Reviewer: pgeraci
Date: 06/27/05 7:12
Chapter: The Darkest Hour

Good chapter, well done.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Colin Creevey
Date: 06/27/05 4:13
Chapter: The Darkest Hour

Very nice, another 10.

We now know where Snape's loyalties lie...with DUMBLEDORE. Are you going to have a sequel ot this story? It's a shame for this story to end.

It was a very good story and I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: How do you know that 'rescuing' Harry isn't just a cover up...?

Thanks for the review though, (and the 10!) and there is a sequel coming very soon which I hope you'll enjoy!

Reviewer: Lainie xox
Date: 06/26/05 22:15
Chapter: A Second Departure

Omg, I felt like screaming when I read the part where Dumbledore got Harry's stag saying "Help" in his voice... Harry, I love him so much... Another very well written chapter of yours! I really can't wait much longer for your next chapter! I really need to know what happens! And, I'm very glad you're going to do a sequel, because it's a really great story! That idea is really good too, I use it as well but I wait until my fan fiction is approved here first (so I know it's error-free enough lol). Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! And chapter 19 is in the queue at just over 6100 words so I hope you'll enjoy it when it's accepted! The sequel looks as if it's going to be quite a bit longer than this one and as for, I'll always post here first :)

Reviewer: littlemissperfect
Date: 06/26/05 12:54
Chapter: A Second Departure

I was just wondering if you post this story or other stories on any other sites. Your fiction is just amazing and i think you would be able to get a lot more reviews if you posted on another site as well as this one, like The updates are extremely quick on that site so we'd be able to read your story a lot quicker!!! Its just a suggestion, and a lot of superb authors do it and get more reads on their stories.

Author's Response: I'd never even thought about adding to actually; thanks for the suggestion! I'll sign up for an account but I'll still post on Mugglenet too :)

Reviewer: littlemissperfect
Date: 06/26/05 12:51
Chapter: A Second Departure

Wow!!!! i loved that chapter! You really shoed your writing talent!! i can't wait to see what happens, that was so exciting!!!! Thanks so much for your quick updates, i can't wait for more! :) 1010

Author's Response: Thanks! And hopefully the mods will have the next chapter up soon. They've been great so far with this fic with updating a couple of days after the last chapter was accepted. *Thank Alexis Taylor and Chelsea!*

Reviewer: ermine the one
Date: 06/26/05 12:21
Chapter: A Second Departure

Hey - wow! I clicked on your name to see what other fics you'd done and I found that A New battle is one of your fav fics. Thank you!! I think I might ... *busts into tears of happiness* ... Someone likes my story!!!!!
Tell you what, I'll stop buggin you now and let get on with life - I'm an annoying little fly, sorry, my parents call me Flydemort ... there I go again! Love your fics! I'm really going to leave you alone now - sorry.

Author's Response: How could it not be?! I think you've done a great job on it so far! Thanks for you great, entusiastic (lol) comments, er, Flydemort?!

Reviewer: ermine the one
Date: 06/26/05 12:05
Chapter: A Second Departure

Ooh! Excellent!! Update ... update ... gimme update!!!!!!!!!!! Damn validating for being so slow!!!!!!!!!!!! *kicks table, hurts toe, yelps in pain* I LOVE your writing, it's just simply ... EXCELLENT!! And now I need to know whats going to happen next! Hurry up Mugglenet, validate it, don't reject!!!!
Ahem, soory, I've calmed downa bit now ... I will definitely give a 10 for this, actually know, I'll give you a 20! In case you havemn't noticed, I love this story and your writing, and there is absolutely nothing I can criticise. Damn -

Author's Response: Lol! I take it that you're enjoying this so far?! :) Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon *shudders at the thought of curses being sent by email if there are no updates* and I'm kinda pleased, well, really pleased actually, that you've found no mistakes! ~Stormy x

Author's Response: Lol! I take it that you're enjoying this so far?! :) Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon *shudders at the thought of curses being sent by email if there are no updates* and I'm kinda pleased, well, really pleased actually, that you've found no mistakes! ~Stormy x

Reviewer: death of a thestral
Date: 06/26/05 5:19
Chapter: A Second Departure

glued to the screen! that was a great chapter, really exciting. update asap please!!!!

Author's Response: Lol! Chapter 18 is in the queue and I'm so pleased you like it!

Reviewer: Colin Creevey
Date: 06/26/05 4:27
Chapter: A Second Departure

You just got yourself another 10! How you do this, I have no idea. This is just like how JKR would write. I do think however, that Dumbledore is not being very nice to Snape. After everything Snape has done, Dumbledore lies to him. It's not nice.

I also see that you happen to like Euan Abercrombie, otherwise, you wouldn't have put him in the story so much. He's in my story too!

As usual, your several steps ahead. How do you get so many readers?

Author's Response: Thank you! That's a hell of a compliment *blushing*, and I'm really happy you seem to be enjoying it!

Euan isn't really a favorite character of mine, he was just a named character JK mentioned and I thought he'd be ok as the replacement Chaser, that's all. As for Snape and Dumbledore, Dumbledore's not lying really, he's just not telling Snape the whole truth which, incidentally, Snape isn't doing either.

