Reviewer: SoL_leeks
Date: 10/08/06 14:52
Chapter: Chapter 21

hey good job writing the chapter.. its about time lolz i hope u update soon

Reviewer: redhead_weasley08
Date: 10/08/06 14:24
Chapter: Hogwarts Express

I really like this story... can't wait to see what happens next... Poor Sophie!

Reviewer: KitKat517
Date: 10/07/06 22:07
Chapter: Chapter 21

Yay! Another chapter. I can't waitj to find out what this 'life-altering secret' is and I agree with Andrea. Revealing said 'life-altering secret' in the middle of class might not go well. Please update quickly!
~KitKat

Reviewer: potteronpotluvhim
Date: 10/07/06 20:00
Chapter: Chapter 21

wow an update worth the wait though the chapter was awesome plz update quick though cuz i wanna no wat the lighting bond is k? thnx

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 10/07/06 19:36
Chapter: Chapter 21

Before I read this tomorrow morning...let me tell you taht I had to do a double take when I saw that email saying this had been updated. I was all ready to go to the next email, when I reread the name. I was surprised. But pleased! I'll have to read it in the morning...afternoon...though. :-)

Reviewer: hogwarts_pupil
Date: 08/14/06 0:59
Chapter: The Wake of the Departure

UPDATE!!! er...please??

:)

Reviewer: SoL_leeks
Date: 08/04/06 17:11
Chapter: The Wake of the Departure

hey this is a great story i wish u would update soon im dying to know what happens next

Reviewer: SoL_leeks
Date: 08/02/06 15:52
Chapter: Beaters and Umbridge

i liie this story its the 5 year version of the HPB but from an other pespective

Reviewer: TheVanishingAct
Date: 07/29/06 0:38
Chapter: The Library, the Lab, and the Anticipation

So, first off: SQUEE LAV-LAV IS IN THIS CHAPTER. She was so in character too. I've been searching for Lav!fics... they just don't seem to be around anymore I guess. *sighs and retreats to little corner* *calls from little corner* It's a bit dusty over here! *waves away dust*





Yes, erm, ok, enough seriousness. I really like this Neal/Alicia relationship dynamic is very interesting. I hope I get to see it develop in the future. :) AND FLET! NO! FLET, COME BACK! *goes off in the woods and chases Flet*





Nitpicks are a must, obviously. "“Big surprise there,” Lavender gigled." "Giggled" is missing a "g". "“My and Fred’s Secret Lab,” he grinned mischievously. “Bill told us about this place, the rest of the corridor is dedicated to Prefect stuff, bathrooms, common rooms, study rooms.”" This whole bit of dialogue reads wrong... I'd make "My and Fred's" turn into "Our", replace the comma behind place with a period, and take the last part and scrap it, or turn it around so it reads well with the rest of the sentence. :)





Great job as always! *hug*

Reviewer: Weasley forever
Date: 07/27/06 14:01
Chapter: The Wake of the Departure

Oh my gosh! I love this story. I'm dying to know what the lightning bond is. Please don't say this i sa story that's been abandoned because I have to know ho wit ends. Please write more!! It's a great story!

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/27/06 10:59
Chapter: The Wake of the Departure

Coolie. Good job.

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/27/06 10:35
Chapter: The Exit

Really good, smashing!

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/27/06 10:18
Chapter: The Trouble With Girls

that is great. wonderfully hysterical! (the end i mean) Again, good flair, and a good twist.

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/27/06 10:08
Chapter: Invisibility Gum

SEE HIM!!!!! I WANT TO SEE SIRIUS!

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/27/06 9:52
Chapter: Kites and Sackings

surprises, surprises,

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/27/06 9:31
Chapter: Mooncalves and Dungbombs

That was hysterical! Like i said, good flow!

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/27/06 9:15
Chapter: The First Break-up

That was so good. It was sweet and romantic! I like love stories! Keep it up!

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/27/06 9:01
Chapter: Hogsmeade and the Quibbler

very good. Glad they are togther, and, i expect you're tired of hearing this, but good flow!

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/27/06 8:51
Chapter: Dropping Eaves & Deciphering Reason

Sooooo sad! That was a really god chapter. tos of tension, but not necessaruly bad tension, keep it up!

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/27/06 8:40
Chapter: The Library, the Lab, and the Anticipation

again, keep up the good work.

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