Reviews For Blood of the Heart
Reviewer: Dennis Vendetta
Date: 04/21/06 0:38
Chapter: Balance

Excellent story my friend. Great work. Will we see a sequel, or pehaps an epilouge?

Author's Response: Thank you so much!, that is the question, isn't it?! I'll be honest, I hate to write an epilogue because I'm not convinced I'm done. But quite frankly, I can't even contemplate writing anything until after the summer. Two kids home from school means no time for mom. But it does mean time to stew on story ideas.... :)

Reviewer: Monster Book of Monsters
Date: 04/19/06 20:46
Chapter: Balance

Wow - well done! Have to say, regarding this chapter specifically, my fav part was the tentacle that came out of the lake to grab the bread. LOL Overall, it was a really interesting story. Hope you get bored with those "other pursuits" and get back to writing. You owe us an R/H next! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think you're the first to like the tentacle. Cool!

Reviewer: patronuswitch
Date: 04/18/06 19:56
Chapter: Balance

So this is my second comment. I wanted to let you know that after copying both storied (Ancient Magic and Blood of the Heart), changing the spacing between paragraphs to double instead of triple, and changing the font size to 12 Times New Roman, there were 774 pages according to Word. Have you ever thought of writing your own story? You are an awesome writer and you obviously put time, effort and research into it. Your works are amazing and I look forward to your future ones. Your characters are just like how JKR created them and this seems like such a thing JKR could have planned, it's amazing you aren't her yourself. Keep up the amazing work. Definately on my favorites list.

Author's Response: LOL! 774 pages?! Oy! Who knew I had that many words in me? Yes, I'm toying with the idea of original fiction, but have found that I seem to be able to live in only one world at a time - which means to do that, I have to bid adieu to H/G. But who knows - H/G are awfully hard to say good-bye to. Thank you!

Reviewer: Kellbell24
Date: 04/18/06 18:27
Chapter: Flames

wow good chappie! keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Harry4Ginny
Date: 04/18/06 10:02
Chapter: Balance

LOVED IT - been waiting on this chapter for ages!!!!! It was amazing!!!!! But it's over *sniff* :-( keep writing though! I'll be checking for new stories!

Author's Response: Thank you! Don't check too often...I'm taking the summer off!

Reviewer: kels
Date: 04/17/06 17:07
Chapter: Touch

I loved this chapter! I was sitting here reading this the whole time saying they need to hold hands and that's me I don't notice many things. I didn't even pay attention to the chapter title and I got it well I'm sad there's only one chapter left
:( It's been a really great tale.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, for the readers, it was obvious. To the Healers who hadn't read the previous what 33 chapters, no so much... :)

Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 04/17/06 14:16
Chapter: Balance

WOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FLUFF!!!!!!!!!!! I love you. I REALLY love you!!!!!! *huggles*

Author's Response: lol - of course, Fluff! :)

Reviewer: AuroraOrion
Date: 04/16/06 21:18
Chapter: Balance

If I had not read this via MFF, I would have thought I was reading JK's work itself. It was extremely well written, put together nicely and flowed brillantly. I'm almost afraid to read the "7th book", for I'm wondering if it will match or surpass this? You did a brillant job on this and you should be very proud. I look forward to reading any offerings you post. Cheers!

Author's Response: Oh, wow! Thank you very much! I'm sure book 7 will surpass anything I could come up with, but I'll be smiling all afternoon just thinking of your kind words!

Reviewer: Kellbell24
Date: 04/16/06 18:18
Chapter: Bonds Broken

awwwww! i am soooooo sad! i luved Catrina!

Author's Response: I know! I loved Catrina, too. But keep reading...she's not gone for good.

Reviewer: Kellbell24
Date: 04/16/06 12:44
Chapter: Revelations


Author's Response: Lol! Thanks!

Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 04/15/06 17:21
Chapter: Balance

Awwww :), I barely have any words. This has been one of the best stories that I've read, and I'm actually sad that I can't look forward to any new chapters. Excellent way to sum it all up! I loved Remus at the end by the way :) Amazing story!!!!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you caught Remus. Not many have and I loved that part. :) Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Kellbell24
Date: 04/15/06 11:22
Chapter: Suspicions


Author's Response: Excellent question! You know, I believe I wrote this chapter pre-HBP, before we knew Order memers called each other through the Patronus charm. I based the wand raising call on what I'd read, and left it up to the reader's imagination. But, now, we know he would have used a Patronus. Thanks!

Reviewer: lucy3742
Date: 04/14/06 14:34
Chapter: Balance

Thanks for sharing your work! It is one of my favorites. You are fantastic!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 04/13/06 11:35
Chapter: Balance

What a wonderful ending to a fantastic story!

I hope you do a sequal - you would write a brilliant wedding!

Author's Response: lol - I hardly wanted to plan my own wedding! But then again, weddings are so much more fun when they aren't your own... :) Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!

Reviewer: Yelaisha
Date: 04/13/06 6:53
Chapter: Balance

Hey!! Thanks for your excellent story!!!! I've been following your story the past few months, and enjoying with such excitement and joy that I just cannot believe it's over now. It was great! Thanks, and hope to see you again soon.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: tallikewheat
Date: 04/12/06 10:09
Chapter: Balance

I've followed this story for what seems like a year and just as I hated when I finished GoF and had no more to read, I hated when I would read to the end of a current chapter and nothing else had been posted. You used what JK already created artfully, but gave your characters their own equal weight in the story. I will be sorely disappointed when Anna and Nathan fail to appear in JK's 7th book. And then the whole bonding and capturing V's spirit in the circlet, all the ideas pieced together seamlessly and the entire story flowed to a wonderful ending. I teared up and nearly cried at work. You did that. Thank you.

Author's Response: What a wonderful review - I'm blushing! Thank you - it's funny to say that I'm happy I made you cry, but I am. :)

Reviewer: Arron
Date: 04/10/06 15:29
Chapter: Balance

Wow...It's over....Just like that...It's sad to see my favorite story end and see that the author is going into hiatus for awhile. It ended just like I hoped it would. Maybe a little too open ended, but very well thoughtout none the less. I'm sure this is one of those stroies I could see myself re-reading. Well done.

Author's Response: Oh, it's so nice to know it ended how you hoped it would. That makes me smile! Thank you!

Author's Response: Oh, it's so nice to know it ended how you hoped it would. That makes me smile! Thank you!

Reviewer: magicalmuggle16
Date: 04/09/06 19:54
Chapter: Balance

AHHHH!!!!!! I can't believe it's over! After following this story since the beginning (even though I haven't been reviewing the last few chapters *bad me*), it has become one of my favorites ever! If it was published, it would be on my shelf right next to my HP books! Excellent and I hope you keep writing!!! I'll be watching for more of your stories! It's been loads of fun, and brought many moments of pure joy to me.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: Kethji
Date: 04/09/06 17:44
Chapter: Balance

THANK YOU!!!!!!! WOW! This story has been a wonderful journey, thank you so much for taking us all with you! I have really enjoyed the plot, your new characters (Nathan is AWESOME), JKR's characters, and the beautiful ending ( I would have loved to have been in that Great Hall filled with applause, great image). Please don't take a very long hiatus from writing, maybe a one-shot every now and then... It has been a joy to spend time with you in your version of the HP universe! Thanks again!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Nathan is awesome, isn't he? :) Thank you for coming along on the ride with me. It's been fun!

Reviewer: choachang
Date: 04/09/06 13:16
Chapter: Balance

i really want to cry ;'( im so sad its ended, im so happy for harry and ginny and everyone! but *sigh* every story has to end somewhere dont they? i really love your stories, ive loved everything about this one, thers been sad , happy, romantic, loads of different times and its been great! you should write for a living, i would so buy your books! one thing tho, i really wanted to hear how the others took the news wiith the engagement, it would have been funny and moving at the same time... especially with the twins! by your faithful reader, Ali xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Author's Response: I know! It's funny how sad I feel at the end. It's been so much fun. Thank you so much!

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