Reviews For Blood of the Heart
Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 08/18/08 9:55
Chapter: Circlet

I love this story! The plot is awesome, and the characterization is incredible! The idea's you come up with are imagnificent! I can't stop reading this story! There's just on thing about this specific chapter that I felt the need to point out, and I'm just stating this as an observation, not a judgement, but practically all of the birthstones are wrong. Just for future reference, here's a list of the actual months and birthstone's for those months:

January is Garnet (dark red)
February is Amethyst (purple)
March is Aquamarine (light blue)
April is Diamond (clear/white)
May is Emerald (green)
june is Pearl (white)
July is Ruby (red)
August is Peridot (light green)
September is Saphire (deep blue)
October is Opal (pale rainbow)
November is Yellow Topaz (yellow)
December is Turquoise (blue/green)

Again I'm not trying to be judgemental, but with OCD, it's those tiny errors that tend to catch your eye and bug you.

Reviewer: RealmofShadows
Date: 07/31/08 10:56
Chapter: Balance

An incredible story. I hope for a sequel!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/25/08 1:13
Chapter: Bonds Broken

Oh my. So catarina is dead. WHy did that have to happen? I loved her she was the coolest. Malfoy is scum, i can't belive he interupted them. And how the heck are they going to get out of that forrest/ Poor Nathan he deserved a better closing with his mother. Voldy must die.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/24/08 15:39
Chapter: Revelations

Wow so Catarina bonded with Tom. Does that make him invincible? It shouldn't because it wasn't true love. Wow i wonder waht will happen. I hope Catarina is ok.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/24/08 14:23
Chapter: Apparations

Ahh that apparation is going to get them in a lot of trouble. The birthday was cool, i loved the celebration catarina made it was cool. I wonder why the minestry decided against sending the letter. Good of Ron to do the right thing event hough it was hard.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/24/08 1:10
Chapter: Suspicions

This chapter is good. I wonder waht Harry ended up getting Ginny for her birthday. It seems quite interseting that Catarina is so worried about the spell lucious attempted. It is bad of course but i wonder how it may affect what needs to be done. i also wonder waht heppened with her bonding, who did she bond with and why? i love this story and the way you write is fantastic.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/24/08 0:10
Chapter: Transitions

This cahpter was quite nice, i like the chemestry all thre characters have going. I think that for ginny it means a lot to be able to give soemthing for ehre to be able to have that influence to cure is a valued tresure it makes her stand out. in a familey where she is the last of many children and in a school where manytimes she is overshadowed i think she would apreaciate being able to do somethign tangable taht no one else can do. I really hope everything works out i can't wait to find out mroe about the ceremony.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/23/08 23:02
Chapter: Birthday Surprises

wow that was hard. I get where harry is coming from but i also very much sympathise with molly, i hope nathan
s mom will be able to calm her down. And waht ever dangers there are i hope that the ceremony goes ok for everyone's sake. I can't belive anthan got branded.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/23/08 22:34
Chapter: Blood Bonds

wow that was a great chapter very sweet. The blood bonding sounds intersting but a very heavy decition to have to make. Were it anyone other then harry and ginny it woud be way to important to amke at taht age.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/23/08 20:14
Chapter: Old Ties, New Beginnings

Hmm i wonder who that woman is i have the impression that she is Nathan's mother but why would he have to forgive her? i loved Harry's time at the burrow and now mre then ever i ahve to say that ginny is very good for him indeed.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 07/15/08 23:16
Chapter: Circlet

Snape really is very evil in your story. You must have been in for quite the surprise when it turned out in the books that he wasn't as bad as he seemed. And where has Dumbledore gone? Oh the mystery.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 07/13/08 22:46
Chapter: Lady of the Lake

I love it! You always put fun twists in your stories. I can't wait to find out what happens in France!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 07/08/08 23:03
Chapter: Directions

I'm very excited to find out what Bill finds. And you write a very amusing (and acurate) Augusta Longbottom.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 07/02/08 23:40
Chapter: Acceptance

Poor Draco. As horrible as he is I really do feel sorry for him. Nobody deserves that, expecially not from a parent. I'm also glad that Bill got roped into helping. And Joanna and Neville are in love! What a wonderful thing.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 06/29/08 21:52
Chapter: Simple

Another wonderful chapter. I laughed extremely hard at Fred and George, and I completely agree with Anya, that was my favorite part, too. I really hope Joanna doesn't have to go home! She needs to bond with Neville!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 06/29/08 13:42
Chapter: Anchors

Love it! I really hope they figure it out soon though, the suspense is killing me. And I'm glad that Neville and Joanna are working things out even more.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 06/29/08 10:45
Chapter: Holes

Uh oh, that's a mean cliffie leaving Ginny in a trap like that. But I'm so glad that Joanna and Neville are working things out, they're so cute together. I'm glad they have each other to make each other happy. They can work on the bonding later.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 06/29/08 9:13
Chapter: Holiday Surprises

Anna and Nathan are having a baaaaby, and Percy is getting maaaaarried! That was me singing about what a lovely Christmas chapter you wrote. And I really liked Harry and Ginny's presents for each other.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 06/27/08 22:40
Chapter: Fates

I'm glad you gave Neville a bond. The poor boy deserves it. And I absolutely cannot wait to see what Ginny gets from Harry for Christmas, and I also want to know what she's weaving.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 06/23/08 22:23
Chapter: Insurance

Wow Harry used some pretty dark spells in this chapter. I liked that you made up spells of your own though, that's very cool.

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