Reviewer: isadora duncan
Date: 05/15/11 8:58
Chapter: The Beautiful Friendship Begins

I LOVE it! ! ! ! But maybe that's just because I love Lily and James.

Reviewer: ourloveistruex
Date: 04/26/11 16:31
Chapter: Picking Lilies

As much as I love this story, there are so many things that are wrong..just the main facts that have been mentioned in the Harry Potter series. At the time, not all facts were revealed of course yet the fact the Voldemort looks like a snake in this just drives me crazy. He still looked like Tom Riddle during this era, as the transformation happened during Harry's fourth year at Hogwarts.
I do love the story, and I love your writing style. I have been giggling like a madman at all the fluff.

Reviewer: maddylovegood12345667
Date: 04/25/11 11:49
Chapter: The Beautiful Friendship Begins

love it! this is my 3rd time reading it!

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/23/11 18:03
Chapter: The Big News

all i am wondering is who grace's father is

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/23/11 13:56
Chapter: A Visit To Azkaban

hmm i actually like Cole. I beleived him guess i have poor judge of character.

Reviewer: i love james p
Date: 04/16/11 17:51
Chapter: Going Under

i just read the announcement at the top of this page and have formed a hypothisis. i think that venus may have murdered prof. dunham. she may have done this so she can bring voldy into the school, therefore letting him kill the one that was prophesised to be his downfall.

Reviewer: i love james p
Date: 04/16/11 17:50
Chapter: Going Under

i just read the announcement at the top of this page and have formed a hypothisis. i think that venus may have murdered prof. dunham. she may have done this so she can bring voldy into the school, therefore letting him kill the one that was prophesised to be his downfall.

Reviewer: i love james p
Date: 04/16/11 17:46
Chapter: Anytime

i think that james is just like harry in the order of the phoenix, yet james handles it better.both didn't want to go to dumbledore asthat would give the teacher the satification of knowing that she ahd hurt them. also, for a brief period james seems to thinnk that he's alone, which is similiar to harry's scenario but harry takes a lot longer to shunt the thought away.

i know i might be pointing out hagrid on the 1st of September, but i do think that this a genius piece of writing and i'm really bored, so i had to write a comment.

btw, i'm not bored of ur story. i found this story because i was bored.

Reviewer: i love james p
Date: 04/16/11 7:24
Chapter: James is from Mars, Evil is from Venus

just finished that page
that was excellent
can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: i love james p
Date: 04/16/11 7:09
Chapter: James is from Mars, Evil is from Venus

i love this. i just registered than so i could comment on this. i love james, he is so awesome.i think that this venus teacher is sort of like moody (or barty crouch jr), the carrows and umbridge put together. moody because of the fact that she is teaching the unforgivable curses. the carrows, and snape for that matter, because they are forcing the kids to actually use the unforgivable courses. and umbridge simply because they are both completely evil, although umbridge was a lot less hands-on. keep in mind that i haven't even read all of the this chapter and it is late so my mind isn't working very well, but i thought that sirius getting married was a bit random. it seemed ... not uncalled for, but not really what i would expect the young or old sirius to do, as i've always imagined him as a free man, or he should be one. don't get me wrong though, this ingenius. i love mugglenet and just found this fanfic part of the site. i read a few others but they weren't as good as this. i love james now, but i don't really imagine him as he was portrayed in the pensieve in the fifth movie, though. i've had my mind set on the original series but i like this. thankyou for opening my eyes up to harry potter just that step more. i will never be able to watch or read about lily without thinking about this.

can't wait to read the rest of it (sorry about being so informal, i just can't be bothered)

Reviewer: Sirius-ly Marauder
Date: 04/09/11 9:02
Chapter: The Beautiful Friendship Begins

omg this story is the best one i've read yet. i love all ur stories... potter's charm, catch my fall... your my fav fanfic author!

Reviewer: melmelplaya
Date: 04/07/11 17:48
Chapter: Moving On

i think you should write another story about after hogwarts and about harry's short time with living parents

Reviewer: melmelplaya
Date: 04/07/11 12:57
Chapter: A Night To Remember


Reviewer: melmelplaya
Date: 04/05/11 15:59
Chapter: The Beautiful Friendship Begins

its ok not the best

Reviewer: Potty4Weasley
Date: 03/30/11 11:40
Chapter: More Drunken Tides

I am loving it!! The Halle/ Sirius part is so sad! And I love the James and lily saga, also how you've shown how wormy goes bad. Just sone feedback: I'm suprised janes isnt more upset about his family, will there be a funeral? And I think they would be more shaken up about fighting voldemort.. I like how you bought the mirrors into it, and the dream ect ties in with the later story. I love it, it's totally awesome! Also it explains why Sirius never got married. This is just my review so far, I'll keeep reading!

Reviewer: llilli
Date: 03/14/11 23:59
Chapter: Clouded Feelings

I know this has probably been said already, but Katy and Remus have seemed so reserved and "by the rules" until now. Especially Remus. The image JKR created was definitely quiet and the role model.
Sorry, but I really needed to mention that.
But on a lighter note I really do love this story A LOT :)

Reviewer: Wade_Lovegood
Date: 03/09/11 18:33
Chapter: The Beautiful Friendship Begins

just so you know when james and lily were in school, proffesor dippet was headmaster, dombledore was the transfiguration teacher.

Reviewer: Once Upon A Malfoy
Date: 03/06/11 11:42
Chapter: She Returns

I loved this chapter deeply. (: This story is the best Maurader era based one I've ever read! Personally, I love all the chapters- I like your writing style as well. I'll definitely read Potters Charm after I finish this story. :D

Reviewer: weasleygirl3
Date: 02/25/11 13:37
Chapter: Fall To Pieces

All i can say is WHAT! I should have seen it coming

Reviewer: maddylovegood12345667
Date: 02/22/11 23:53
Chapter: Moving On

i loved "I have gone deaf and did'nt hear a thing".
Umm, i love Draco and Luna.
Halle!! I love that name its unique.
Cole and Venus. those cold-hearted bastards.
I love all Sirius's funny parts. hes hilarious!! you played him! :)
Funnies. and Sirius.
All of them. Lily and James had their ups and downs. Halle and Sirius were funny. and Remus and Katy were sweet. I cant think of any. Great book. Write more!! it was fluffy and cruel at the same time. Loved it! I read it all night!!

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