Reviewer: justbee
Date: 01/24/06 17:34
Chapter: Kites and Sackings

wow, that was great, I really like how you've developed Fred and the kite thing was cute. Good Job!

Author's Response: Yes, we'll see a lot of development with Fred (a lot compared to what's going on with the other secondary characters) in the next few chapters, and I think there will be a few surprises for everyone... Mwahaha! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Jenn_Weasley
Date: 01/24/06 13:09
Chapter: Kites and Sackings

Oooo - very interesting developments!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks!!!

Author's Response: I was glad to get the three reviews from you. *throws confetti because you're back* I think you'll probably like the next chapter. At least, I hope people do... It's relatively new to the whole story (I wrote a lot of the ending chapters before the middle ones) and so I don't adore it yet, but I never like any of my new stuff.

Reviewer: Jenn_Weasley
Date: 01/24/06 13:02
Chapter: Mooncalves and Dungbombs

"a special, instantly dry ink that would not smudge while one was writing with it." - Yay for other left-handers!!! Emeline has a lot more self-control than I could dream of having. Another good chapter!!!

Author's Response: Wizards are just cool enough to come up with that kind of thing for their lefties. Also, with Emeline, it's not so much self-control as it her personality... She's someone who was painfully shy for a very long time, and she's been working on that while she's been at Hogwarts. She's one of those total sweeties. She's based loosely on one of my best friends, who is, without a doubt, the nicest girl I know. So, she will start to slip out of the shell, because she's very annoyed, but she'll remember that she's still Emeline, and still a very quiet, sweet person, who, at times, just gets slightly fiery.

Reviewer: Jenn_Weasley
Date: 01/24/06 12:43
Chapter: The First Break-up

Everyone needs a Room of Requirement, I think. Good chapter - I love seeing the sweet side of George.

Author's Response: *big romantic sigh* I love the Room of Requirement. George definitely has a bit of a softer side to him than Fred, though they both care about people a ton. Thanks for your comments.

Reviewer: Kait
Date: 01/24/06 12:21
Chapter: Kites and Sackings

Oooh! It's getting interesting! Love Dumbledore's conversation with the twins in this chapter - very JKR, to be honest! I like it! Can't wait for more information about Harry and Andrea! *10* :D

Author's Response: The plot is definitely growing thicker. Seems like Dumbledore was a favorite in this chapter. Hopefully what I've got in store in the next chapter will seduce everyone just as much. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: _spinifex_
Date: 01/24/06 2:43
Chapter: Kites and Sackings

Really, really cool. You know, you never did say whether or not Andrea and Harry are twins, so I'll take that as a yes... anyway, I like the story, it's awesome. Dumbledore's bit was really funny. If you don't review then I may have to get a bit, uh... stern. 10/10

Author's Response: You go ahead and believe your assumptions about Harry and Andrea being twins. *grins wickedly* Anyway, I really feel lucky with Dumbledore in this chapter. It was a stroke of genius/inspiration, and I love it when that happens. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Roommate of the Quillster
Date: 01/24/06 1:11
Chapter: Kites and Sackings

Basically I love this story. You have an excellent Dumbledore. "Absolutley clueless towards everything that is not happening." Yes, I loved that part. It was awesome! And I too will never forget the day that Andrea punched Harry... :) mostly because Fred and George will never forget it! I really like the characterization and everything you put in your story. I can't wait for the next chapters to be up! They're amazing too!!! PS, I heart Andrea... she's sneaky, and she has to be, I mean, she is dating a Weasley after all. And I just love them! :) Nice job--you're amazing!

Author's Response: I'm really glad when people say I've hit Dumbledore right on, because he's a hard character to peg. Trust me, if I felt I didn't had a grasp on Dumbledore, I wouldn't put him in the story at all. And yes, Andrea is sneaky...and George couldn't date any other kind of girl. But you're giving away the sneaky part of the next chapter since you live in the same room as me and thus have already read it.

Reviewer: ByMerlinsBeard
Date: 01/24/06 1:08
Chapter: Kites and Sackings

Great chapter with great tie-ins to OotP. I like the behind-the-scenes scenes, such as Dumbledore clearing the grounds before going to see some... friends in the forest. Can't wait for the next one to go up!

Author's Response: Thanks, Em. I'm glad you like it. I feel like your one of my more reliable critics, so I'm always glad when you genuinely like what I write.

Author's Response: Thanks, Em. I'm glad you like it. I feel like your one of my more reliable critics, so I'm always glad when you genuinely like what I write.

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 01/16/06 10:02
Chapter: Mooncalves and Dungbombs

I haven't read this story in a while so I kinda forgot what happened, but all is well. Did we ever meet Emiline before? Oh well, I liked how she and Fred have a connection. hehe. Pretty cute. The fight between Hermione and Andrea was pretty intense, but ended perfectly when they cracked up. Funny funny. The chat between Gred and Forge was great. Kinda confusing, but I guess it's supposed to be that way. Pretty funny though. Thanks!

Author's Response: There wasn't a lot that really pertained to this chapter. I guess that this really is the beginning of the second act...? Yes. There wasn't anything that really tied this into the previous chapters, you just have to remember the basics for the background. I'm glad you liked the obvious connection...it's going to play into Fred's storyline a lot. I had fun writing the argument with Andrea and Hermione. It shows us again that Andrea has this temper that just flares up, and it showed us just what things are like with those girls. And last, but certainly not least...the conversation with the Trouble Twins. I've said this to people before, but I always imagine that they can really keep up multiple conversations at the same time. Kind of like people on instant messenger. They're just always on the same wavelength.

Reviewer: Her_Holiness
Date: 01/16/06 8:16
Chapter: Mooncalves and Dungbombs

lol the end was funny as always cant wait for the next chapter ^_^

Author's Response: I never get tired of hearing things like this. So thanks!

