Wow. Just...wow. You really deserve a long review in praise of this chapter, but I am speechless. This was simply brilliant--you've tied together everything that you've written since the beginning of The Power of Emotion and done so in truly magnificent style. I especially loved Cedric's line--so simple, and yet, so heartwrenching. Great job.
Hello me again!!! I find you on all these websites, I find it funny. Anyway I am still dying to find out what happens at the end of the story. I am very anxious. Oh and DONT KILL RON!!!! If you di it would be very evil, and I would cry. see you on another site!! -Chow Chow Bye
What's with the deep breath?! That was amazing! JK is going to have her work cut out to do better than that - it was absolutely stunning! Without wanting to sound morbid, I like the way everyone was hurt - purely because that is what would happen in a real battle. You're definitely on a level with JKR herself, well done and a 10 isn't high enough to give this story justice.
-cry's-........-cry's-........-cry's- ....w...wh...what do u say to some thing like this......-cry's- I.... I will put it in it's most simple form .... sad, asome, emoshenal, true, hart filling and well i cryed all the way throw to tell the troth i have not been on for a whiel and i stated reading today on capter 27 the one where u kill the head master -crys- the tears i cry are rill no joke i rilly cryed i'am crying now (stuped me) ........-cry's-
Great chapter but PLEASE submitt the next one soon, I can't STAND it!
You've done so well capturing emotions even in the strongest of situations. For that I congratualte you. Excellent chapter once again!
Tears at work again. You get me into so much trouble here. Great chapter. I only wish we had something like that ceremony outside of Potterverse. ~~~Kat
Wow! Great post! I also really liked the conversation between Harry and Ron, it seemed so real. Awesome job, and keep up the great work!
What can i say? - WOW!! you have done an excellent job. cant wait to see how it ends xxx
Right, reviewing now is a little odd, because I'm completely shameless and couldn't resist reading up to chapter 29 when I learned that it was available. However, I'm going to contiune to leave you my thoughts here on this site.
At first I thought the "goodbyes" were a little ooc, but then I realised that it's hard to tell what would be ic in that situation - it is final, after all. They were all thoughtfully written and touched my heart, especially the Ron/Harry conversation - You’re the glue that holds us all together. - very simple, very true and defenitely something that Ron could say.
I actually smiled widely when Fred said A fan club that reaches into the Netherworld – now that’s power! - it was perfect!
No, I feel that my thoughts keep drifting over to chapter 29, I hope that one will be here soon so I can have my say on it. And then, more importantly - I'm dying for chapter 30, give it here! :)
Absolutely stunning - I really hope you can update the last chapters quickly!
I loved the good-byes! Thank you for updating so quickly! Do you think you'll have chapter 30 up before friday????
SHE HAS CHP 28 AND 29 ON FANFICTION.NET!!!!! HOW COULD YOU MELINDA!!! (i won't say what becos i don't want 2 spoil anyone) MADAM B AND I R VERY MAD RIGHT NOW!!!!
that was brilliant, cos ive been away i way kind of high on all the chapters that i had missed so i went onto fanfiction.net. no words can describe the marvels of this story, it is so well written, realistic, intruiging that its like your getting stuck in a spider's web. definately my favourite ever- joint with the original HP by JKR
ahhh! I'm almost laughing at all the poor little people who haven't read chapter 29 yet! Will you have chapter 30 up here before you do at the *other sites*
NO! DON'T KILL GINNY!!! She's too special to Harry! That would be utterly cruel if you killed her!
BRILLANT! AWESOME! Perfectly written! Keep up the GREAT work! You're an excellent writer.
Another AWESOME post! I really like how you wrote the conversation between Dumbledore and Harry, it was excellently written!