As for how I get so many readers; I've got around 1500 reads for the first chapter and generally, people do seem to be reviewing. Maybe add a footnote at the end of each chappie saying thanks to those who review...?Hope that helps a bit!

Reviewer: padfootprongs4eva
Date: 06/26/05 0:49
Chapter: A Second Departure

really evil cliffie! i am soooo worried. anyway, awsome story so far and i really hope that u update is asap!!

Author's Response: Hopefully the cliffie won't be there for too long before chappie 18's up! It was submitted as soon as 17 was accepted and I'm so pleased you like it so far!

Reviewer: MrsHarryPotter
Date: 06/25/05 21:56
Chapter: A Second Departure

Bloody Brilliant! I love your story. Keep up the good work. Im looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Lol! Updates should be coming soon and hopefully the whole thing will be up before HBP!

Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 06/25/05 19:49
Chapter: A Second Departure

I love it! its amazing.. I even added u to my favourites... I love the part when u say "The bright sunshine and sapphire skies had been replaced with heavy, dense clouds "... Um I like the way u handle Harry's worries... Update soon

Author's Response: Yay! I'm pleased you liked the description in it and I'm honoured that you class this among your favs! ~Stormy x

Reviewer: witchxhunterxrobin
Date: 06/25/05 17:33
Chapter: A Second Departure

I loved it! I hope chapter 18 comes quick! This is definitely one of your best chapters! I also think it's great that you: 1) Update so quickly, and 2) Respond to everybody's reviews. Love, Robin P.S. 10/10!

Author's Response: 18 should be up soon and I'm pleased you think it's a good chappie! And I update as fast as the mods can accept them and as for responding to reviews, I think it's only fair I do since people take the time to review. Thanks for the 10!

Reviewer: MithrilQuill
Date: 06/25/05 15:38
Chapter: Trials and Suffering

Excellent...well everything, i wonder what the whole thing with Dumbledore going to the Atrium at the ministry was all about, sounds like Galadriel looking into her mirror, anyways i have to go now, will read the rest as soon as i can...Great story =)

Author's Response: Nope, nothing to do with Galadriel's Mirror at all; just me adding a bit of detail :) I'm so happy you like it so far and I hope you get the chance to read the rest soon!

Reviewer: pgeraci
Date: 06/25/05 15:31
Chapter: A Second Departure

Oh no, a cliff hanger... Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Good chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! And chapter 18 is in the queue so hopefully the cliffie won't be there for too long :)

Reviewer: grindelwald
Date: 06/24/05 13:01
Chapter: Floo Powder

That was a really amazing chapter, i really like the way you demonstrate harry's power. Keep it up, cant wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Thank you! And I hope that the wait for the next chappie isn't too long away; it is in the queue...

Reviewer: malko050987
Date: 06/24/05 4:20
Chapter: Hogsmeade

Finally! I've been trying to revoew this chapter for two days now, but I couldn't log in. This is a great chapter, it's good that Harry and Co have a break from the usual troblems. I don't have any guesses as to what happes next, but I'm sure you'll surprise me. Anyway, great chapter! Bye!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, and I'm also kinda pleased that you can't guess what's coming. I hope you'll like the next couple of chapters too, and thanks for trying to review! This log in thing is starting to get really annoying...

Reviewer: ermine the one
Date: 06/23/05 14:16
Chapter: Hogsmeade

Hey --- brilliant! I just read all the way through your fanfic and i am impressed. Favourite parts: the ones with Snape in!! I really like the way you've shown him as one of Voldemort's most trustworthy Death eaters (in Voldy's mind, obviously) and I can't wait unilt I can read more about him and Voldemrot nd what will happen to him when Voldemort eventually finds out!! Ooh!!! Good luck with your GCSE's (unless you've already finished them) - I've got them next year. *shudders*!!

Author's Response: Thank you! And if you like the parts with Snape, you should like the next few chappies :) The main Snape / Voldemort story is coming in the sequel. I've finished my exams *yay!* and good luck for your next year. They were all fairly easy this year so hopefully they'll be ok. The exams are the easy bit, it's coursework that I hate *I'm shuddering now!*

Reviewer: pgeraci
Date: 06/23/05 13:27
Chapter: Hogsmeade

Another nice chapter. I'm a big Ginny fan and always like to read about her. I don't know what the GCSE exams are but they sound important. I'm glad you are still finding time to write.

Author's Response: Thanks! And GCSEs are the main exams you take when you're 16; I took them in 11 subjects but I had the last exam yesterday :)

Reviewer: Lainie xox
Date: 06/22/05 16:39
Chapter: Hogsmeade

I love hearing Harry's full name, because it's just SO CUTE! Lol, I'm part of Harry's fan club, but at least I have respect for Ginny :). Awe, Harry and Ginny are just so cute, especially when you're writting it. I'm also glad there's been a break for Harry before anything devastating happens. Great writting, I can hardly wait for more!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so happy that you liked it and thank you so much for your encouragement, it makes everything seem worthwhile :) And there shouldn't be too long for another update - I've just submitted chapter 17 and chapter 18 and 19 are already written!

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