Reviewer: Kait
Date: 10/14/05 9:55
Chapter: Dropping Eaves & Deciphering Reason

Not so different to the original version! Of course, EXCELLENT update! I love this fic so much - it's just right! I think that Fred and George's convo was a little strange, but I think Fred's amused reactions more than made up for George's oddness! Throughly enjopyable chapter, although, I have to disagree with HerEvilMajesty and say that I hate misunderstandings - I like romances to be plain and simple, thank you very much... Pity misunderstandings are much more like real life!! :D Great chapter - definitely one of your best - 10!! Can't wait for next update!

Author's Response: I think the only major plot change was the big conversation between fred and george, and they talk about how even THEY realize that it's weird, but you've got t assume that they've got solid heads on their shoulders....just look at their marketing genius, offering the defense stuff...I'm glad that you think it's one of the best chapters yet. I agree, because I put a TON more work into revising it than I did with anything else up to now. Betas are awesome.

Reviewer: HerEviLMajesty
Date: 10/12/05 12:01
Chapter: Dropping Eaves & Deciphering Reason

Ahh, conflict. I was waiting for this for such a long time. It seemed rather bizarre that Fred and George had that conversation about Andrea, lol, all civilised and all, but I guess even they can have their moments. I'm glad the 'misunderstanding' chapter is finally here -- it only adds to thicken the plot and that's the best part of any story. Brilliant, still. Can't wait till they finally hook up at Hogsmeade. Btw, where have you been? What took so long for this update? Everything alright with you hun? Hope you're doing alright..and no rush with the next chapter..take your time. We (your loyal readers) will wait. Take care of yourself. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed. I agree, and so did Fred and George, that the conversation was very odd...! lol. Anyway, I'm not dead. This chapter just was dead for a long time. Well, more correctly it kept getting murdered by the mods. But after working with two betas (the first one... well, the second one was awesome! we went over the first beta's comments together...) I think this chapter turned out better than almost all the others. Probably better than all of the others. There were points where I was talking with my trusted beta and saying, "how come no one told me that my writing was complete crap before now?" Anyway. Good news: we shouldn't have to wait all too long for the next chapter...It was origanally the last half of this chapter, so it's basically finished... Thanks for the devotion! It means a lot!

Reviewer: Her_Holiness
Date: 09/19/05 19:17
Chapter: The Library, the Lab, and the Anticipation

please update soon or i'll die !

Reviewer: DracosHumbleHouseElf
Date: 08/21/05 11:00
Chapter: The Library, the Lab, and the Anticipation

Oh god you have to update this, it is amazing!!!!!

Reviewer: the trouble twins
Date: 08/20/05 0:49
Chapter: The Library, the Lab, and the Anticipation

i luv your fan fic sooo much! but this is my favorite chapter. pleaz hurry with the next chapter cause i'm gonna die!!!! i'm glad that someone is finally wrighting a really good fic about the other charecters, like the twins!please hurry with that chapter cause i check everyday!oh yeah, i know what the lighning bond is so hurry up and finish the fic so everyone can realize i'm right! HA!HA!HA! LOL!!!!! P.S. THIS IS KATIE RIGHTING NOT BRITTANY!

Reviewer: DracosHumbleHouseElf
Date: 08/18/05 13:37
Chapter: Hogwarts Express

You know what i think of it, as i was the one helping you ont he forums ;) Best canon story ever, and absolutly NO mary-sue It has also come to my attension that it has been recommended in the forums by...your truly 10/10

Reviewer: HerEviLMajesty
Date: 07/31/05 16:25
Chapter: The Library, the Lab, and the Anticipation

last review..i swear! i jus noticed the author's note..eheh. i see the reference to 'emperor's new groove' i was expecting this to be said next -- 'why do we even HAVE that lever?!' lol. anyway, update soon plz! waiting anxiously.

Reviewer: Cristina32
Date: 07/27/05 17:57
Chapter: The Library, the Lab, and the Anticipation

i luv this story! Where is the next chapter! A and G need to get a move on! and i totally agree with herevilmajesty, cliffhangers suck! i tried to just read the story again while waiting, but i couldnt, i just got all jumpy and wanted to know whats gonna happen next even worse than before! i was just wondering, since fred and george arent at hogwarts during andrea's 6th year how will A and Gs relationship go on? and is fred always gonna be such a messed up playboy? cause i like F and G equally and F is just really stupid like this (but it fits the story great). well anyway great story and submit that next chapter already!!! PLEASE ! =)

Reviewer: HerEviLMajesty
Date: 07/14/05 19:46
Chapter: The Library, the Lab, and the Anticipation

*looks over past review with horror* DAMN, THAT WAS LONG. I forgot one thing, lol. They were studying 'the golden age of piracy'? You crack me up! I love them pirates, especially Jack Sparrow...*drink up me hearties, yo ho*

