Reviewer: Patronus96
Date: 08/07/11 21:02
Chapter: A New Head Boy

Nooooo! I'm slowly dying on the inside.

Reviewer: Patronus96
Date: 08/06/11 8:58
Chapter: A Friend's Betrayal

Peter's just irratating, he's pretty much the reason why all the marauders die in the end.

Reviewer: Patronus96
Date: 08/05/11 9:00
Chapter: In Your Arms

Awwww such cuties.

Reviewer: Patronus96
Date: 08/05/11 8:36
Chapter: Meeting with Dumbledore

i love lily so much! You portray just as i thought she would be like. :) Why are the chapters so short though? :(

Reviewer: let-me-dream-forever
Date: 08/02/11 9:03
Chapter: Moving On

To answer the questions;
"I think I love you."
Sirius!!!!!!!!!!
Halle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cole. Heads down.
Big News
That everyone is still in love and making trouble
Sirius and Halle
Absolutely Not

Reviewer: let-me-dream-forever
Date: 08/01/11 22:15
Chapter: Moving On

a.m.a.z.i.n.g.

Reviewer: let-me-dream-forever
Date: 08/01/11 20:42
Chapter: Truce With The Enemy

awwwwwwwwwwww!!!!! that is all i have to say!!!!!!! just awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: let-me-dream-forever
Date: 08/01/11 20:31
Chapter: Meeting with Dumbledore

off to a strong start!

Reviewer: butterbeer25
Date: 07/04/11 10:26
Chapter: The Beautiful Friendship Begins

i love james, his attitude is great! lucky lucky Lily!

Reviewer: LilyLunaPotter08
Date: 07/04/11 4:05
Chapter: More Drunken Tides

you are so awesome SECRET Lily !! hope i know yah real name !!! I LOVE this chapter !!! you're so great !!!!!!! but i hope you can write more because HARRY POTTER & THE DEATHLY HALLOWS PART II ends this july 15 .. YOU'RE REALLY GREAT AND I THINK I WANNA BA YOUR SECRET FRIEND.. it's nice .. you're a GENIUS !!!

Reviewer: BeckyPotter
Date: 06/17/11 14:38
Chapter: Moving On

LOVED IT! THERE ARE NO OTHER WORDS!!!! MY FAVOURITE STORY EVERRRRR! :) XXXXX

Reviewer: -HPFREAK-
Date: 06/14/11 13:57
Chapter: Clouded Feelings

I really love this!!You are really talented!!

Reviewer: LILY_ISTHEBEST
Date: 06/08/11 10:32
Chapter: The Beautiful Friendship Begins

your stories are so interesting!

Reviewer: CandleInTheDark
Date: 06/03/11 1:04
Chapter: Twice Defied

Well, I don't think rescuing Lily would have been that easy.

Reviewer: CandleInTheDark
Date: 06/03/11 0:57
Chapter: Picking Lilies

Good spot of 'damsel in distress' medicine in this chapter. Always works with the reader. Voldemort's character is really wrong though.

Reviewer: CandleInTheDark
Date: 06/03/11 0:31
Chapter: Dreams

This is quite a sad chapter as they have a dream about their future together and how they will die for their child. It could really spur them on to fight voldemort even harder!

Reviewer: CandleInTheDark
Date: 06/03/11 0:19
Chapter: Clouded Feelings

Yes I think that events are all happening far too quickly in this chapter, but contrary to what you think, I love the bit with Remus and Katy!

Reviewer: CandleInTheDark
Date: 06/02/11 14:05
Chapter: Arrival of Fear

I like how in this chapter you remind us of the present war with voldemort. However I think the emotion is rather u understated considering that James has just learnt that his parents are dead.

Reviewer: CandleInTheDark
Date: 06/02/11 13:59
Chapter: Frozen Tears

Im loving this story so far, but I think that everyone is falling in and out of love with each other a bit too quickly, which makes it slightly unrealistic.

Reviewer: isadora duncan
Date: 05/15/11 8:58
Chapter: The Beautiful Friendship Begins

I LOVE it! ! ! ! But maybe that's just because I love Lily and James.

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