Reviews For Mysteries
Reviewer: Emerald Fox
Date: 06/27/10 3:39
Chapter: Ch 1 Homecoming

This story has excellent diction, lots of meaning given in very short passages. It is ingenious really. Riveting, with never a dull moment. I love it!

Reviewer: Emerald Fox
Date: 06/27/10 0:50
Chapter: Ch 9 Snape's Secret

I just want to say that I am immensely enjoying this story so far. I am a little unclear, however, as to why betraying Voldemort would save Snape? Could you clarify please? Thanks.

Reviewer: Gersknightlady
Date: 09/11/08 11:31
Chapter: Ch 21 Latcho Drom

Very good. Love your work. I think you mentioned you had other stories you'd pulled off different sites. Are they posted any place else? Would love to read more of your work.

nickismom1228@aol.com

Author's Response: Cannot upload on this site. All stories are located at fanfiction.net under Natasha Vloyski.

Reviewer: nckheinrich
Date: 07/25/07 3:48
Chapter: Ch 21 Latcho Drom

Nice read. Didn't like how harry called his elders by their first names just felt awkard. Other then that it was great.

Reviewer: Satyafakeer
Date: 10/23/06 9:56
Chapter: Ch 1 Homecoming

Vloyski. Great. I love your style and being from india i luv the Roma inputs. Great simply. I am waiting for a new story. Please note.

Reviewer: surrypotter
Date: 10/18/06 18:55
Chapter: Ch 21 Latcho Drom

That was a terrific story ... I adore the new characters, and the way they dupe Voldemort in the end. Wonderful!!!

Reviewer: surrypotter
Date: 10/16/06 17:39
Chapter: Ch 9 Snape's Secret

I am really enjoying the story thus far. I love it when new and interesting characters are introduced in Potterverse. I truly am intrigued by Hannah and baffled by Peabody. I thoroughly love it!!!

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 09/19/06 21:49
Chapter: Ch 14 Snape's Secret

Very nice slap. Seems like the author has offered up another possible plot. Hermione was magnificent. All thumbs up.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 09/19/06 21:27
Chapter: Ch 13 Friends

Again another very descriptive and enlightening chapter.The animagus plot line may get very interesting. Are we to guess that Harry will be a panther animagus as fierce as or more fierce than "Tom Riddle."

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 09/19/06 21:15
Chapter: Ch 12 Hermione's Kiss

Any Hannah/Harry shenanigans put to rest, Severus outed, any Harry/Hermione relationship squelched., Ron back with the team, does it get any better than this?

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 09/19/06 20:39
Chapter: Ch 11 Hermione's Hero

Very nice. Love the contact lenses concept.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 09/19/06 20:37
Chapter: Ch 10 The Malfoys

Severus and Harry peers. What a concept. No matter what happens, to me Lucius and Draco Malfoy will always be pigs. Very descriptive chapter.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 09/19/06 20:32
Chapter: Ch 9 Snape's Secret

Wonderful chapter. So much explained.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 09/19/06 20:31
Chapter: Ch 8 A Confrontation with Snape

Harry exploding again..So Harry. Super interchange between Severus and Harry.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 09/19/06 20:29
Chapter: Ch 7 Hermione's Disappearance

Didn't care too much for the seeming come-on Hannah was giving Harry. What is so interesting is the way Harry is testing his new skill. Also well planned story angles. Rock On!!

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 09/19/06 20:24
Chapter: Ch 6 Dinner for Three

You have caught Harry so in character. Always ready to jump without thinking. The story is evolving so nicely. Kudos to you.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 09/19/06 20:21
Chapter: Ch 5 Lessons Begin

Nice!!!!!

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 09/19/06 20:20
Chapter: Ch 4 Peabody's Error

Nice description of Voldy. Very interesting story lines opening up. Severus has a girlfriend woohoo. Severus is one of my most favorite characters.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 09/19/06 20:16
Chapter: Ch 3 Blackmoore and Hannah

Wonderful chapter. Very interesting characters. A controlled vampire. Sweet. Awesome story.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 09/19/06 20:13
Chapter: Ch 2 Harry Arrives

This concept rocks. Very surprising that Harry put trust in Peabody so quickly. This story is flowing great.

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