"Why is it that we murder our heros?" That was a great line, really caught my eye. This was a great one-shot, and I saw that there was a sequel. I will definatly read that. This was one of the best fanfics on this site in my opinion. Just goes to show you that quality has nothing to do with quantity. Don't think I don't read those 31 chapter stories, but this 1 chapter...Well it was just great. 10! ~Ivy
This was a fantastic one-shot. Your writing is elegant and your characterizations are spot on. I really loved Ginny; she had the perfect amount of bitterness mixed in with her sadness. My favorite lines were "Dumbledore did, of course, because that's what internationally famous wizards do: go and give heart wrenching speeches when other internationally famous wizards die" and "People still call him 'You-Know-Who' even though he's gone for real this time, as though the name is going to bring him back. It makes me want to scream." Her whole journal entry was a great account of her emotions. The only thing that seemed a little off to me was Harry spining her around and Ginny kissing him after he asked her to Hogsmeade. It was very sweet, but it seemed a little fast, especially for Harry. Also, it ended with "Love, Ginny," so I wasn't sure if it was supposed to be a journal entry or a letter. But overall, it was very well-written and touching. Great job!
This story was absolutely beautiful.... I cried.... Loved it!!!
Nothing to say except that it was INCREDIBLY wonderful and touching. I love it.
I think this is one of the best one-shots I've ever read. It's thought through, well written and SO touching! You've captured Ginny's state of mind so nicely and the grief that Ron is still carrying. The whole scenery shows that life did go on without Harry, but that he is still missed beyond words. And, yes, I did cry. And I will when I read it again - it's a favourite.
So yeah....i cried.....but only a little bit..... this is a fatstic story and very well written but i hope it doesnt end here.... a sequel would be fabulous
Ok I amitt it I cried... like a baby, That story is so sad. But great job none the less.
thats so sad i had tears in my eyes, great writing why does that have to be a one shot ? but i guess thats better because i can never see ginny with anyone else so she would be lonly forever not reall but still. that was so sad
Wow. That's all I can say. This has definately got to be the best fan fic I have ever read. It made me cry, but don't worry, that's a good thing. I never even considered Harry dying untill now, and this really make you realize that anything is possible. Thanks for giving me such a great story to read. This really make me wonder if JK ever reads fan fics, or if she ever will. I think she would really love this, even if this is the way the book is going or not. I don't know what else to say except, thanks for the good cry.
I'm almost crying. Well no, I am crying. You just wanted the hurt to go away, for it to be better, for him to be back. It's just not fair. It was beautifully wriiten ad so very sad but she is coming back. Great one-shot :( I mean that in a good way, as in it's meant to be a smile but i'm crying.
That was excellent. You really brought a lot of emotion into the story. Ron's reaction to what he had read in the diary was great. Poor Ginny, what is a girl to do when the love of your life dies and you are 16. The one thing I think I may find missing is that I would believe Ginny's diary entries would have been a little more bitter than they were.
Author's Response: Thanks. :) I did think about making the entry a little more angry, but I thought she would probably still have been in shock.
very very well written... very very sad. I almost cried. But oviously to envoke that kind of emotion you had to have written it well. It was very sweet. 10/10
loved it...! well written....10~
omg I loved it! It really made me cry. Beauitfully written. Great job!
awwwwwwwwwwww................. it was so cute and so sad. in future, you should tell more about the kids and the dairy (including exerpts) it was really good!!!!!!!!!!!!! write more!!!!!! aussiehpfan
o my god. that was the best one shot ive ever read!!!!!!!!!!! you must continue though. i need more u almost made me cry too 10 10 10 10
This story is so sad. It almost made me cry. I hope it doesn't end up like that...... Anyway, great, well written story.