Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/22/08 16:47
Chapter: Bitter Heartache

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE tell me Harry will be mentioned soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/22/08 16:43
Chapter: The Truth

I hope she is foced to rot in azkaban with nothing but the memory of James father turning her down for the rest of her life !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( I really hope i didn't sound to heartless just now )

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/22/08 16:33
Chapter: The Mirror

Thank god that shes finished ........

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/22/08 16:26
Chapter: She Smells Fear

THAT EVIL (and because i can't actully say it ) FEMALE DOG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (pardon my french)
SHE DESERVES TO ROT FOR ALL ETERNITY NOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/22/08 16:18
Chapter: Going Under

What is that crazy, bisaed, broad, going to do to them (please excuse the language, i just really don't want anything to happen to them...............)

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/22/08 16:01
Chapter: James is from Mars, Evil is from Venus

OH MY GOD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HOW DID SHE GET OFF!!!!!!!
AND WHY DID DUMBLEDORE DARE HIRE HER !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/22/08 15:52
Chapter: Fall To Pieces

Venus Adams is the most EVIL, BIASED Teacher in this story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What is her issue !?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/22/08 15:45
Chapter: Venus Adams

Who is Venus Adams and what does she have against James family ?!?!?!?!

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/22/08 15:14
Chapter: Sybll's Secret

These chapters aren't all that bad, but what did Lily do in her fourth year ?

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/22/08 15:02
Chapter: Change of Heart

Jealous much ........

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/22/08 14:53
Chapter: Spirit Broken

Whats up with the two girls that Lily was talking to ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/22/08 14:36
Chapter: Picking Lilies

Nice Idea with the dance ....
I do feel bad for Sirius though. He probably wanted to cut his tounge out when he figured out that it was Bellatrix.
and that graveyard was the same one Harry was fought Voldemort in, in his fourth year.......

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 17:36
Chapter: Meeting with Dumbledore

I like the plot so far as well as where the story is headed

Reviewer: ginnyseeker
Date: 06/20/08 7:54
Chapter: Moving On

I like your story. Uh, I'll just answer a few of the questions.

My fav JKR created character is Lily. My fav OC is Katy. I hated Venus the most. My fav couple is James/Lily.

Your fic is really good. I can't wait to read the sequel. :D

Reviewer: reader_alex13
Date: 06/16/08 9:44
Chapter: Gossip

one of the funniest chapters i have ever read.

Reviewer: reader_alex13
Date: 06/13/08 21:16
Chapter: More Drunken Tides

so that's how it happenned.

Reviewer: Ren Shire
Date: 06/10/08 16:16
Chapter: The Beautiful Friendship Begins

cool! good job! i really enjoyed it

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 05/20/08 12:31
Chapter: Moving On

Very good. I'm definitely reading the sequel.
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Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 05/20/08 12:20
Chapter: The Big News

ooo..

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 05/20/08 12:14
Chapter: Goodbyes

Aww!
I feel a tiny bit sorry for Venus now...

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