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Name: Valentinia (Signed) · Date: 10/08/06 23:02 · For: Chapter 21
I'm not sure if that can officially be considered a cliffhanger - but I sure see it as one! I'm dying to find out if my guess is right... *Waits in anticipation for next update*...
Anyway, I like this chapter. It's good how Andrea is actually upset about George leaving like that - I hate when the girl is just so... accepting of everything! I can't wait to see what's up with the UFFC, though! Anyway... this is definately one of my all-time favorite stories, and this chapter has only added to my good impression of it.
I enjoyed the reference to Siobhan, too... :D *Love that story too*


Name: SoL_leeks (Signed) · Date: 10/08/06 14:52 · For: Chapter 21
hey good job writing the chapter.. its about time lolz i hope u update soon


Name: redhead_weasley08 (Signed) · Date: 10/08/06 14:24 · For: Hogwarts Express
I really like this story... can't wait to see what happens next... Poor Sophie!


Name: KitKat517 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/06 22:07 · For: Chapter 21
Yay! Another chapter. I can't waitj to find out what this 'life-altering secret' is and I agree with Andrea. Revealing said 'life-altering secret' in the middle of class might not go well. Please update quickly!
~KitKat


Name: potteronpotluvhim (Signed) · Date: 10/07/06 20:00 · For: Chapter 21
wow an update worth the wait though the chapter was awesome plz update quick though cuz i wanna no wat the lighting bond is k? thnx


Name: LaneTechFreshie (Signed) · Date: 10/07/06 19:36 · For: Chapter 21
Before I read this tomorrow morning...let me tell you taht I had to do a double take when I saw that email saying this had been updated. I was all ready to go to the next email, when I reread the name. I was surprised. But pleased! I'll have to read it in the morning...afternoon...though. :-)


Name: hogwarts_pupil (Signed) · Date: 08/14/06 0:59 · For: The Wake of the Departure
UPDATE!!! er...please??

:)


Name: SoL_leeks (Signed) · Date: 08/04/06 17:11 · For: The Wake of the Departure
hey this is a great story i wish u would update soon im dying to know what happens next


Name: SoL_leeks (Signed) · Date: 08/02/06 15:52 · For: Beaters and Umbridge
i liie this story its the 5 year version of the HPB but from an other pespective


Name: TheVanishingAct (Signed) · Date: 07/29/06 0:38 · For: The Library, the Lab, and the Anticipation

So, first off: SQUEE LAV-LAV IS IN THIS CHAPTER. She was so in character too. I've been searching for Lav!fics... they just don't seem to be around anymore I guess. *sighs and retreats to little corner* *calls from little corner* It's a bit dusty over here! *waves away dust*





Yes, erm, ok, enough seriousness. I really like this Neal/Alicia relationship dynamic is very interesting. I hope I get to see it develop in the future. :) AND FLET! NO! FLET, COME BACK! *goes off in the woods and chases Flet*





Nitpicks are a must, obviously. "“Big surprise there,” Lavender gigled." "Giggled" is missing a "g". "“My and Fred’s Secret Lab,” he grinned mischievously. “Bill told us about this place, the rest of the corridor is dedicated to Prefect stuff, bathrooms, common rooms, study rooms.”" This whole bit of dialogue reads wrong... I'd make "My and Fred's" turn into "Our", replace the comma behind place with a period, and take the last part and scrap it, or turn it around so it reads well with the rest of the sentence. :)





Great job as always! *hug*



Name: Weasley forever (Signed) · Date: 07/27/06 14:01 · For: The Wake of the Departure
Oh my gosh! I love this story. I'm dying to know what the lightning bond is. Please don't say this i sa story that's been abandoned because I have to know ho wit ends. Please write more!! It's a great story!


Name: Fauna (Signed) · Date: 07/27/06 10:59 · For: The Wake of the Departure
Coolie. Good job.


Name: Fauna (Signed) · Date: 07/27/06 10:35 · For: The Exit
Really good, smashing!


Name: Fauna (Signed) · Date: 07/27/06 10:18 · For: The Trouble With Girls
that is great. wonderfully hysterical! (the end i mean) Again, good flair, and a good twist.


Name: Fauna (Signed) · Date: 07/27/06 10:08 · For: Invisibility Gum
SEE HIM!!!!! I WANT TO SEE SIRIUS!


Name: Fauna (Signed) · Date: 07/27/06 9:52 · For: Kites and Sackings
surprises, surprises,


Name: Fauna (Signed) · Date: 07/27/06 9:31 · For: Mooncalves and Dungbombs
That was hysterical! Like i said, good flow!


Name: Fauna (Signed) · Date: 07/27/06 9:15 · For: The First Break-up
That was so good. It was sweet and romantic! I like love stories! Keep it up!


Name: Fauna (Signed) · Date: 07/27/06 9:01 · For: Hogsmeade and the Quibbler
very good. Glad they are togther, and, i expect you're tired of hearing this, but good flow!


Name: Fauna (Signed) · Date: 07/27/06 8:51 · For: Dropping Eaves & Deciphering Reason
Sooooo sad! That was a really god chapter. tos of tension, but not necessaruly bad tension, keep it up!


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