Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/12/08 18:10
Chapter: 3. Family's Secret
This chapter was great. Lilywas walking along worrying about her family and james was considering himself lucky to be so close in proximity to her. I'm sure they could've told Dumbledore, I mean he's extremely good at keeping secrets as we all know, and he could probably set up some protection for their families. But I guess threats work. Can't wait to read more, I notice you've not updated for a long time, hope theres more to come, you've got me hooked.
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/12/08 18:09
Chapter: 3. Family's Secret
This chapter was great. Lilywas walking along worrying about her family and james was considering himself lucky to be so close in proximity to her. I'm sure they could've told Dumbledore, I mean he's extremely good at keeping secrets as we all know, and he could probably set up some protection for their families. But I guess threats work. Can't wait to read more, I notice you've not updated for a long time, hope theres more to come, you've got me hooked.
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/12/08 18:01
Chapter: 2. Troublesome Night
Another excellently written chapter, I knew Snape would be involved somehow. I loved the different spells, Domire Sol especially. Shame Bellatrix didn't choke on those marbles. I love how Lily starts seeing James differently, I've read many fics but never is the turning point duplicated. This one was very heroic and did indeed show her how loyal and brave James was.
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/12/08 17:44
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
I loved this, especially the bubble blowing Sirius and the fact that they must tell the other thier password, I guess it's for emergencies. I'm guessing the next chapter will be the work of Snape, but I'm rubbish at guesswork so i'll just have to click next instead.
Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 04/28/07 19:26
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
I'm hooked! I love this! I can't wait to read more. As always, you're portraying James and Lily GREAT! ~MJ
Reviewer: lilianpotter1234563
Date: 01/13/07 17:19
Chapter: 3. Family's Secret
i rea;y like it keep up the good work
Reviewer: lilianpotter1234563
Date: 01/13/07 17:19
Chapter: 3. Family's Secret
i rea;y like it keep up the good work
Reviewer: catalina792
Date: 08/24/06 7:33
Chapter: 3. Family's Secret
ahh i love this story! wow it's just great! i can't wait for an update =]
Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 06/11/06 8:02
Chapter: 3. Family's Secret
wow! i love this story! this chapter is heaps good, james is so sweet! i thought the scene with bellatrix was heaps good!! only the bit when she uses the cruciatus curse was just a little too tame, i think it would have been better if you'd made it more dramatic there. but the rest of it was great! bellatrix is so scary! and it was great how james took the curse instead of her that was just gorgeous. this chapter, well, i really liked it. like i said before, james is the sweetest thing ever!! and its really well written. seriously, it works so well! will there be an update soon? its a great story, well done!
Reviewer: midnight_me
Date: 01/17/06 23:09
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
It's good so far, but try to write Peter in. You just said he was the oddball that didn't fit in, and we didn't hear anything else from him. Overall, not bad. I'm going to go read chapter two! 7/10
Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 12/31/05 16:43
Chapter: 3. Family's Secret
brilliant! amazing! Great! superb! that was very well written. i love how great james is...very nice. i do hope that lily will really start to like james. anyway, this story is great, i love it, so you had better update soon.....or i might have to force you....ha ha ha. anyway, you get the picture, update soon!
Reviewer: luvthe1uhurt
Date: 08/04/05 7:55
Chapter: 3. Family's Secret
woohoo first reveiwer!!:)a/w, i luvd the story n i cant wait 2 c wat happens next!!this is a wkd fanfic n ive added it 2 my faves!!
Author's Response: Yea, I'm on your favorites! And yes, you are the first, so here is a piece of chocolate. :hands a piece through the monitor: Enjoy!
Reviewer: mlstr
Date: 07/08/05 22:48
Chapter: 2. Troublesome Night
This was really awesome! I'll be looking forward to your next chapter...
But also, props to you for putting in the best humor I have seen. One of the funniest.
Author's Response: :blushes: Is it really one of the funniest? Wow, I didn't even try that much. Ok, so on the first chapter I did, but the rest.... Aww shucks. :)
Reviewer: Book_luver
Date: 07/07/05 16:25
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
I like it! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Three's a charm! :D
Reviewer: Book_luver
Date: 07/07/05 16:25
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
I like it! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Book_luver
Date: 07/07/05 16:25
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
I like it! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Shock
Date: 06/12/05 21:44
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
lol I felt the same way when my third chapter was FINALLY accepted! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: maraudersno1
Date: 06/04/05 11:56
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
omg this is such a cool story
it sounds like its from the mouth of a true marauder
Author's Response: thanks
Reviewer: missblack
Date: 05/11/05 14:52
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
good start:) I like the way you wrote James..he's funny lol. Everyone seems quite IC so that's good. Keep up the good work and i look forward to more chapters:D
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope the next chappie is IC too. It seems to, how should I put it, zoom off. Heh, so as soon as it gets accepted to you find out what I am talking about. Thanks for the review (I lurve reviews like this)! :)
Reviewer: unicornblood
Date: 05/09/05 20:15
Chapter: 1. Frazleburst, Madame Malkin’s, Snifflers! Oh My!
I really liked it! Sounds almost like JK herself wrote it! 10/10
Author's Response: *smiles* I wrote 100% of it. Though you can thank Rowling for making up this wonderful world of magic! Thanks for the review! And the 10!
