i love it! nice one! now, give me that cookie.
~'Just Because' et 'Quit Hanuing Me Will You?'
hahahahahah wonderful! I really liked it.
it was a little short now wheres my cookie t don't have all day!
I really enjoyed this story! It fun fun and realistic. Did you write the summary before the story? Cause it wasn't really about what she was thinking about. But it was over all pretty good!! Very real, and highly amusing (loved Sirius's speech!). This was a very nice one-shot, though I'd have liked it to be longer...
interesting...i don't exactly see why it was called "musings of the bride", and it was short, but overall it was pretty well-written, and i loved the disclaimer!
I think it was pretty good. Not sap sappy, as a lot of them are, not too much humor, as then it seems unreal, but just right. I really liked it.
*Lol* Donkey, goat, and electric green monkeys. I also think you rushed the ceremony. Otherwise, very, very good. I just wish you could write more to it.
lol, I liked the whole dueling club bit, so realistic. Sirius's goat speech thingy was amusing, although I'm not sure I quite get it all, I'll have to go back and re-read it a couple of times :) Er... critism... um.. I think you raced through the ceremony a bit... I would've liked a little more detail on that... but all in all great job :) I can't wait to read more of your fics, if you intend on posting anymore :)