i agree with you....i love fred... lol i wanted to be named mrsfredweasley but you took it... THANKS
haha jk
your a good writer!
i loved it! i've been looking all over for stories like this! :) but your title gives it away. but overall: EXCELLENT! keep writing more like this please :)
ooo wow that must suck my friend is over her mumbling i think she dislikes who ever this story was in the POV of
~Dee-Dee ( simplyevil123) and friend ( Fred Wealsey fan-girl 4 life)
ooo wow that must suck my friend is over her mumbling i think she dislikes who ever this story was in the POV of
~Dee-Dee ( simplyevil123) and friend ( Fred Wealsey fan-girl 4 life)
Good, if not a bit... "juicy". Who was the girl with Fred?
I like it, but the ending is very cliche' and simple. I don't like the idea of it all being a dream.
I really, REALLY loved it. Honestly. And I think not knowing who the girl is, is better. Cuz we could imagine ourselves in her position. *winks* Anyways, I hope you make more stories cause this was a really good one!!
I really, REALLY loved it. Honestly. And I think not knowing who the girl is, is better. Cuz we could imagine ourselves in her position. *winks* Anyways, I hope you make more stories cause this was a really good one!!
A bit on the hokey side. Good descriptions and writing, but not much of a plot line. I found it rather annoying that I didn't know who the girl was, and you kindof gave away what house she was in by having Hermionie walk in at the end. All and all...meh...
Author's Response: well...not everyone can like it....^__^
umm.. why fred? whatever, it was still good. Who was the girl? You're a really good writer, you should write more!
Author's Response: why not fred? oh well..i guess i just picked him cause hes my fave character. the girl was no one in particular...thats kinda just up to the reader to think about. thanks...i really appreciate that u liked it and im planning on writing some more...^__^
to sexy for me... not that good at all.
Author's Response: oh well...^__^
WEEEEEH! That was awesome! I wish it woul have been real, tho. O well, 10/10!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks...im glad u liked it...^__^
OMG THAT WAS AMAZING! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! lol, as u can tell, i love that story! write more! write more!
Author's Response: omg...thanks for that extremely nice review...that totally just made my day...dont worry i definately am planning on writing more. i currently have a story being looked at...i hope it will get up...soon :)
I thought it was good, well written! I'm surprsied no one else has reviewed it. Not sure about the rating though, I would have expected "R" but it doesn't matter too much. You write really well, do we find out who the girl is?
Author's Response: hey...thanks for the review...ur the only one...:(...but yay at least i got one...lol..when i chose the rating i thought about putting as an R rating but i didnt think it was really that graphic or anything...oh well...and to answer ur last question...no...you wont find out who the girl is...thats up for anyones interpretation...