Reviewer: justbee
Date: 01/15/06 18:31
Chapter: Mooncalves and Dungbombs

emiline....interesting, very interesting. love how you brought in the mooncalves. good job.

Author's Response: Yes, Emeline sort of presented herself rather late on in the plotting, but I was like, "I like this character...ok, you can be in the story too." And voila. With the mooncalves...oh snap. I've always liked them since I first read about them, and when I did another read-through of Fantastic Beasts for some ideas, I knew that was the winner.

Reviewer: _spinifex_
Date: 01/14/06 3:21
Chapter: The First Break-up

This story's cool,but I expect you know that by now. Anyway, let's get straight to the point. Andrea's Harry's twin, isn't she? ISN'T SHE!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Again, great story. See ya!

Author's Response: If Andrea was Harry's twin, do you think I would actually confirm or deny it? MWAHAHAHAHA! Ah, the powers of being the all-knowing author....except, sometimes things happen that even I wasn't expecting...Like Neal Thatcher...He just all of a sudden appeared and ended up driving a lot of the plot. :) Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Roommate of the Quillster
Date: 12/27/05 15:30
Chapter: The First Break-up

Hey! Have I ever told you that I heart this story? Because I do. Oh! And I love the sweet moments--George really does have a romantic streak, eh? I love it! Keep up the excellent work!

Author's Response: Yes, I know that you love this story, dearest roommate of mine. I'm glad that you know about it. I'll try to keep up the excellent work, but you know how I feel...this is like kiddie stuff compared to the Marauder story I want so dearly to write...and have actually started writing...

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius
Date: 12/13/05 14:13
Chapter: The First Break-up

You really had me scared there! I thought George and Andrea were breaking up and that would have been awful! Story is great though. I really want to know about what Andrea knows about Harry! It's gonna be killing me just so you know... 12/10 and ta-ta for now, SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius

Author's Response: George and Andrea are safe...for now. Trust me, after 12 chapters of build-up, they get to be together for at least four chapters. Mwahahahahaha! Man, I'm doing a lot of evil laughter in these responses... HBP SPOILER FOLLOWS!!!!!! READ AT YOUR OWN PERIL... Do you want to know who knows what the 'Lightning Bond' is? I'll tell you who knows: James Potter - dead Lily Potter - dead a girl named Jane - dead Mr. and Mrs. Benning - not dead Roderick Benning - not dead Remus Lupin - also not dead Sirius Black - dead as of OotP Dumbledore -dead as of HBP So out of the nine fictional characters that know, only four of them are still alive...dun dun dun!

Author's Response: George and Andrea are safe...for now. Trust me, after 12 chapters of build-up, they get to be together for at least four chapters. Mwahahahahaha! Man, I'm doing a lot of evil laughter in these responses...

HBP SPOILER FOLLOWS!!!!!! READ AT YOUR OWN PERIL...

Do you want to know who knows what the 'Lightning Bond' is? I'll tell you who knows:

James Potter - dead
Lily Potter - dead
a girl named Jane - dead
Mr. and Mrs. Benning - not dead
Roderick Benning - not dead
Remus Lupin - also not dead
Sirius Black - dead as of OotP
Dumbledore -dead as of HBP


So out of the nine fictional characters that know, only four of them are still alive...dun dun dun!

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius
Date: 12/12/05 12:24
Chapter: Mistletoe and Misguided Dreams

Hey, I loved this chapter, it was amazing, but I just wanted to tell you how creepy it was to see the name Seth Cohen in your dedication. I knew this guy named Seth Cohen from first to fifth grade and he was the grossest boy I've ever met!!! Not that you care, but just wanted to share that with you.

Author's Response: Let me assure you, the Seth Cohen is not the gross boy that haunts your past. Indeed not. He is the crazy and adorable Seth Cohen from television's "The OC."

Reviewer: Secret Seeker
Date: 12/11/05 9:06
Chapter: The First Break-up

I really lik your story. I want to know more about what andrea has to tell Harry, and why she doesn't like him. Please update soon. VERY soon.

Reviewer: Kait
Date: 12/01/05 13:03
Chapter: The First Break-up

Coolio! Good chapter! Like the 'Monthiversairy'!! Very sweet - unlike most guys!! :D Great update.

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 11/28/05 17:17
Chapter: The First Break-up

Well, I am really interested in what is going on between Harry and Andrea. And I love the whole George/Andrea ship. Very cute. And I do wonder along with 'just bee'; the first break-up? There's gonna be more? Uh-oh.

Author's Response: I'll give you this much of a clue: if you read the parts of Order of the Phoenix that this story corresponds with, you'll notice...well. You'll notice something. That's all I'm saying about Harry and Andrea until the epilogue. George and Andrea make me very happy as well. Sigh :) Yes, you read right. The 'first' break-up. There WILL be more. Just who and when? That's the suspense...

Reviewer: justbee
Date: 11/28/05 9:20
Chapter: The First Break-up

and what do tou mean 'the 1st breakup'? are there gonna be more?

Author's Response: MWAHAHAHA!!!!! Yes. The first of a few break-ups. You can count on at least three more. But two of those are in the sequel, so there's no need to really worry about it right now, unless....mwahahahahahahaha!

Reviewer: justbee
Date: 11/28/05 9:19
Chapter: The First Break-up

But what happened to there brother?! You didnt tell us if he was allright or not! but other than that it was good. really sweet.

Author's Response: I just figured that you'd all assume Darren was all right since they came back to Hogwarts. Roderick actually tells everyone what happened, but we miss that since George and Andrea go off for some time on their own... :) Don't worry, you'll find out soon enough what happened to Darren. In the next 3-5 chapters. I forget exactly...

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