Reviewer: albus_phoenix
Date: 04/27/06 12:35
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

This is the best fanfiction I know. I added you to my favourite list. I couldn't head myself off reading it despite the fact I should be preparing for the school leaving exams (and the tomorrow test).

I was totally intrigued from the beginning to the end. Your style is amazing. I hadn't known when the story was written so I supposed you started it pre-HBP and finished post-HBP. I got angry at you at the point when I found several scenes which looked like copied from HBP or at least inspired by it to a large extent (for example the scene where Harry is talking to Hermione about Ginny going out with other boys before him. Hermione says him that Ginny has never gave up on him.) I was absolutely flabbergasted after finishing the story when I realised it was actually written pre-HBP. I can't believe that you wrote almost all the chapters in just two hours. You have earned my admiration. Your characters are very believable and the story was gripping and deep.
I'm looking forward to reading the sequel now. Great work!

Author's Response: *mouth drops open and startsblushing/grinning like an idiot...*

Wow! Thank you!!! Lol, what can I say?! I'm so, so pleased you enjoyed it and as for being the best fanfiction you know... I'm stunned, and incredibly proud you think it's that good!

I really hope you'll like the sequel as much as you've enjoyed this one and thank you for such a brilliant bit of support and encouragement, ~ Stormy x


Author's Response: oh, and I forgot to say best of luck with your exams - *looks guilty at stopping you revising* - I'm sure you'll do fine and, er, have fun... :)

Reviewer: SherbetLemonJunkie
Date: 04/24/06 2:15
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

I have just finished reading the last chapter, and I can honestly say it's one of the best fan fictions I have ever come across. You have a talent of an author :o)

Author's Response: Wow - thank you!!! I'm so pleased you like it! ~ Stormy x

Reviewer: soccerbrat
Date: 04/23/06 13:25
Chapter: The Remittomissum Charm

that was so awesome. the way u described the pain could have been done a little better, like to have put in facial expressions ect ect, but vey good all in all!

Author's Response: Thanks! Constructive critism is always useful as it's so hard to criticise your own work... I hope you'll like the rest of the story too! ~ S x

Reviewer: soccerbrat
Date: 04/23/06 13:17
Chapter: Trials and Suffering

it was really ood! i loved how you captured the characters emotions and feelings of the situations! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so pleased that you liked how I conveyed the character's emotions as its something I've tried really hard to do as well as I can.

Reviewer: soccerbrat
Date: 04/23/06 12:49
Chapter: Floo Powder

that chap. was AWESOME!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: ginnysthebest
Date: 04/20/06 15:12
Chapter: Trials and Suffering

Really good writing! I'm totally enthralled, I almost stopped before the end of the chapter to tell you how much I liked it.

Author's Response: lol, thank you! I'm so pleased you like it so much - I hope you'll like the rest of it too :)

Reviewer: RobinIsley
Date: 04/20/06 14:19
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

One word: WOW!!!
This was an amazing story, I really like the 'peace treaty' between Snape and Harry. Please hurry up with your sequel!
Can't wait

RI

Author's Response: Thank you!!! And the sequel is in progress as I speak... :) x

Reviewer: Lurid
Date: 04/19/06 23:01
Chapter: Floo Powder

This isn't really a review, and I'd be happy tro delete if you ever get the time to answer it, but could you tell me why i can't read yor story? I went into your profile page and clicked on it there aswell as via the featured story link, but can't seem to be able to read it! There's just a blank space, and then the "review" option. =) Let me know if you knwo how to fix my problem, i really want to read this story!

steph ♥

Author's Response: To be perfectly blunt, I haven't a clue! Maybe it was just a server glitch...? Retry the featured story link and then try my homepage again. If both of those don't work, try emailing the mods to let them know there's a problem and if it still doesn't work, let me know and I'll email it too you. I hope that helps a bit and I'm sorry that its not working for you. No worries about deleting the review either - if someone else is having trouble too, this may help them too. Good luck and please let me know if you need any more help or when it works. ~ Stormy x

Reviewer: Lurid
Date: 04/19/06 23:01
Chapter: Floo Powder

This isn't really a review, and I'd be happy tro delete if you ever get the time to answer it, but could you tell me why i can't read yor story? I went into your profile page and clicked on it there aswell as via the featured story link, but can't seem to be able to read it! There's just a blank space, and then the "review" option. =) Let me know if you knwo how to fix my problem, i really want to read this story!

steph ♥

Author's Response: To be perfectly blunt, I haven't a clue! Maybe it was just a server glitch...? Retry the featured story link and then try my homepage again. If both of those don't work, try emailing the mods to let them know there's a problem and if it still doesn't work, let me know and I'll email it too you. I hope that helps a bit and I'm sorry that its not working for you. No worries about deleting the review either - if someone else is having trouble too, this may help then too. Good luck and please let me know if you need any more help or when it works. ~ Stormy x

Reviewer: _Hermione_Granger_
Date: 04/19/06 22:03
Chapter: Going Home

Amazing. you are a brilliant author!

