Argh, that made me cry! Very moving story, I especially liked how you made one of Hermione and Ron's children named 'Harry.' *Sniff* *Sniff*
I cried. I think this says all the reasons why Harry can't die. I loved it. Beautiful story.
that was SO sad.
but beautiful.
it was lovely =]
That was an amazing story!! Absolutely incredible!! It was so sweet it made me cry...
IM CRYING!!!!!! okay, this was SO innacurate I almost stopped reading it. DUMBLEDORE'S DEAD!!! HARRY WON'T DIE!!! HIS FIRST KISS WITH HER WAS IN HIS SIXTH YEAR!!! HE ASKED HER OUT THAT YEAR!!!
this was a really sweet but sad story. great job
Damn you!! I cried again! This is the second time I read your story and I still scriked...
I can't cry propely though, my best friend is behind me and she will laugh that I am crying coz Harry is dead! I'm going to bed now I'm depressed
Clare
hi
where is the next stroy/chapter here?
jaci
This was so sad, I started crying. Ginny's emotions were really realistic, as were Ron's. This was incredible.
this is such a good story! it made me cry!
amazing. great job brought tears to my eyes. except in the 6th book Harry's knife melts....but in your story it says its in the box...maybe you wrote it before you read the book. but amazing story none the less.
Entertaining story. Even though we don't want Harry to die, I guess we should at least know that it could happen. Good job!
Entertaining story. Even though we don't want Harry to die, I guess we should at least know that it could happen. Good job!
aw.... soo cute... and sooo sadd.... i liked itt!! keeep up the good worrkkk!
Ohhhh my gosh this story was SO beautiful! I was so sad reading about Harry's death and the fact that he and Ginny were planning a future together. = (
But other than the plot, your writing style is also very good! Great grammar, spelling, etc. yay for you!
Ohhhh my gosh this story was SO beautiful! I was so sad reading about Harry's death and the fact that he and Ginny were planning a future together. = (
But other than the plot, your writing style is also very good! Great grammar, spelling, etc. yay for you!
What a sad fic, but really good! I really like that in the end she says she's coming home. That ties things together very well.
Also, Ginny's diary entry really sounded like Ginny; the ICness was great! I enjoyed having that memory in the middle of the diary, like a bit of narration. Though the idea of it sounds awkward, you really made it work!
Your writing is great, too. I really liked this one-shot!