Reviews For Another Year
Reviewer: Rita Writer
Date: 06/05/05 14:02
Chapter: Another Year at Hogwarts

I really loved this as a poem. I thought perhaps something about exams or classes might have made a nice addition, but it's your poem. Other than that, I thought this described a year at Hogwarts quite well. "Unicorn hair, people I can't bare." Unicorn hair seemed slight random to me. It's something of can mind in the magical community, but not so much at Hogwarts, unless there is some kind of potion the requires unicorn hair. I really enjoyed this, great job! 9/10

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/30/05 12:16
Chapter: Another Year at Hogwarts

I like the idea, but I think it may read better if you put one extra line to the verses. It's just you read 'another chance to shine' and you immediately expect there to be a rhyming part

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