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Reviews For The Boy Who Lived

Name: Youth (Anonymous) · Date: 08/10/05 13:28 · For: One-Shot
That was wonderful. 10/10!

Name: Saphira (Signed) · Date: 06/04/05 16:56 · For: One-Shot
That was fantastic!! I really enjoyed the way you depicted Voldemort - cruel and merciless - just as JKR created him. I also liked the way you almost drew a parallel with James' battle and the battle with Harry and Voldemort in GoF - they never gave up, either of them. Finally, the characters really came to life on the computer which means.........this was a BRILLIANT fanfic

Name: Rita Writer (Signed) · Date: 05/02/05 16:26 · For: One-Shot

Constructive critisizm first, then the fun. ;) I only saw two things wronge, but I might as well point them out of the way. The silencing spell, you said, was Silentio. I think it's supposed to be Silencio. That was very minor though, so don't think to much on it. The only other thing was at the very end. Voldemort lost his body once the curse hit him, so he wouldn't have been able to talk to Harry and jump out of the window.

Now that that's out of the way, I get to rave about what I love. This was wonderfully written. You wrote Voldemort really well in character; with no mercy. It think it was good that you made a small original character just for that scene. That way you could show how crule Voldemort was without messing up the cannon. I'm glad you gave him a name. It simply makes him better as an original character. Good job on that.

The small bit of dialouge between James and Voldemort was very creative. We don't know what happened in Godrics Hollow, and if you're going to write about it, you might as well add a little to it. Once again, Voldemort's well in character, so good job with that.

I don't know why, but the way you described Lily and James death was very good. I think it was the way you cut off where James died and went strait to Lily that made his good. It wasn't overly dramatic, which is good, because nobody was there except for Voldemort. Overall, great job!

Author's Response: Hmm, you know I just sort of blocked it out of my mind that there actually was a Silencing Charm? Lol..thanks for letting me know, though. =)
On ol' Voldy...you misunderstand. Maybe what I wrote didn't quite explain this, but what I meant was that Voldemort sort of...glided out the window. Like the ghosts in the HP movies do, that they just walk through things. Voldemort wasn't quite a ghost, yes, but he was reduced to something close, was he not? I dunno, I might be off in that assessment, but still. That's what I meant. =)
I love writing Voldemort just because of that--he's a merciless being who doesn't take pity on anyone and treats others like dirt. He's such a cruel character, and that makes him interesting to write about.
Thanks very much for your comments! I'm very glad you liked this.

Name: xAthenax (Signed) · Date: 04/24/05 13:50 · For: One-Shot
This is by far one of the best fan fics about the night James and Lily died. Wonderful!

Name: xAthenax (Signed) · Date: 04/24/05 13:50 · For: One-Shot
This is by far one of the best fan fics about the night James and Lily died. Wonderful!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it. =)

Name: Jade777 (Signed) · Date: 04/23/05 21:36 · For: One-Shot
That was so cool! I could never write a story like that even if I tried. You have got to write more. It was so awesome just like the other one. It's perfect! It's a ten for you.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! This is, however, a one shot, so I won't be continuing it. Still, I have written another fic, Of Love and Destiny, in the H/Hr section, and I have a few plans for other fics as well. =)
Thanks again!

Name: prongs123 (Signed) · Date: 04/23/05 17:53 · For: One-Shot
great job!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: Rowan_and_Rose (Signed) · Date: 04/23/05 11:52 · For: One-Shot
I really liked all the description of the setting and the different spells Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! One or two of the spells are of my creation, while the others are from canon. =)
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Name: Billie Bowtrunckle (Anonymous) · Date: 04/21/05 12:54 · For: One-Shot
Very impressed! I just read your bio and was surprised - your write far beyond your age!!! Also, the summary for you next story is absolutely enthralling (a nice twist on the time-turner idea). Looks really interesting...if it's written as well as this one-shot it'll be extremely popular! Great job.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks very much! I swear, this review has made me feel extremely uplifted and...giddy. =D I suddenly feel like writing now. Again, thank you!
On my other story, I'm glad that you are interested. =) It won't be posted too soon--I still have another fan fic up that I want to finish--but, soon enough.

Name: mudblood79 (Signed) · Date: 04/04/05 23:59 · For: One-Shot

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: Dan_D_Lion (Signed) · Date: 04/03/05 1:59 · For: One-Shot
It's just not fair... Why did they have to die? Omg...

Author's Response: I know...but, who would really want to read about a boy with two parents and a pretty normal and content life except for an evil wizard everyone is after? =)

Name: Kerian (Signed) · Date: 03/31/05 17:18 · For: One-Shot
Good. Your first 3 paragrpahs were especially well done!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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