This story has excellent diction, lots of meaning given in very short passages. It is ingenious really. Riveting, with never a dull moment. I love it!
I just want to say that I am immensely enjoying this story so far. I am a little unclear, however, as to why betraying Voldemort would save Snape? Could you clarify please? Thanks.
Very good. Love your work. I think you mentioned you had other stories you'd pulled off different sites. Are they posted any place else? Would love to read more of your work.
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Author's Response: Cannot upload on this site. All stories are located at fanfiction.net under Natasha Vloyski.
Nice read. Didn't like how harry called his elders by their first names just felt awkard. Other then that it was great.
Vloyski. Great. I love your style and being from india i luv the Roma inputs. Great simply. I am waiting for a new story. Please note.
That was a terrific story ... I adore the new characters, and the way they dupe Voldemort in the end. Wonderful!!!
I am really enjoying the story thus far. I love it when new and interesting characters are introduced in Potterverse. I truly am intrigued by Hannah and baffled by Peabody. I thoroughly love it!!!
Very nice slap. Seems like the author has offered up another possible plot. Hermione was magnificent. All thumbs up.
Again another very descriptive and enlightening chapter.The animagus plot line may get very interesting. Are we to guess that Harry will be a panther animagus as fierce as or more fierce than "Tom Riddle."
Any Hannah/Harry shenanigans put to rest, Severus outed, any Harry/Hermione relationship squelched., Ron back with the team, does it get any better than this?
Very nice. Love the contact lenses concept.
Severus and Harry peers. What a concept. No matter what happens, to me Lucius and Draco Malfoy will always be pigs. Very descriptive chapter.
Wonderful chapter. So much explained.
Harry exploding again..So Harry. Super interchange between Severus and Harry.
Didn't care too much for the seeming come-on Hannah was giving Harry. What is so interesting is the way Harry is testing his new skill. Also well planned story angles. Rock On!!
You have caught Harry so in character. Always ready to jump without thinking. The story is evolving so nicely. Kudos to you.
Nice description of Voldy. Very interesting story lines opening up. Severus has a girlfriend woohoo. Severus is one of my most favorite characters.
Wonderful chapter. Very interesting characters. A controlled vampire. Sweet. Awesome story.
This concept rocks. Very surprising that Harry put trust in Peabody so quickly. This story is flowing great.
