Reviewer: GinnyPottterGranger
Date: 05/06/11 4:55
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

hah! loved it. in the books, you never have scenes like these, with these three as the group of girlfriends, like they really are(no "girl time"). really awesome job!!

Reviewer: loveismagicharry
Date: 04/08/11 18:31
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

This is adorable! Fluffy but in a good way, with strong characters (who are themselves very well) and lovely friendships that shine through. Anyways, I lurved this for a while. What's the German mean- anything? I tried to translate it, dork that I am, but couldn't really get much. Keep writing, this is great!

Reviewer: Kyouko
Date: 01/28/10 3:00
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

This is absolutely awe inspiring .. I would say awesome but that kinda sounds wierd in a review...meh, it was awesome. Could you write one about the prank they played on luna? please? with cherry juice on top?

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 05/17/08 17:10
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

lol! i loved it! there are very few people who can actually write a believable Luna, and u are one of them!!

Reviewer: loveismagicharry
Date: 10/10/07 20:26
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

Sequel!!!!That was so hillarious!!!I was cracking up it was so wicked!!!

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 03/04/07 17:15
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

I loved this! It was hysterical and I couldn't stop grinning!

Reviewer: unicorngirl22
Date: 09/20/06 14:50
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

Really funny. It looks like it goes on but it says that its completed. Oh well really cool story.

Reviewer: unicorngirl22
Date: 09/20/06 14:42
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

Really funny. It looks like it goes on but it says that its completed. Oh well really cool story.

Reviewer: Helios
Date: 09/19/06 17:48
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

haha...this is funny.

Reviewer: wendelin the wierd
Date: 07/12/06 9:54
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

This fic is amazing! I am quite sure I haven't read a fic like this before! It most certainly is one of a kind.

My, my, what wonderful grammar and extensive vocabulary! I had to look up a few words myself just to find out their meanings!

The grammar standard in this was very high and I absolutely loved it.

Hermione and Ginny looked at each other.

"German??"

Luna deftly tucked her pencil behind her ear and resumed sucking on her candy, her eyes riveted to the paper and seemingly oblivious to her friends' consternation.

"It's definitely not German, Luna," intoned Hermione once she realized Luna wasn't going to erase her answer.

Luna finally turned her gaze to Hermione's, her huge silver eyes twinkling. She said nothing, apparently content to stare at the older girl while sublimely sucking on her sugar quill.

Ginny giggled. "I have to agree with Hermione on this one, Luna," she said mirthfully, leaning forward so she could see past Hermione. "Germans might be renowned for lots of things, but I wouldn't say romance is one of them."

Luna continued to stare at both girls, her face devoid of expression as she rotated the slowly melting wand in her mouth.

Hermione raised a quizzical eyebrow as she turned to Ginny. The latter, for her part, was having trouble keeping a straight face, choosing to conceal her bubbling amusement behing her cotton candy. Hermione rolled her eyes and turned her attention back to the Ravenclaw.

"Luna, are you listening?" she asked, her lollipop now quite forgotten. "The answer's most definitely French. There's just no way it's German."

"You're a Germanophobe," proclaimed Luna matter-of-factly in between sucks of her licorice.

Hermione gaped at her. "I am not!" she blurted indignantly as Ginny fell back against the bench in a fit of laughter. "Luna Lovegood, you take that back! I am most certainly NOT a Germano "

She paused, thinking.

" phobe," completed Luna helpfully.


Now that is originality! I really loved the germanophobe part. One would expect things like that wih Luna. It was very in-character. (on Luna's part at least)

Alos I am quite sure that the spelling should be behind the cotton candy and not behing.

I found Hermione a bit OOC in the beginning but towards the later part she became in-character. And the last part was definitely the best but so was the middle and the beginning. *is undecided*

"The national symbol of the United States is the Bald Eagle!" exclaimed Hermione in exasperation. "NOT the Orangutan!"


Ok, this lead me to believe that this was a muggle crossword. But Luna is a pureblood, so how would she get her hands on it?

Anyway, this fic was simply fantastic. Excellent job!

Reviewer: Octopus
Date: 07/02/06 16:58
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

That is good. It is about Luna. I like Luna. She never considered Dutch for her crossword, though. That might be the language of romance, and it has six letters. It was nice of Hermione to admit about the crumple horned snorkack.

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 06/30/06 0:06
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

Aww. This story is kinda fluffy, but obviously not in a romantic way. I like that Hermione admits the Crumple-Horned Snorkack migh exist. Luna and Hermione should defiately spend more time together: they could learn a lot from their differences! Anyway... there should be more cute friendship fics like this one! It's really good! I also like the implied pairings (Ginny/Neville forever!!). And the spider comment by Harry. It's all really good. I'd love to see a prequel or something, maybe with the cherry juice incident?

Author's Response: Ahoy there! Thanks so much for th enice review! Actually, the cherry juice incident takes place in chapter 1 of my fic "Summer at the Burrow", which I'll posting up on here in the near future...stay tuned!

Reviewer: Mute swan
Date: 06/26/06 13:21
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

I am going to put you on my favourite authors list! That was exceedingly amusing. You must be very clever to be able totalk french AND german.

Reviewer: WannaBeMrsRonWeasly
Date: 05/13/06 13:41
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

Very funny story! Well written too, most funny stories are kind of stupid, yours is not. I'm going to go read your other stories now. Keep up the good work and maybe add a sequal.

Reviewer: lillyz
Date: 04/22/06 7:13
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

This was so hilarious!You had them all in Character and especially the crossword thing was super funny.And because I am German, the result was that I was crying in laughter.One thing: Germans can be romantic, too.That sounds like this:"Ich liebe dich, du bist das Licht meines Lebens.Ich will an deiner Seite sein."Not all German people are like the Bavarian.

Reviewer: wishiwereaweasley
Date: 02/11/06 15:44
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

I really enjoyed this a lot! I've never really seen the three of them as friends, but you kept them all in character and made them very believeable. The interaction between the three was very good. Your introduction of Luna, with a sombrero, magazine and licorice, is exactly like her. I can see her doing that. Also, may I say I've done that sort of thing with a crossword before and really enjoyed it?? I liked the French and German immensely...what does that translate to, out of curiousity? And poor Hermione's admission that the Snorcack might exist was very well done. Just the way she would have said it! A very well written and entertaining fic about friendship. Great job!

Reviewer: LadyAlesha
Date: 02/11/06 6:47
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

Lovely story. Having a wizard's fair is a brilliant idea, it's very unique. Same with the friendship theme, it's not as common as romance, so this was a nice change.

Luna, Hermione and Ginny are all in character. I especially liked Luna doing the crossword wrong, because school hasn't started yet. It's something I could actually see her doing. Ginny speaking French and German was hilarious, the German part more so than the French. I'm German, by the way, and German as the language of romance is really a strange thought.^^

Harry, Ron and Neville's reaction to the group hug was brilliant. I could just see them standing in front of me, looking anywhere but at their friends. Hermione's reaction to all the attention was also well done.

Reviewer: Puertorriquena
Date: 09/11/05 12:21
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

I really like this fic, but please update

Reviewer: pinkpixies101
Date: 04/20/05 18:03
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

this is the most pathetic story ever

Reviewer: redhead525
Date: 04/15/05 14:19
Chapter: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

Yay!! This is going to be an amazing story!! Update soon please!!!

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