My favorite stanzas were the first, second, and fourth - especially the fourth. "He'll be better in a while." I REALLY like the way the whole poem flows.
'There’s nothing to lose, But there’s nothing to gain. I soon became lifeless, Like always being chain’d.' That is such a good line. I love it! Really nice poem, it showed how desperate Harry feels and seperated. *10*
Author's Response: thanks for your wonderful comment! i love that line too! it's comments, like your's, that inspire me to write more! thanks again! i'm glad u like it!