Reviewer: HerEviLMajesty
Date: 07/14/05 19:42
Chapter: The Library, the Lab, and the Anticipation

Sorry I haven't been able to review any of your chapters lately. I'm taking summer classes and I'm also working part-time as a telemarketer (lol, its the worst job in the world, but it requires me to do very little, so I don't mind it too much). So on top of that, my computer decided to go all haywires on me, so I couldn't comment on your super-kawaii story (I dunno how to spell that, but Gwen says it in Hollaback Girl). You don't have to apologize, lol, that actually made me smile all stupidly at my screen. One thing though -- why do authors (especially fanfiction authors) love cliffhangers? *shakes fist* They're no good! I hate waiting for the next part, but this time I'll have to make an exception. I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, and after reading the entire story again, I'm pretty sure I know what the bond is. *Smirk*, very clever. One question -- since Fred's the playboy, is he going to hook up with someone for V-Day? Or is he going to remain as the playboy? Last thing, I swear. Neal is just annoying. Feel like whacking him upside the head sometimes. Sorry for wanting to mutilate a beloved character, but he deserves it. Keep em coming. You still got a wicked story. 10/10.

Reviewer: Her_Holiness
Date: 07/14/05 10:10
Chapter: The Library, the Lab, and the Anticipation

i really like this story i was just wondering how many chapters you are planning on having and if theres a sequel cause if theres not i'll freak seriously i will and i love your story. P.Si love your story.

Reviewer: Tink
Date: 06/22/05 21:43
Chapter: The Library, the Lab, and the Anticipation

Gar, now I have to wait for another chapter. Hopefully it will be soon because I can't wait for George and Andrea to actually get together! Andrea is so lucky. I'll probably reread the whole thing until the next chapter comes out. Your characters seem so real that by the time the 6th book comes out I'll probably be reading it and waiting to hear about Andrea and Sophie and everyone and they won't be there! Ah well, all the more reason to read your story! Excellent job! :-D

Reviewer: Tink
Date: 06/22/05 21:32
Chapter: Christmastime Is Here

Oooh, awesome chapter! I loved the little nieces and nephews, they sounded so cute! I loved Oliver Wood, he's such a cool character and I miss him now that he's gone (I hope that doesn't sound too weird...) Anyway, awesome chapter! This fic is amazing! I'm definetly putting it up on my recs because I'm obsessed and I can't stop reading it.

Reviewer: Renee25
Date: 06/21/05 13:16
Chapter: The Library, the Lab, and the Anticipation

Dag nab it! Now I have to wait for an update! It's okay, though. The quality of your story is worth it. Just think, of the millions of sites we could be perusing at this moment, we have chosen to read your story... I can hardly wait for your next chapter.

Reviewer: Renee25
Date: 06/21/05 12:41
Chapter: Christmastime Is Here

I love Oliver Wood! He's my third favorite character (behind Sirius Black and Lee Jordan, respectively). Thanks for putting him in this chapter. They neglected to put him in Prisoner of Azkaban (my favorite book).

Reviewer: Renee25
Date: 06/21/05 12:20
Chapter: Mistletoe and Misguided Dreams

Fred is a dork, even though he saved everyone's life. It's nice that he's concerned about his brother, though. And he APPROVES of Andrea. I'm still liking how this ties into Order of the Phoenix.

Reviewer: Renee25
Date: 06/21/05 10:42
Chapter: Matches Can Burn

What a lovely dedication you made for this chapter, and I can think of no one more deserving. Wasn't the last one dedicated to Josh Groban, or something like that? I love him, too (but I don't want any trouble)! Lee's cousin so cool. Clearly she could be somebody's worst nightmare, but that's why they should be friends with her before they decide who their enemies are! Did JKR give Lee a cousin? I really need to reread the books before 6 comes out.

Reviewer: Renee25
Date: 06/21/05 0:45
Chapter: Say Goodnight and Go

Again, my favorite quote is not from the actual story: "I’m still taking entries for that Harry Potter Universe raffle. I hope JK gets her entry to me soon…" That was a very sweet chapter.

Reviewer: Renee25
Date: 06/21/05 0:25
Chapter: Complications and Meddlers

I love how the Weasley twins are prominent characters, and Flet seems like such a sweety. Though I'm late for the posting, I did like the following quote: “Have you and Malfoy set a date for the wedding yet?”

Reviewer: Renee25
Date: 06/21/05 0:13
Chapter: Completely Mental, That One

I was in this comfortable lull as I read; not seeing each word, but the entire story. Then I got to your Beauty and the Beast homeage and laughed out loud when Malfoy planned their future. I'm sorry to say, I don't have a favorite quote from this chapter. But my favorite word is 'hooah' (usually seen in all caps) and my favorite quote (I'm sure/hoping you won't be insulted) is from Pirates of the Caribbean: "Do you have the courage and fortitude to follow orders in the face of danger and almost certain death?"

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