Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/30/08 18:24
Chapter: Poetic Engagements

darn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HAVE TOI GO!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/30/08 9:31
Chapter: Lily and Prongs Ride Again

niceee.....not amazing but niceee....

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/30/08 9:26
Chapter: Gossip

ill deffiently read the other stories no question! this chapter was very emotional and i probably would have done the same as Halle and Lily did if it was me....u inspired me to write fan fic! im deff. going to do it when i finish this book.!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/29/08 21:48
Chapter: Bitter Heartache


Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/29/08 21:43
Chapter: The Truth

tricky..........................tricky...................................... i cant really think of any other word to describe it.....

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/29/08 21:34
Chapter: The Mirror

the mood has changed so much through all these chapters, if i had read the first chapter, then this oneit would be so different! thats not bad, its goodish...i love this story and can't wait to read more

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/29/08 21:18
Chapter: She Smells Fear

AHHH!!!!! KILLL HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHGG!!!! sorry i needed to get that out..i am u should be proud...u deffiently deserve it! that was a maracoulious chapter!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/29/08 21:10
Chapter: Going Under

cliffie!!!!!! nicee!!! i love cliffhabgers...even if they do mkae me annoyed! u have seen me comment so much and i hope u dont mind that im doing it after the book (or story w/) is done! i love it and will remeber it forever!...corny much?

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/29/08 16:35
Chapter: Anytime

sorry i couple reviews ago i said two marriges theres only bad...very good in certain ways, ya no what i mean?

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/29/08 16:30
Chapter: James is from Mars, Evil is from Venus

my predict. was wrong review: good.................................... thats all i can say

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/29/08 16:19
Chapter: James is from Mars, Evil is from Venus

ok i just read the part where James said "this can't be good" nothing more or less...not even the authors note...i willl make another review once im done i have a prediction: Venus Adams has VOLDEMORT ON THE BACK OF HER HEAD!!! Just a predict of course...i will review when i finish..i can tell this will be good

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/29/08 16:13
Chapter: Fall To Pieces

Well, that's two marriges, but they are in 7th year...right? A lot has happened and I have so many questions that I am going back to look for because I think they have answers....What happened to Voldemort? Who was that crow? What about the dream? And WHAT ABOUT PETER AND THE DEATH EATER CLUB?!!? This chapter had suspense, grimaces, tears (not really) and sighs of relief this is one of the best Fan Fics I've ever read...although thats not saying much because I've only read 2! LOL!!! Still, it's supercalafragileisticexpealadocious!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/28/08 19:03
Chapter: Venus Adams

the charcters are larger and life...i would have just kept on kissing....well maybe not exactly what u call "mature" anyways...what am i talking about? i can get so off topic! anyways the review: the charcters are larger than life...its like a reallly old Dolores Umbridge!

Reviewer: Lily6161
Date: 08/28/08 18:21
Chapter: Homecoming

Yay! Lily and James are together, Halle's back, and Halle and Sirius are together!!!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/27/08 18:58
Chapter: Homecoming

very good...not too much action but it suits itt.....and what does OC stand for?

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/27/08 15:32
Chapter: She Returns

yes!!! we got Halle back!!! we have Sirius's happiness back! those are my two favorite people....Sirus should be very happy as I am, I am so happy Dumbledore decided on that. I am making a prediction that someone ver y important (the Minster of Magic, Dumbledore, one of the 6 main charcters, etc.) get sick and they don't have the potion...just a prediction of course. Anyways, this was one of the best chapters, especially the end. I was almost reduced to tears when I heard what Halle's first words were...."I love you too, Sirius"

Reviewer: SkylerMalfoy
Date: 08/26/08 21:49
Chapter: Dreams

so sad

Reviewer: SkylerMalfoy
Date: 08/26/08 20:39
Chapter: Memories Not Forgotten

Awww. Cute!

Reviewer: SkylerMalfoy
Date: 08/26/08 20:27
Chapter: Lakeside Drama


Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 08/26/08 16:05
Chapter: Mistakes

30 chapters left.......i didn't pertuculy like the last few chapters...i cant wait to hear about Lupin's transformation though!

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