Author's Response: *blushing* thank you! ~ Stormy x

Reviewer: 2luvhp4eva
Date: 04/19/06 12:07
Chapter: Unexpected Departure

is this voldermort calling him?

and was that dumble dore coming to figure out what happened?

idk im kind of like omg wth!

Author's Response: Yes, no, and I'm pleased you like the cliffie :)

Reviewer: 2luvhp4eva
Date: 04/19/06 11:56
Chapter: The Power of Suggestion

i like the little twist with cho wanting harry back

i also would like to know how you are going to make the connection between haryy and snape because that should prove interesting

Author's Response: There is loads more on the connection between Harry and Snape abd, most especially, in Flame of Obitus. Thanks for reviewing! x

Reviewer: 2luvhp4eva
Date: 04/19/06 5:21
Chapter: The Three Attacks

damn that was intense

omg that's way too harsh for someone to deal with

voldermort more creul in your story

Author's Response: Voldemort's not nice... I'm pleased you thought it was intense though - that was the intention :)

Reviewer: 2luvhp4eva
Date: 04/19/06 5:08
Chapter: First Game

oh damn! what the helll!? omfg now that was a shocker

even though you got that inHBP ya know some still think he's innocent and since ya know ya got him acting all nice to harry you wouldn't think that it would be him even though somehow you do

wow!

Author's Response: I really don't know what to say! Thank you so much for such an entusiastic comment and I hope you'll like whats coming.

Reviewer: 2luvhp4eva
Date: 04/19/06 4:52
Chapter: Unwanted Power

im a little confused by the whole yelling/outisde the office thing
is there anyway u can explain that to me

Author's Response: Sorry if it was confusing - Voldemort briefly possessed Harry and could control Harry's actions. Dumbledore told Voldemort to 'get out' and he did - the moment he left DD's office though, he broke the contact with Harry. Harry was ok but couldn't remember what had happened. Hope that clears it up a bit and sorry if I confused you!

Reviewer: 2luvhp4eva
Date: 04/19/06 4:43
Chapter: Not a Threat, But a Promise

ok whoa

i like how you just layed it out there and was like bam: the war has started

it makes u like want to jump back cause your like whoa but it was really good

i also liked that whole remedial potion jive
that was funny

Author's Response: I'm pleased you like it! The war is starting and it is going to be brutal. War has a high cost, I'm afraid... thanks for reviewing and I'm glad I made you smile too :)

Reviewer: sirius_s_child
Date: 04/18/06 19:24
Chapter: The Remittomissum Charm

amazing! i cant think of anything else to say, im just...completely bewildered!

Author's Response: *blushing* thanks!

Reviewer: Bon_Y_Bon369
Date: 04/18/06 5:20
Chapter: Accusations

Duh duh duh duuuuhhhh!! The plot thickens!

Snapey almost getting caught. Why does he have to be such a git to Dumbledore? Anyway,
Great Chapter. Lucius is such a prat! You never did return Draco to the school. Last we read of him he had slipped out the school front doors and away from the school. Can he apparate? Where has he been? Is he back in school now? Does he play some role in the betrayal of Snape?


Author's Response: Snape's a git to everyone! And Draco is back at school - he just went out for a little while. In truth, it was a bit of an abandoned thread that wasn't completely deleted but it does have some form of relevance - you'll see it later in Flame of Obitus. Glad you enjoyed the chapter thoguh.

Reviewer: Bon_Y_Bon369
Date: 04/18/06 1:19
Chapter: Unexpected Departure

What in the name of Jonah was that about??

Is Snape in trouble with Voldy? Maybe he should have used his pensive to remove the memory of his conversation with Harry about his Clamcelo. He better not tell Voldy!! Spy or no Spy. That would be wrong. LOL


Author's Response: Yes, in short. Voldy has an unfortunate habit of being paranoid and Snape got caught up in the middle (as usual). And a penseive isn't safe - it only makes a copy rather than securing it completely, hence my invention of the Clamcelo.

Reviewer: Bon_Y_Bon369
Date: 04/18/06 0:54
Chapter: The Power of Suggestion

Ughh...you're killin me with that H/G crap.
Anway, whooo hoo Occlumency with Snapey Poo! This is gonna be good!!! *snickers*


Author's Response: Ginny/Harry is both canon and important to give the story some filling out. There's planty of Snape/Harry action etc. and the romance is only touched upon. I hope the rest of the story makes up for the romance bits if you don't like them!

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