Reviewer: Snapple92
Date: 06/14/05 11:21
Chapter: Curse of the Damned

Hello me again!!! I find you on all these websites, I find it funny. Anyway I am still dying to find out what happens at the end of the story. I am very anxious. Oh and DONT KILL RON!!!! If you di it would be very evil, and I would cry. see you on another site!! -Chow Chow Bye

Reviewer: Stormy
Date: 06/14/05 11:02
Chapter: Curse of the Damned

What's with the deep breath?! That was amazing! JK is going to have her work cut out to do better than that - it was absolutely stunning! Without wanting to sound morbid, I like the way everyone was hurt - purely because that is what would happen in a real battle. You're definitely on a level with JKR herself, well done and a 10 isn't high enough to give this story justice.

Reviewer: Ashleigh
Date: 06/14/05 9:37
Chapter: Back in the Chamber

-cry's-........-cry's-........-cry's- ....w...wh...what do u say to some thing like this......-cry's- I.... I will put it in it's most simple form .... sad, asome, emoshenal, true, hart filling and well i cryed all the way throw to tell the troth i have not been on for a whiel and i stated reading today on capter 27 the one where u kill the head master -crys- the tears i cry are rill no joke i rilly cryed i'am crying now (stuped me) ........-cry's-

Reviewer: bookaholic_au
Date: 06/13/05 17:43
Chapter: Back in the Chamber

Great chapter but PLEASE submitt the next one soon, I can't STAND it!

Reviewer: Katastrophe
Date: 06/13/05 12:02
Chapter: Back in the Chamber

You've done so well capturing emotions even in the strongest of situations. For that I congratualte you. Excellent chapter once again!

Reviewer: Katastrophe
Date: 06/13/05 10:47
Chapter: The Winds of Change

Tears at work again. You get me into so much trouble here. Great chapter. I only wish we had something like that ceremony outside of Potterverse. ~~~Kat

Reviewer: mstiquerose
Date: 06/13/05 10:12
Chapter: Back in the Chamber

Wow! Great post! I also really liked the conversation between Harry and Ron, it seemed so real. Awesome job, and keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Kezyaz
Date: 06/13/05 8:36
Chapter: Back in the Chamber

What can i say? - WOW!! you have done an excellent job. cant wait to see how it ends xxx

Reviewer: Fantasium
Date: 06/13/05 7:04
Chapter: Back in the Chamber

Right, reviewing now is a little odd, because I'm completely shameless and couldn't resist reading up to chapter 29 when I learned that it was available. However, I'm going to contiune to leave you my thoughts here on this site.

At first I thought the "goodbyes" were a little ooc, but then I realised that it's hard to tell what would be ic in that situation - it is final, after all. They were all thoughtfully written and touched my heart, especially the Ron/Harry conversation - You’re the glue that holds us all together. - very simple, very true and defenitely something that Ron could say.
I actually smiled widely when Fred said A fan club that reaches into the Netherworld – now that’s power! - it was perfect!

No, I feel that my thoughts keep drifting over to chapter 29, I hope that one will be here soon so I can have my say on it. And then, more importantly - I'm dying for chapter 30, give it here! :)

Reviewer: Stormy
Date: 06/13/05 3:03
Chapter: Back in the Chamber

Absolutely stunning - I really hope you can update the last chapters quickly!

Reviewer: Salina43
Date: 06/12/05 23:03
Chapter: Back in the Chamber

I loved the good-byes! Thank you for updating so quickly! Do you think you'll have chapter 30 up before friday????

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 06/12/05 11:01
Chapter: It Begins...

SHE HAS CHP 28 AND 29 ON FANFICTION.NET!!!!! HOW COULD YOU MELINDA!!! (i won't say what becos i don't want 2 spoil anyone) MADAM B AND I R VERY MAD RIGHT NOW!!!!

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 06/12/05 7:06
Chapter: It Begins...

that was brilliant, cos ive been away i way kind of high on all the chapters that i had missed so i went onto no words can describe the marvels of this story, it is so well written, realistic, intruiging that its like your getting stuck in a spider's web. definately my favourite ever- joint with the original HP by JKR

Reviewer: Salina43
Date: 06/11/05 21:31
Chapter: It Begins...

ahhh! I'm almost laughing at all the poor little people who haven't read chapter 29 yet! Will you have chapter 30 up here before you do at the *other sites*

Reviewer: mstiquerose
Date: 06/11/05 20:30
Chapter: It Begins...

NO! DON'T KILL GINNY!!! She's too special to Harry! That would be utterly cruel if you killed her!

Reviewer: mstiquerose
Date: 06/11/05 20:26
Chapter: The Winds of Change

Great post!

Reviewer: Jamie
Date: 06/11/05 18:18
Chapter: It Begins...


Reviewer: mstiquerose
Date: 06/11/05 17:24
Chapter: Sacrifice

BRILLANT! AWESOME! Perfectly written! Keep up the GREAT work! You're an excellent writer.

Reviewer: mstiquerose
Date: 06/11/05 17:22
Chapter: Summons

Another AWESOME post! I really like how you wrote the conversation between Dumbledore and Harry, it was excellently written!

Reviewer: Campbell58
Date: 06/11/05 15:54
Chapter: The Winds of Change

We muggles should be so lucky as to have a ceremony like this one. Incredible Incredible job.

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