Reviewer: BloodFetish
Date: 12/17/06 12:50
Chapter: Christmas

Harry and Ginny. Very cute.

Reviewer: BloodFetish
Date: 12/17/06 12:00
Chapter: Not a Threat, But a Promise

I must say I am extreme-lee impressed! LOL I can't wait to find out how deep the plot gets!

Reviewer: BloodFetish
Date: 12/17/06 11:35
Chapter: Invisibility

Actually, I think it is a wicked idea putting Latin in your story. Makes it more realistic.

Reviewer: Mo0Blah
Date: 12/03/06 21:11
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

im glad i waited until this was finished to read it. or at least, i didnt find it until after you finished it :) not sure when you wrote this, but im assuming before book 6 came out. ive already read the 6th one, but i also liek your version of it. shows the different paths that it could have gone. instead of dumbledore, it was mcgonagall. i read this all today, taking quite a few breaks :) from what i see, youre an awesome writer. it was written in exactly the same way as the books, but in a condensed version. the only part that confused me what between two chapters....when snape healed harry's army in azkaban...did you rewrite that part, or was it for a memory jog?? well, now im going to go check out the sequel to this...hopefully its done becuase i absolutely hate waiting for chapters to come out :) once again, good job :)

Reviewer: L0ves Pink
Date: 12/02/06 17:33
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

Awesome story. Loved it till the very end. It took me only three days to read it all. And I was very pleased with every chapter. I can't wait to start your next one. Which will be right after I write this.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so please you enjoyed it and i look forward to hearing what you think of the sequel :)

Reviewer: cellodir
Date: 11/25/06 21:43
Chapter: The End of the Beginning


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 11/06/06 12:46
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

great Story. This is the first "angst/darkness" fic I have really gotten into. I love what you did with Snape. I look forward to reading the sequel.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Welcom to the darkside - there are loads of fantastic Dark/angsty fics out there so I hope there'll be plenty more that catch your interest! The sequel is being posted now and I really hope you'll like it.

Reviewer: Heroic Muse
Date: 08/31/06 20:48
Chapter: Floo Powder

Lovely style, reminiscent of JKR's. I also thought the characterization was well done.

I would have liked to have seen more of a reaction from the Dursleys when the OP members arrived, as opposed to quickly moving on to the next bit. This, however, is a minor concern.

Overall, well done!

Author's Response: To be honest, reading that chapter now makes me wince a bit! Lol, not the longest in the world but when I wrote it, I was trying to get the main plot across rather than struggling with the details. Still, I'm really pleased you liked it and I hope you'll like what's to come. ~ Stormy x

Reviewer: pheonix3000
Date: 08/15/06 13:34
Chapter: Floo Powder

I loved the kept me hanging around for 4 hours. I just could not let go... really amasing..

Author's Response: *blushing* thanks so much! To keep you hooked for 4 hours... lol, I just don't know what to say! ~ Stormy x

Reviewer: undrtkr
Date: 08/06/06 18:57
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

one of if not the best story in these pages
you have a calling

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so pleased you like it! :)

Reviewer: dashofmagic
Date: 07/30/06 16:42
Chapter: The Darkest Hour

My favorite piece of fan fiction by far!!!

Author's Response: I really don't know what to say except thank you so, so much - I'm grinning from ear to ear! :)

Reviewer: Fawkes_Gold_Phoenix
Date: 07/11/06 13:08
Chapter: Floo Powder

This is such good writing! I'm trying to write my own fanfics. I just hope they'll work out!

Author's Response: Thanks! And I'm sure your fanfics will work out - just if you're anything like me be prepared for many happy hours glaring at you computer screen willing a plot bunny to come from somewhere...

Reviewer: ShareeLenae90
Date: 07/10/06 18:58
Chapter: Not a Threat, But a Promise

I really like yor story. THe plotline is intersting. I like how you incorporate latin into your spells.

Author's Response: Thanks so much and I'm really happy that you liked the Latin too - I really enjoy adding it!

Reviewer: potter4220
Date: 06/24/06 23:29
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

GREAT story, I am happy with the ending. It is almost like JKR wrote this herself.

Author's Response: There's no higher compliment anywhere - thank you so much! ~ S x

Reviewer: Midnight Romance
Date: 06/23/06 19:26
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

Wow, that was really good! I'm surprised you wrote it without having read the sixth book- there were a lot of things that were the same, which I never would have thought of in your place. The devices (such as the Clamcelo) which you thought up were really inventive, as well as the spells. I really liked the way you managed to stay so true to JK's version of the characters. Whenever I try to write a fanfic, the characters end up being distinctively me-itized. I thought the explanation for what Snape was really doing was very believable. I was a little disappointed in Harry's lack of involvement in the ending fight, which was otherwise amazingly powerful. I was close to tears. I also loved how you managed to change Snape, while keeping him the same. Overall, great job!

Author's Response: Lol, I don't know where to start! Thank you so, so much for such a positive review - you've really put a smile on my face!

About Harry's lack of involvement, the ending of Darkest Hour was very, very nearly the ending that is now quietly tucked away for the Flame of Obitus. I promise you, you will see Harry involved but just... not yet :)

I'm so pleased you liked it though and thought that all the characters were in character. I hope you'll read on to the sequel and if you do, I'd love to know what you think!

~ Stormy x

Reviewer: potter4220
Date: 06/19/06 19:12
Chapter: Invisibility

The story was great, keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: SuthernChick67
Date: 06/18/06 19:29
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

Overall book was brilliant!! You are a really good should definitely continue writing if it is something you would like to do in life. Can't wait to read the sequel!

Author's Response: As so many people have said... lol, do you reckeon JK would lend me her characters to play with...? I hope you'll enjoy the sequel as much as you have liked this one - please do let me know what you think of it! Thanks for reviewing, ~ Stormy x

Reviewer: SuthernChick67
Date: 06/18/06 19:27
Chapter: The Three Attacks

You are doing such a great job!! Just wondering..when it says,"As if dreading the outcome, he pulled out his wand and muttered “Aldulterinus!” The parchment turned black and the red ink turned to a shimmering, burning green."
When the ink turns green does that mean that the writer is not a fake? Cause the other letter with Charlie the ink turned I kinda wondered if the ink turned red it means that the writer is a fake and if it turns green the writer is not a fake.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really pleased you're enjoying this so far :) And spot on about the ink - green means genuine, red means fake. I hope that clears it up ok ~ S x

Reviewer: jpkitty
Date: 06/17/06 23:46
Chapter: The Darkest Hour

good chapter, but i think i found a mistake. Isn't the riddle house in Little Hangleton, not Little Whinging.

Author's Response: Oooops! Thanks for pointing it out - I'll go and correct it asap! I'm so glad you're enjoying the chapter though :)

Reviewer: xXHermione_GrangerXx
Date: 06/17/06 0:59
Chapter: Floo Powder

Whoa! This is amazing. I'm writing my own fan fic based on my imagination of book 7, though, I'm having difficulties with this site but, I'll get it sorted.

Author's Response: Thank you! And good luck with your writing too, I'm sure it will be brilliant ~ Stormy x

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