poor Grace! she was noble, brave, and strong! she had been through so many torments in her life, and disappointments, yet she stayed strong. She grew up with a horrible mother, but died to save Katy. And, well, I am so mad at Cole at the moment! I will never say he deserved what he got, but, sigh*. I dont no what to think. BTW!!! i just got so many of my friends to go on fan fic, and told them to u were a brilliant author, so maybe theyll read this boook!!!..............I love this book!
im doing my thing to review!!! i cant help wondering if u read this, even tho the book is finished! im so sad and happy that the book is almost at a close, i love it and never want it to end. I will read the sequel and always remeber this as my second fan fic.
well...um...how do I put this delicatley to u....once again....KILLL COLE!!!!!!!!!!! Venus deserved what she got so even though I hate her with the etensity of a million burning suns, I feel she deserved what she got. She will rot in Azakban with the dementors feeding on every happy thought that she posseeses draining her of all cheerfullness. Then, she will slowly turn mad, and die there. Woa, a little to deep. As for coal, feed him to the giant squid! How dare he??? Liking Lily, and still carrying on with his plan?! If he truly loves her, he wouldnt want to hurt her, even if it means sacrificing her to James. If he really loved her, like James did, then he would be happy to see her with a guy she loves so much.
YES I DO HATE COLE! KILL HIM! DROWN HIM! BOIL HIM IN HOT WATER! THROW HIM IN THE LAKE WITH MUGGLE HANDCUFFS ON! FEED HIM TO BUCKEBEAK! I DONT CARE HOW U DO IT JUST KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh my god...got a bit carried away there...but i do hate Cole at the moment.. and Lily make up ur mind!!!!!!! do u like him or not? This is James Potter were talking about!!!! sorry i can sometimes get a little to passionate
welll ummm a not so pleasent suprise and how could we not forget Adams with her evil firecracker nails and her ugly squached up face (at least how I imagine her)??? Grace Adams......i could get used to that name......maybe
um i have to ignore the top part...i loved this emotionalness of the chapter..did that make sense?
oh something i forgot to add...i wish u said how they got out of the fire....i still loved this chapter!
i hope u see this review even though the book is done! I LOVE THIS BOOK!
cliffhanger sort of.........the bad thing is we know he doesnt die because he dies later in life with Voldemort...although it is fan fic so anything can happen...nice chapter
i still wish i had found out about fan fic earlier so I could experience waiting for every chapter...i still didnt love this chapter, although it was well written and suspensful, and some of my burning questions were answered..but i still have a couple like what happened to Peter? but o well....
i wish i could ahve been here to read every chapter the second it came out...now no one will read my reviews probably..i like this chapter
MAKE UP YOUR MIND LILY!!!!!!!!!! WHATS WRONG WITH U?
ergh......didnt like the ending.......of course that just my opinion...LOVED there st of it though...so deep!
SEQUEL?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!!? i hope its not a cliffy at the end of this book...it would kill me...KILL ME! ok..a little dramatic...anyways this chapter...a bit dramatic...totally sad and very..umm..-in search for a better word- wise??
come on he's got to tell james there like brothers
come on lily , james i'm sure the three of us could work this out why is lily being such a prat ? and why is james not trying to win her back?