Dude(tte)! What is it with everyone running away1 Gosh! Anyway, It's really good so far.
OMG! YOURS STORY IS SOOO GOOD! HOW OLD ARE YOU, SERISOUSELY YOU MUST BE J.K. ROWLING YOURSELF!!!!!! I HAD TO FIND MY PASSWORD (which took 2 hours to find) JUST SO I COULD COMMENT! YOU SHOULD REALLY CONSIDER TO BE AN AUTHOR! :D
All of these relationships move a little too quickly lol. But its funny how Lily is like Hermione, and Venus Adams and James' relationship is like Harry and Snape's.
this was a bit unrealistic. if there really was only one potion that could EVER be made to save ONE person they wouldn't waste it on a random student. also, lily would never be mean to fawn like she was!
aww, sybill is the older generation's luna lovegood! so adorable but odd!
not exactly compatible with the books but a nice story none the less! there are a few typos, using the wrong words, etc. you wrote someone's face was "beat red" when the correct term is "beet red".
I am LOVING this so far! The best written fic i've read so far in the last few weeks. i love the new characters and how they all secretly/not so secretly like each other
So far I'm in love with this story, although in this chapter I'm a little disconcerted with how unfazed James is with the fact that his parents were just murdered. Perhaps he's still in shock, but no matter how brave and tough he is, his reactions seem a little callous.
Other than that, this story is fabulous! I'm loving every second.
hi. just thought id let you know i absolutely adore this story so far! your writing is amazing. (:
umm... this chapter,this book is awesome, but it doesn't follow the exact j.k.r. proof version, like how Molly King should really be Molly Prewet sister of Fabian Prewet and I forget his name Prewet, it could make an alternate universe but just so you know in most peoples eyes your story totally follows the potter universe, I'm a perfectionist, a nerd, a nutter, well, and if you gather, a tad bit weird so ignore the last 53 words. =)
Down with peter.... Burn peter.... Gud story though
"Sirius turned to look at the entrance to the dance to see his friend, entering in sweats, with Lily Evans." I love the picture i get from this...
Lily. She's just so likeable!
Definitely Katy. I love the way she is so blunt yet sweet. She was also so strong.
I hated Cole, because i hated it when Lily and James broke up.
I liked the end. Such a great ending. Sirius telling everyone about him and halle was so sweet.
I'm not really sure. Harry? hehehe
Lily and James of course!
I love this story, please keep writing.
I am sooooooooo happy!! i thought that i might have to live through seeing them die!!!!!!!!!!! i would totally SOB!!!!! thank god not!
NO IF U KILL HER I WILL B SO MAD
NO WHY WOULD U DO THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
i love those cheesy, yet romantic chapters! sigh!
YAY! SHE GOT HEALED!
that was soooo funny with Sirius!
why on earth did they break up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love fluff!