I love fluff!
OMG! how epic!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think you captured the characters perfectly!
ohhhhh that was so sweet!
I love it so far! i am a sucker for romance!
Your chapters are a little bit rushed, so it's a little difficult to really connect with the characters. I think Lily and James getting together could have been delayed by a bit, though I like Remus and Katy.
very good but once you come of age, as james just has, shouldn't he be seventeen?
why didnt she yes
then back with them lily
why are they still fighting=[
i know what happened i think
come on why do they havr to fight they were fine till the break up
dont letr her die in potters charm you had addison die and that is not fair to sirius
in every story about them lily has the dream about wat happens
ur storys are awesome
i read your other story potters charm it was my first james/lily romance and i absolutly loved i have been reading their romance fics ever since
come on lily soften up
best chapter yet! it's so cute