omg sirius can be romantic and annoying at the same time! Love it!
This is the best chapter out of them all so far
wasn't as good as first chapter.
I loved it !!!!
You said in a earlier chapter that Fawn had brown hair =S
There are a couple of typos, so you might want to look at that. I like the end... 'She's not just a girl, Padfoot, she's THE girl.' I love love love it! Happy writing!
I quite like this story! I love Lily and James, they are my favorite pairing in the seires. They died too young. =C. One thing I wanted to say was that JKR confirmed in an interview that James was a Chaser on the Gryffindor team, even though the movies claimed he was a Seeker. Since this is the first chapter and I know next to nothing about the story, I don't know if you're exploring an AU or not, but I thought I should let you know. Other than that, you write well and I look forward to the next chapter!
I loved reading the series, as for the questions,
My fav character is Sirius
I hated Venus the most
My favourite part in the fic was when Lupin told Katie
Fav couple are Lilly and James
Oh no!!! Poor Grace, she was so nice and no one trusted her. Poor, poor Grace. It is so sad.
Poor James as well, he must feel so bad.
Loving it!!
Oh damn it. What has he done to James??? Andwhy must Lily jump to conclusions? So sad. I hate Cole so much. I think there is something mentally wrong with him though.
I was prepared to hate Grace Adams but am glad she turned out so nice, can't have too many villians now, can we?
Loving it!!
Oh damn it. What has he done to James??? Andwhy must Lily jump to conclusions? So sad. I hate Cole so much. I think there is something mentally wrong with him though.
I was prepared to hate Grace Adams but am glad she turned out so nice, can't have too many villians now, can we?
Loving it!!
Oh damn it. What has he done to James??? Andwhy must Lily jump to conclusions? So sad. I hate Cole so much. I think there is something mentally wrong with him though.
I was prepared to hate Grace Adams but am glad she turned out so nice, can't have too many villians now, can we?
Loving it!!
Ohhhh, scary Cole, that is so freaky, is he clinically insane??? A truce with Snape, never thought that would happen, strange, why Snape though? He is a Death Eater, at least at this point, so why is James trusting him?
Seriously creepy with those traits coming out again, what is Cole going to do???? Very imilar to the spell from Crouch with the lack of responsibility. Weird.
Awwww! SO glad they're back together again!!! YAY!!!
Love it, glad that Halle and Sirius aren't hiding it anymore.
Oh dear, Peter Pettigrew. *sigh* I didn'tthink he would get involved in it at school. So sad. Wish he could tell them and get out of it but... I know he can't.
Brilliant story, I love it!!
for which villian I hated the most it would have to be peter. all the others were evil but he was a person the 3 would die for and he was being a jerk. My fav character was idk i luv them all
Hi.....................
I just read your story, i'm sorry that I didn't rewiew sooner, i was too caught-up in your really really good story.
Here is the answer to some of your questions:
My favorite LKR charecter was Sirius, you made him so funny!
My favorite charecter of your invention was Katy, she is the most like me.
I hated Venus the most, she was really terrible, and mean. I didn't have a fav chapter, that were all really good!!!
If possible could you make the chapters slightly longer, you don't have to, I mean i'm just one person but i would really like it.
I am really looking forward to your sequel. I-L-H
