very good beginning...write some more and it be the best!!
oooh when's the next installment? It's developing really well!
i know its been awhile but you should keep going with this fic, it could turn out realy good, please keep going with it.
Well we know Hermione really loved him if she skipped all those classes and cried for days and has this endless fury towards the new couple. Oh I had to find her hatred funny though. As for Snape, a little OOC for him to be all polite about Hermione clenching angrily to his papers... but then he is human and maybe somewhere deep down he has feelings. I am looking forward to future chapters though. (I was reading other reviews...and I have seen them for other Hr/S fics...and dont you just love the people that say 'they totally do not agree with a Hr/S pairing but it will be a great story'...It makes me wonder why they read the chapter to begin with? But then I suppose a review is a review.)
I absolutely loved the technique you used in this chapter, the reader seeing what she wants to say but doesn’t. It worked really well because for me it was slightly humorous to see Hermione’s impatience with him but also heartbreaking because she still loves him. Also considering that this will become a HG/SS fic I think to have Hermione and Ron together at the beginning is much more canon… and you have definitely captured my attention. I want to read more. So I will go to the next chapter. Excellent work!
will you please update!!!! its so good, but i have been waiting forever fo rthe next chapter!!!!! please oh please update soon!!!!!
its def. added to my favorites...even tho i kno hermione and snape are going to be together when i want her so desperetly to be with ron...but then again, you wrote it well so i feel bad for her lol...if that made ne sense. good job!!!!
SO GOOD! OMG ITS REALLY GOOD!
Great story- you better add more soon! *hums some kewl waiting tunes*
Amazing. The story is the best I have read yet. Please keep updating it.
do u lnow wen the next chapter will be up?
like the story soooo much - its added to ma fav.'s. can't wait to see wat happens next! it has intrigued me.
*sniff* she could have made that relationship work if she just put some effort in because no relationship is good withoudt people having to work for it! she was taking the easy way out even though she still loved him! but then its all part of your plan for the story is suppose!
Author's Response: Well, Hermione can't very well get together with Snape if she's still attached to Ron, can she? *grins evilly*
I really like this one. I am just not sure about Hermione´s behaviour and sorrow. She seems to me like a pretty determined person - would she really broke up with Ron, if she had regreted it that much? Who knows? Maybe she would. That´s why I´m so curious what is happening next ;)
thats so sad! but it is also weird hoe Snape changed although i dont like the fact that a man old enough to be her father could be her boyfriend later but i think this will be a great story!
Oh, this is delightful...Poor Hermione, I can actually feel her conflicting emotions.
I've never read a Hr/S fic, I've just found it reeeally gross... But this one was so sweet and so sad at the same time, I just have to read the following chapters. Please update soon!
OMG - The ANGST here! Poor Ron! Great start and update soon.
Please keep this going. It was a great first chapter. What better way to begin a Hr/S relationship than end a Hr/R one. I loved it. Update soon! =)
aww keep it up!