that was beautiful. i love the sirius/halle relationship
that is so cute. =]
that was brill =]
i love the last line. "i know they would never let me down". it makes me so sad that Peter let James down though, years after. =[
i love it! =]
good goood goooooood =]
This is one of the best fanfic I think. It is complete........Catch my fall is the best.....i think u r going to be a great writer.....ur description of things is super. Please do write more fanfics.
Loved the story... Its really cool...
Hmmm... it seems interesting so far. You've really captured Lily (I am reading the 1st chapter right now)
i like the story, but it's a bit too mushy and the characters use the word 'babe' too much. i also think lily was more friendly with snape than you put it. but i think the story is good and very romantic. i enjoyed quite a bit.
Quote: “Well, duh, I am a dog. WOOF WOOF,” he said, getting on all fours.
Definitely ... Halle
When they got drunk, and the ending. Both were so good!
Lily and James's life together, as well as what happened to Halle and Katy.
My favorite couple was James and Lily.
Venus was waay to evil.
Wow. *burns Cole at the stake* i have to stop but I dont wanna! Great story!
Wow. Sorry about not being lengthy, I wanna get this finished soon. I can't believe the ending. james is being stupid. Great!
Wow. I haven't watched the OC, but i hate Cole. Lily, don't do this. Lol. Good story!
Wow. This makes me sense trouble approaching! Roller coaster ride! woot! Great!
Wow. Nice. Great. Awesome. Wonderful story!
Whoa. Nice. Great Story! :)
Wow. You really have a roller coaster of a story. Fluff, danger, tragedy, fluff, danger, tragedy. Wow. Great :)