Reviewer: sylvia skeeter
Date: 04/27/05 14:36
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
Fantastic.10/10 :)
Author's Response: thanks
Reviewer: i love sirius black
Date: 04/23/05 21:11
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
this is an excellent story! keep writing! it was a very good start and i want more!!! lol
Author's Response: I am trying to get the next chapter up but... Ahhh!
Reviewer: Nita_Sean
Date: 04/23/05 19:38
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
*Giggles madley* Love the last part, and you need to keep going. It's great!
Author's Response: Thank you! *hugs* I love nice people.
Reviewer: sylvia skeeter
Date: 04/23/05 14:12
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
Awsome!!!!
Author's Response: Sweet!!!!
Reviewer: eightyseven
Date: 04/20/05 23:04
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
Great stuff-- can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 2 is waiting for approval!
Reviewer: AECoffee
Date: 04/16/05 15:53
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
The tension between the characters is believable... You are off to a good start... Make it original.
Author's Response: Working on Chapter 2!
Reviewer: irishphoenix
Date: 03/30/05 21:13
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
Oooooooooooooooh! that boy would die if i were Lily! ~eyes flash~ i dont think anyone's ever made me so mad at a character. good job, and the story rocks! ~10~
Author's Response: Lol. Yea, James is really good at that. Well, thanks for reviewing my story. I just came back so I will be updating this story soon! :~)
Reviewer: love4liars
Date: 03/29/05 19:57
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
i like it a lot! I think it is off to a great start! You can so tell that Lily will fall for James and that's what makes it so adorable! Unfortunately I have one word of constructive critizism (and it is not bad) it's just I was a little confused on who was talking to try to make that clearer. Other than that I loved it and I will be waiting for more!
Author's Response: Um, ok. I will try to somehow make it more clearer... I usually start off with the name of the character first though. Glad you loved it! Won't be waiting long (I hope)...
Reviewer: harry potter is my life
Date: 03/29/05 19:27
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
i love it! congrats on your new story! its so cute, and you portray all of the characters very well... i love James, he is my absolute favorite character! Lily is trying so hard not to like him but its got to happen sometime! i also really like this fic because you did not make it different from jk's original story. great job and i cant wait for more! : D
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. It's a huge compliment saying my story isn't different from Rowling's plot. Ah, well one can only wish. She is our God, our Saviour. Lol. *Falls on knee's before her* Yep. Stay tuned!
