Reviewer: fawkes_07
Date: 02/04/08 11:30
Chapter: One shot

Your stories are all such a pleasure to read.

Reviewer: samiseriouslyam
Date: 01/25/08 0:21
Chapter: One shot

This is excelent. Really good. I love the plot and all the references you've wound in. And your descriptions are wonderful.

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 01/21/08 8:31
Chapter: One shot

Nice. Great story.

Reviewer: StellaSirius
Date: 01/09/08 17:17
Chapter: One shot

This is, quite possibly, the most beautiful thing I've ever read. It almost made me cry. Severus was completely in character, and I wanted to hug him. It's amazing how you can explain so much without telling us. You showed us instead. This deserved to be featured- I'd read it before, but never reviewed. I just wanted you to know that you've brightened up someone's day with your story of these two. Or three, I suppose.

The only thing I have to say negatively, is that Lily seemed ... I dunno ... conceited? Yes, conceited. It was like she thought she was special, higher than everyone else, almost. 'Yes, I am blessed. Yes, magical dresses seek me out because /I/ am marvelous.' Maybe I was the only person who got that feeling. But I did.

Overall, such a brilliant story. I loved it. Loved it.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/01/08 20:04
Chapter: One shot

Very nicely done. You put alot of thought into your work.
The dress Snape made for Lily sounds beautiful, although she never really had the chance to fully apreciate it, until her passing.
A wonderful story!

Reviewer: blackoleander7268
Date: 12/25/07 2:17
Chapter: One shot


Reviewer: Irridescent
Date: 12/23/07 11:16
Chapter: One shot

I just thought I'd let you know that this story is one of my all-time favorite fanfics.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 12/20/07 16:34
Chapter: One shot

Your story is wonderful, you must like it even more now that DH has come out and you see Snape's true thoughts about Lily.

Reviewer: peevesie
Date: 12/19/07 4:16
Chapter: One shot

WOW!! this really is a work of art....excellent story...hope to see more of your stories!!

Reviewer: fairies_r_coming
Date: 12/13/07 16:34
Chapter: One shot

wow that was really good! i dont think ive read a oneshot fanfic that good ever!

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 12/09/07 15:56
Chapter: One shot

Vey beautiful, very powerful.

Reviewer: Merlynne
Date: 12/08/07 14:58
Chapter: One shot

This is a beautiful piece, that reads like poetry. Every line is beautiful, and there are no moments that stand out because you have put so much attention into each so that they are all perfect. I'm somewhat at a loss for words. Great work.

Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 12/06/07 21:15
Chapter: One shot

Wow that is very good! Good writing and very unique story line. I can't believe you guessed at the Snape-Lily relationship (unrequitted love), even before Order of the Phoenix, let alone Book 7! Nice.

Reviewer: Leahr
Date: 12/06/07 21:01
Chapter: One shot

Well! You've edited this since I saw it last. I thought that I had reviewed it, but apparently I haven't. Congrats on being featured, it deserves it. The piece actually makes you feel sorry for Snape, and I like the literary allusion touches. The whole idea of the lining and the way it is obtained, how James kept his secret- all very excellently done and interestingly thought out.

How did snape save harry's life earlier without knowing? I wasn't clear what you meant.

Great piece!

Reviewer: tha_looney_one
Date: 08/04/07 12:59
Chapter: One shot

this almost made me cry, and thats saying something. you have a real aptude for writing, you might want to carry it into the real world.

Reviewer: Fabula_propono
Date: 10/29/06 16:40
Chapter: One shot

I wish I could be poetic and try and describe how innately beautiful this story is. However, I won't even attempt, as you would probably start rolling on the ground laughing.

So, I can only say that you have written something more beautiful than I could ever dream up, and more poingnant than I could ever feel. Brava.

Reviewer: relichunter18
Date: 07/30/06 20:53
Chapter: One shot

That was so sad- Snape never gets a break aside from happy fan fics, does he? The poor man.

Reviewer: GreyLady
Date: 05/10/06 20:47
Chapter: One shot

I am inclined to pity Snape but for my dear DD. *sigh* But this is a wondeerful idea that was obviously well-thought-out. Brilliant summary. It's always great when someone tries to change things up a bit.

Reviewer: songbook99
Date: 03/19/06 3:12
Chapter: One shot

This was a very entertaining story based on a very original idea. I really loved the idea that Snape would have done something so secretively for Lily, especially since he knew he could never give it to her or let her know it was from him. You do a really good job of portraying Snape and keeping him in character. I also like the way you build James' discovery of what he was doing into his hatred of James. My only problem with this story was that sometimes the punctuation seemed to make it really choppy. That usually only happened in the short paragraphs, but it did get a little distracted. Aside from that, though, I really enjoyed reading this whole story. It really made me reconsider the way I perceived Snape. Your ending was probably my favorite part of the story because it was so touching and really tied the whole thing together.

Reviewer: Ariana Archer
Date: 06/01/05 16:20
Chapter: One shot

Wow. that was really good. Well written, and so... human. I love it, I really do. Thank you for writing such a touching story

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