Reviews For Gone
Reviewer: Louisa Chocolatecake
Date: 04/26/05 17:48
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My favorite stanzas were the first, second, and fourth - especially the fourth. "He'll be better in a while." I REALLY like the way the whole poem flows.

Reviewer: Kestrel5
Date: 04/19/05 15:49
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Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/28/05 12:12
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'There’s nothing to lose, But there’s nothing to gain. I soon became lifeless, Like always being chain’d.' That is such a good line. I love it! Really nice poem, it showed how desperate Harry feels and seperated. *10*

Author's Response: thanks for your wonderful comment! i love that line too! it's comments, like your's, that inspire me to write more! thanks again! i'm glad u like it!

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