Reviewer: heartze
Date: 09/05/12 7:06
Chapter: Memories Not Forgotten

A little too easy, too quick. I feel like if you waited another month or two with them talking more it would be better. They just became friends and now pretty quick they are more. So more time would of been good.

Reviewer: chibihedwig
Date: 07/10/12 2:31
Chapter: Truce With The Enemy

its a nice story,really.but you might want to extend chapter length...most of them are a bit short.and wizards use knuts,sickles and galleons for money,not pennies
wonderful schems and ideas!

Reviewer: Felix Felicis_potter fan
Date: 06/14/12 0:04
Chapter: The Big News

that was the most stupid thing sirius would have ever done. however, he might have.

Reviewer: Felix Felicis_potter fan
Date: 06/13/12 23:52
Chapter: A Visit To Azkaban

Kill them both! u r terrible! (not really)
im just mad at the fact that katy might die!

Reviewer: Felix Felicis_potter fan
Date: 06/13/12 4:04
Chapter: Fall To Pieces

what the heck is going to happen to poor Halle, Sirius is bachelor

Reviewer: Felix Felicis_potter fan
Date: 06/12/12 15:26
Chapter: Getting Serious With Sirius

please check grammar and use commas!

Reviewer: Ginnypotter2699
Date: 11/23/11 5:36
Chapter: Lakeside Drama

Loved this chapter

Reviewer: Ginnypotter2699
Date: 11/23/11 5:21
Chapter: The Beautiful Friendship Begins

I've read this story before and I love it. I like katy a lot.

Reviewer: oceanwolf1
Date: 11/22/11 23:02
Chapter: Wisdom of Dumbledore

Stops and starts a little bit, still interesting though.

Reviewer: Jash
Date: 11/14/11 11:47
Chapter: Moving On

Lots of love to you for this story.

Reviewer: LovelyFawkes
Date: 10/17/11 3:53
Chapter: He Loves Ya Lil

I'm pretty disappointed. I expected this to be really good, and so far, it's not well-written at all.

Reviewer: vilyar122
Date: 10/10/11 2:49
Chapter: Vengeance

yes! finally someone does something smart lol. thank you for having a character show how useful the marauder's map can really be!

Reviewer: HermioneJeanPotter
Date: 09/13/11 13:40
Chapter: The Beautiful Friendship Begins

Hey, I just got an account, and the first thing I did was come to review this! It's my favorite story that I've read on here, and I had to tell you :D

Reviewer: LunaTheThestralLover
Date: 09/06/11 9:40
Chapter: Wisdom of Dumbledore

yes, VERY fluffy!

Reviewer: LunaTheThestralLover
Date: 09/06/11 9:28
Chapter: Memories Not Forgotten

o gooodness! why can't real men be like that! that is pure romance!

Reviewer: LunaTheThestralLover
Date: 09/06/11 9:21
Chapter: Truce With The Enemy

haha! i love Sirius!

Reviewer: LunaTheThestralLover
Date: 09/06/11 9:11
Chapter: Lakeside Drama

best fanfic EVER!!

Reviewer: LunaTheThestralLover
Date: 09/06/11 9:00
Chapter: Thoughts of You

awww! that is true love!

Reviewer: bekki-unknown
Date: 08/11/11 16:43
Chapter: Dreams

I really like this chapter too.

Reviewer: Patronus96
Date: 08/07/11 21:02
Chapter: A New Head Boy

Nooooo! I'm slowly dying on the inside.

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