So far I think this story is fabulous and really well-written! I can't wait to read more!!
AAAH!!! James was chaser not seeker!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and sorry but sirius quidditch captain?? we were never even told he was on the team but to make him quidditch captain?!? seriously!! the story itself is good though sorry for ranting!!!xxx
hey...that's evil!!
they deserve each other!!
Such a great storyline, and then when you mention all the prophecy business it gets confusing. You seem to just be taking the Harry/Voldemort prophecy and turning it to James/Voldemort. I think maybe its just my complicated mind getting confused though. Great storyline.
the ch. title is so cute i love sirius/serious things even though i sound lame
you're right kill those idiots (Cole and Venus)!!
you really shouldn't have done that. I feel realy sorry for James and yes i hate Cole.
Question One: Too many to count
Question Two: JAMES!
Question Three: Halle
Question Four: Cole is soo creepy. Thanks for making James punch him :]
Question Five: The ending chapter with Sirius' speech was so cute
Question Six: Harry/Ginny romance!!!!
Question Seven: It would be James and Lily, but they fight too much, so probably Remus and Katy
Question Eight: A little too much fighting between James and Lily
All I can say is awesome work. I read the whole fic in a couple hours. You had me so captivated it was crazy. I will most DEFINITELY keep an eye out for "Catch My Fall."
Peter still betrayed Lily and James. Like I'll be able to forgive him. All his friends died fighting the Dark Side.
That was an amazing story!!!!!
I never thought it would be possible to write such a long story (60 chapters to be exact)
I would just like to congratulate you on your terrific work and I am looking forward to reading your other fan fiction stories!!!!!!!
i hope i enjoy them as much as i did this one!!!!!!
Congratulations once more keep up the wonderful, exciting, extremely catchy and lovely stories!!!!!!!!!
BEST OF LUCK IN THE FUTURE FOR THE FAN FICTIONS!!!!!!!!
favorite quotes: ”I love you Lily Evans, and you hurt me. But it hurts more to ignore my feelings,” James said.///“Katy Jones, you’re my new hero”
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JKR character: James Potter
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OC: Katy
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Venus
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James paused to look into her eyes. She was glancing nervously at him and then at her feet. He knew this was not an easy thing for her to do. /// Oh Miss Evans, you’re in for it now,” James said. He grabbed her waist and began tickling her. She started laughing and James laughed in spite of himself. They looked so happy together.
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favorite couple: James and Lily (evidently lol)
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sirius married...? what the-?
but its ok
great!!!! just-perfect. really, i love it
i knew it! he is so like oliver!!! bt6w i love this story :D
Wowzah! This fic was off the hook. Now, my favorite quote was “Seven years ago, I didn’t even know your name. Now, I don’t know where I’d be without it,” My favorite JKR created character: definitely Sirius. He's extremely funny and immature. Thats what's so cute about him. Hee Hee! My favorite OC character would have to be........Katy! She has a lot of spunk and that whole nobody messes with my buds kind of attitude that I like. Although Grace Adams came pretty close. The villain I hated most...hmm.....it'll have to be Venus Adams , the big piece of scum. My favorite chapter:He loves ya Lil. I believe it's when Lily first started to realize her love for James. I wish to see how James proposes to Lily and how they get through the war together in the next fic. My favorite couple would have to be Lily/James or I would'nt be reading this fic, now would I? I think they have a lot of ups and downs, but that's their thing, that's what keeps their relationship in place. Story-related I personally think James should have been made a virgin. It's just my opinion, though. It really doesn't matter, I guess. Just how I felt.
When are Lily and James going to be married !?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!??!!?!??!?!?!?!?!???!!??!?!?!?!??!?!?!?:!?!?!?!??!?!?!??!?!?!??!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!?!!!!!?!?!?!?!?!?
Cole is an evil, lying, osessed, stalker, GIT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That stranger is that Cole kid right.
Or if your following the original storyline its Snape
Why can't he learn to shut his mouth....?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Its is majorly screwed up that Lily turned James down, but I know (hope) that they'll get back together. I mean if they didn't what would happen to Harry
