Reviewer: Huskers
Date: 07/16/08 13:11
Chapter: One-shot

Interesting. Ginny's gift was the first fanfic I ever read, and I came back here desperate for something new that was well written. I'm not sure that this was it exactly, but it was entertaining. Though it was tough to picture the dark lord cowering at the sight of these women. What exactly was it about their touch that destroyed his ability to apparate? Also, did he only lose that ability? I wonder why he didn't simply stun or kill them. Anyway, I guess I'm just nitpicking. After all, if he did that, then we would never get Voldemort's daughters, would we?

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 03/31/07 21:30
Chapter: One-shot

odd. funny, but odd

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 01/06/07 19:14
Chapter: One-shot

Lol! So that's where all of Voldemort's daughters come from! No wonder so many of them are Mary Sue's, with mothers like that!! :D This story really made me grin!

Reviewer: Bucky Catt
Date: 09/09/06 16:21
Chapter: One-shot

Ha ha! Soo funny!

Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 08/13/06 18:39
Chapter: One-shot

Ha! This was great, and thanx for not making it NC-17!

Reviewer: Vindictus Viridian
Date: 04/19/06 17:32
Chapter: One-shot

"History had taught him that heirs had the annoying habit of coveting their fatherís place, quite often before said father was finished occupying it." This is going to be a favourite sentence for a long time. I love the idea that this is the Dark Lord's true weakness, and would love to see how the Order could exploit it. What is it about these long-fingered wizards, anyway?

Reviewer: Cateria
Date: 02/28/06 13:14
Chapter: One-shot

Gah, brilliant. I laughed so much I fell off my chair... So many amazing lines, I don't know how you do it; and of course, the girls were perfectly Mary-Sue, with legs that never ends, blinding white teeth etc. I really must read more of your stories!

Reviewer: Magical Maeve
Date: 04/14/05 6:16
Chapter: One-shot

Very amusing and ironic… I almost felt sorry for the poor Dark Lord. So many funny lines, from him considering having his fingers trimmed to his reflections on the problems caused by troublesome heirs. There a few historical figures that should have thought like him! Your descriptions of his many admirers was, of course, perfectly Mary-Sue and it’s nice to know that one of the greatest weapons we possess against the darkest wizard in history are these impossibly perfect women. A nicely amusing one-shot…I’ll have to read the Mrs Norris one now. Oh! And I found a nitpick…which made me happy because normally there is nothing to pick at in your writing *grins*. