13/05 6:04
Chapter: Trials and Suffering

I hate cliffhangers!! But the story is great. i like ythe second chapter. 10!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Chapter three will up shortly I hope! No cliffhanger in the next one too. :)

Reviewer: Caly
Date: 04/09/05 11:50
Chapter: Floo Powder

I love it! Keep writing! But how does Harry know what the sticky substance (Blood?) is supposed to mean, so he gets Dumblebore? Good plot! I love it.

Author's Response: :) I don't want to say too much as it'll spoil the next chapter. Trust me, there is a reason why Harry needed to get him. I've submitted the next chapter so it should be up in the next 48 hours. I'm glad you're enjoying so far though :)

Reviewer: malko050987
Date: 04/09/05 4:15
Chapter: Floo Powder

Your story has a great start, but i have one question. If harry is feeling guilty for Sirius' death, how come he wants to go to Grimmauld place? After all, it's full of memoreis of sirius, and Sirius hated it. you get a ten raring for the story, like i said, its great. Send an answer to me if you want, or don't send one, it's your choice, but i would like to know what you think about my quaestion. PS: don't let me distract you from your plotline. You started great, like i've said. Keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'll post the answer to your question here so it gets answered for anyone else who's wondering... Yes, Harry is missing Sirius a lot, and he doesn't want to go anywhere near Grimmauld Place. However, he is at the Dursleys, which he hates, and being at HQ means that he can find out more about what is going on with Voldemort, as well as being with Ron and Hermione. I've mentioned more about this in chapter four, and I might add a scentence about this in this chapter too. Thanks for your comments though and I hope you enjoy chapter 2 as much!

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