Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/04/08 15:12
Chapter: Revealed

poor Grace! she was noble, brave, and strong! she had been through so many torments in her life, and disappointments, yet she stayed strong. She grew up with a horrible mother, but died to save Katy. And, well, I am so mad at Cole at the moment! I will never say he deserved what he got, but, sigh*. I dont no what to think. BTW!!! i just got so many of my friends to go on fan fic, and told them to u were a brilliant author, so maybe theyll read this boook!!!..............I love this book!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/04/08 15:03
Chapter: Vengeance

im doing my thing to review!!! i cant help wondering if u read this, even tho the book is finished! im so sad and happy that the book is almost at a close, i love it and never want it to end. I will read the sequel and always remeber this as my second fan fic.

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/04/08 14:49
Chapter: A Visit To Azkaban do I put this delicatley to u....once again....KILLL COLE!!!!!!!!!!! Venus deserved what she got so even though I hate her with the etensity of a million burning suns, I feel she deserved what she got. She will rot in Azakban with the dementors feeding on every happy thought that she posseeses draining her of all cheerfullness. Then, she will slowly turn mad, and die there. Woa, a little to deep. As for coal, feed him to the giant squid! How dare he??? Liking Lily, and still carrying on with his plan?! If he truly loves her, he wouldnt want to hurt her, even if it means sacrificing her to James. If he really loved her, like James did, then he would be happy to see her with a guy she loves so much.

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/03/08 16:57
Chapter: She Speaks

YES I DO HATE COLE! KILL HIM! DROWN HIM! BOIL HIM IN HOT WATER! THROW HIM IN THE LAKE WITH MUGGLE HANDCUFFS ON! FEED HIM TO BUCKEBEAK! I DONT CARE HOW U DO IT JUST KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh my a bit carried away there...but i do hate Cole at the moment.. and Lily make up ur mind!!!!!!! do u like him or not? This is James Potter were talking about!!!! sorry i can sometimes get a little to passionate

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/03/08 16:50
Chapter: The Tutor

welll ummm a not so pleasent suprise and how could we not forget Adams with her evil firecracker nails and her ugly squached up face (at least how I imagine her)??? Grace Adams......i could get used to that name......maybe

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/03/08 16:45
Chapter: Trust

um i have to ignore the top part...i loved this emotionalness of the chapter..did that make sense?

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/03/08 16:11
Chapter: A New Friend

oh something i forgot to add...i wish u said how they got out of the fire....i still loved this chapter!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/03/08 16:11
Chapter: A New Friend

i hope u see this review even though the book is done! I LOVE THIS BOOK!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/03/08 16:06
Chapter: A Smoky Haze

cliffhanger sort of.........the bad thing is we know he doesnt die because he dies later in life with Voldemort...although it is fan fic so anything can happen...nice chapter

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/03/08 16:01
Chapter: Cockiness

i still wish i had found out about fan fic earlier so I could experience waiting for every chapter...i still didnt love this chapter, although it was well written and suspensful, and some of my burning questions were answered..but i still have a couple like what happened to Peter? but o well....

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/03/08 15:55
Chapter: I Need You

i wish i could ahve been here to read every chapter the second it came no one will read my reviews probably..i like this chapter

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/03/08 15:50
Chapter: A Night To Remember


Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/02/08 15:04
Chapter: A Night To Remember


Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/02/08 14:50
Chapter: Sweet Surprises

ergh......didnt like the ending.......of course that just my opinion...LOVED there st of it deep!

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/02/08 14:44
Chapter: A New Head Boy

SEQUEL?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!!? i hope its not a cliffy at the end of this would kill me...KILL ME! ok..a little dramatic...anyways this chapter...a bit dramatic...totally sad and very..umm..-in search for a better word- wise??

Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange
Date: 09/02/08 14:43
Chapter: Going Under

that bitch

Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange
Date: 09/02/08 3:28
Chapter: Fall To Pieces

come on he's got to tell james there like brothers

Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange
Date: 09/02/08 3:14
Chapter: She Returns

love it

Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange
Date: 09/02/08 2:38
Chapter: Change of Heart


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange
Date: 09/02/08 2:33
Chapter: Prongs Troubles

come on lily , james i'm sure the three of us could work this out why is lily being such a prat ? and why is james not trying to win her back?

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 2 by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 1st-2nd Years
The Weird Sisters are back for an encore. Ten more tracks from your MNFF authors.
Severus's Prince by DestinyMoonStar Professors
What does Severus Snape do when a one night stand turns into a baby boy? ...
Other Lives and Dimensions and Finally a Love Story by MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd Professors
The year is 1977, and the Wizarding World is in turmoil, but it doesn't really...
Oread, Walking by Seren
Cedric was just as odd as Hermione, because he liked to walk. Cedric/Hermione
The Effect of Gamma Rays on Two Terrifically Trapped Gryffindors. by Fenixaze 3rd-5th Years
From the "Stuck where for the weekend?" Challenge on ... Our two...
Drunk on Him by armagod679 Professors
For me, he was an obsession, a burning obsession, one that I could never let...
A Broken Hallelujah by epiphany212 Professors
You have always loved the chase. The pursuit of Quaffles and dragons have carried...
In the Hufflepuff Way by 1000timesingoldenink 3rd-5th Years
Did anybody really appreciate Hannah's mum?Because Mrs. Abbott was a heroine...
And Now... by Oregonian 3rd-5th Years
Moments after the death of Voldemort, Harry gazes at the corpse of the Dark...
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 1 by minnabird 1st-2nd Years
Welcome back to another rousing round of rambunctious rock!However, a new act...