Reviews For Moving On
Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 09/15/07 2:43
Chapter: Chapter 5

hmmm you've planted nice seeds for drama here ;)

please don't make this story too cliche though - just cuz there's too many of them. can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 09/14/07 23:36
Chapter: Chapter 4

Wow do sirius and allison not need to breathe or something? :) You've started the story very well though - there's a lot of potential for interesting things to happen!

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 08/13/07 21:17
Chapter: Chapter 5

I have just finished reading your story! It was really goood! I found it very interesting! Great job hun!
- Sophia -

Reviewer: ella_wyse
Date: 08/11/07 6:08
Chapter: Chapter 4

ooh, it's getting interesting...

Reviewer: ella_wyse
Date: 08/11/07 5:51
Chapter: Chapter 2

It's pretty funny; I have this friend called Eve and she's the exact opposite of yours. Tiny, shy, quiet: when answering questions in class you have to strain your ears to hear her. In her former life I reckon she was a mouse. So it's a bit weird getting to know this new Eve who's a totally different character to mine. But you're doing a really good job convincing me. I love it.

Reviewer: ella_wyse
Date: 08/11/07 5:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. congrats on such a cool story. Constructive critisism: it all happened too fast for me. Maybe next time introduce more of your characters before killing them off. But that's just a pointer. Otherwise, you have a really good writing style and the text flows really well.

Reviewer: pinky witch
Date: 10/10/06 12:56
Chapter: Chapter 5

nooo james cant like eve lmao bt then i rememberd it all works out in the end
lmao great story

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 10/01/06 15:53
Chapter: Chapter 5

*sigh* it still says that the last time you updated was 9 mouths ago...well mabey some day...

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 10/01/06 15:39
Chapter: Chapter 5

OMG!!! DID YOU UPDATE!! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay, I'm trying to remeber...I reveiwed the 5 chapter, but right now there are know reveiw on you must have rewritten this chapter!!! I hope so! Hey I can go and see on you summery thing the last time you updated...YEAH!! I will be back!!

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 05/23/06 17:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

HELLO???? are you there???? I found your story in like December and i really like it and i cheak to see like evrey to days to see if you starting to give up hoPe...:( will a smily help? :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) : ):) :):):):):):):):):):) PEAZZZ UPDATE!!!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 12/23/05 10:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

Your story was so good! I love how Lily is starting to get jealous. And James is starting to possibly like Eve. I feel so bad for Eve, though. I am so happy for Remus. Finally. And, just like Sirius to miss all the action because he is snogging some random girl. Update soon!

Reviewer: mollywobbles
Date: 12/14/05 14:44
Chapter: Chapter 4

hi! i loved your story! you did a really good job portraying remus's anxiousness in becoming close with someone, good job! i hope you update soon!

Reviewer: believe_in_yourself201
Date: 12/13/05 19:14
Chapter: Chapter 4

oh my god its been two months update soon ggreat chappie

Author's Response: I know it's been a really really long time.... I just sent the 5th chapter in last night, and I really really hope it'll be up. During the summer it was basically one thing to the next, and starting high school this year was a transition, so I have every intention of speeding up the chapters from now on.

Reviewer: luckiducki824
Date: 10/07/05 18:45
Chapter: Chapter 4

i absolutely LOVE this chapter cuz of remus and overcoming his shyness in a sense....... but ya i thot it was AWESOME OPOSSUM!!! ttyl

Reviewer: vanillasweety
Date: 10/07/05 14:53
Chapter: Chapter 4

great chappie write more soon please

Reviewer: Alice Waters
Date: 10/06/05 23:45
Chapter: Chapter 4

love it love it love it love it!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mime
Date: 09/17/05 13:48
Chapter: Chapter 3

Pretty good so far, it has a few flaws, yes, but not many. I'm really enjoying it so far, and I can't wait until the next update.

Reviewer: mlstr
Date: 09/16/05 14:44
Chapter: Chapter 3

Hey! I really, really love your story. I love how it's different from nearly all the other ones [starts at the end of the year], and your characters are really good. Update soon!!!!!!!! -Maria

Reviewer: mlstr
Date: 09/16/05 14:42
Chapter: Chapter 3

Hey! I really, really love your story. I love how it's different from nearly all the other ones [starts at the end of the year], and your characters are really good. Update soon!!!!!!!! -Maria

Reviewer: evil_fairy
Date: 09/08/05 16:19
Chapter: Chapter 3

That was a really good chapter! Great way to describe how Lily reacted to being in Petunia's wedding. Loved it! Update soon please.

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