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Reviews For Moving On

Name: Pissenoffanis (Anonymous) · Date: 09/15/07 2:43 · For: Chapter 5
hmmm you've planted nice seeds for drama here ;)

please don't make this story too cliche though - just cuz there's too many of them. can't wait for more!

Name: Pissenoffanis (Anonymous) · Date: 09/14/07 23:36 · For: Chapter 4
Wow do sirius and allison not need to breathe or something? :) You've started the story very well though - there's a lot of potential for interesting things to happen!

Name: HogwartsGirly124 (Signed) · Date: 08/13/07 21:17 · For: Chapter 5
I have just finished reading your story! It was really goood! I found it very interesting! Great job hun!
- Sophia -

Name: ella_wyse (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 6:08 · For: Chapter 4
ooh, it's getting interesting...

Name: ella_wyse (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 5:51 · For: Chapter 2
It's pretty funny; I have this friend called Eve and she's the exact opposite of yours. Tiny, shy, quiet: when answering questions in class you have to strain your ears to hear her. In her former life I reckon she was a mouse. So it's a bit weird getting to know this new Eve who's a totally different character to mine. But you're doing a really good job convincing me. I love it.

Name: ella_wyse (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 5:44 · For: Chapter 1
Wow. congrats on such a cool story. Constructive critisism: it all happened too fast for me. Maybe next time introduce more of your characters before killing them off. But that's just a pointer. Otherwise, you have a really good writing style and the text flows really well.

Name: pinky witch (Signed) · Date: 10/10/06 12:56 · For: Chapter 5
nooo james cant like eve lmao bt then i rememberd it all works out in the end
lmao great story

Name: padfootnflawks (Signed) · Date: 10/01/06 15:53 · For: Chapter 5
*sigh* it still says that the last time you updated was 9 mouths ago...well mabey some day...

Name: padfootnflawks (Signed) · Date: 10/01/06 15:39 · For: Chapter 5
OMG!!! DID YOU UPDATE!! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay, I'm trying to remeber...I reveiwed the 5 chapter, but right now there are know reveiw on it...so you must have rewritten this chapter!!! I hope so! Hey I can go and see on you summery thing the last time you updated...YEAH!! I will be back!!

Name: padfootnflawks (Signed) · Date: 05/23/06 17:59 · For: Chapter 1
HELLO???? are you there???? I found your story in like December and i really like it and i cheak to see like evrey to days to see if you updated....im starting to give up hoPe...:( will a smily help? :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) : ):) :):):):):):):):):):) PEAZZZ UPDATE!!!

Name: heartachin4harry (Signed) · Date: 12/23/05 10:30 · For: Chapter 1
Your story was so good! I love how Lily is starting to get jealous. And James is starting to possibly like Eve. I feel so bad for Eve, though. I am so happy for Remus. Finally. And, just like Sirius to miss all the action because he is snogging some random girl. Update soon!

Name: mollywobbles (Signed) · Date: 12/14/05 14:44 · For: Chapter 4
hi! i loved your story! you did a really good job portraying remus's anxiousness in becoming close with someone, good job! i hope you update soon!

Name: believe_in_yourself201 (Signed) · Date: 12/13/05 19:14 · For: Chapter 4
oh my god its been two months update soon ggreat chappie

Author's Response: I know it's been a really really long time.... I just sent the 5th chapter in last night, and I really really hope it'll be up. During the summer it was basically one thing to the next, and starting high school this year was a transition, so I have every intention of speeding up the chapters from now on.

Name: luckiducki824 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/05 18:45 · For: Chapter 4
i absolutely LOVE this chapter cuz of remus and overcoming his shyness in a sense....... but ya i thot it was AWESOME OPOSSUM!!! ttyl

Name: vanillasweety (Signed) · Date: 10/07/05 14:53 · For: Chapter 4
great chappie write more soon please

Name: Alice Waters (Signed) · Date: 10/06/05 23:45 · For: Chapter 4
love it love it love it love it!!!!!!!!

Name: mime (Anonymous) · Date: 09/17/05 13:48 · For: Chapter 3
Pretty good so far, it has a few flaws, yes, but not many. I'm really enjoying it so far, and I can't wait until the next update.

Name: mlstr (Signed) · Date: 09/16/05 14:44 · For: Chapter 3
Hey! I really, really love your story. I love how it's different from nearly all the other ones [starts at the end of the year], and your characters are really good. Update soon!!!!!!!! -Maria

Name: mlstr (Signed) · Date: 09/16/05 14:42 · For: Chapter 3
Hey! I really, really love your story. I love how it's different from nearly all the other ones [starts at the end of the year], and your characters are really good. Update soon!!!!!!!! -Maria

Name: evil_fairy (Signed) · Date: 09/08/05 16:19 · For: Chapter 3
That was a really good chapter! Great way to describe how Lily reacted to being in Petunia's wedding. Loved it! Update soon please.

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