its a great intro to a good story. i would love to see the rest. you should wright it.
that's so sweet! I love Lupin, but hate Harry, but this story is so touching! Sorry, I finished the story a few minutes ago and I'm still crying. Well done!
That was very sweet...something I could definitely see Remus doing.
very nice! this is really great! nice job! 100-100
Oh that's so sweet but soooooo sad considering what happens in DH!
*sniff* great story!!
That's a good story! It would have been nice if that was how it turned out!
I really liked it. It was ......touching. : )
I love the idea of Lupin becoming a parental figure to Harry, particulary after the end of book 5 and it was rather disapointing when Lupin didn't become that.
Very well writen, you did an amazing job adding one more story to the very small number of Lupin/Harry fics.
My only complaint is that Lupin openly said he wanted to step into Sirius's shoes- generally, when someone is greiving, the last thing they want is for somone to act as though they (or anyone else) could be the person they lost and Harry behaving as though he wanted that threw me off a little, as did the hug which seemed a little over the top. Otherwise, great job!
Aw, this was sad! I liked this one shot; keep up the good work, and it'd be cool if you continued it.
I loved it. I was hoping that Remus would sort of step in as Harry's parental figure for Sirius after Sirius died. I was kind of disappointed about this part of HBP. But thanks, as it gave this what I needed! Very well-written. :)
I didn't cry but it was touching and I liked how Remus really showed Harry how much he cares for him.
BEAUTIFUL! ABSOLUTLY BEATIFUL!
Beautiful! Absolutely amazing... keep up the good work!
OMG!!! Sweet much? Loved it.
i love it. it made me cry. and i don't usually cry
I loved this, it was so well written!
it was excellent. i actually cried. and i thought i had become immune to that type of fanfiction. you did good, man, you did good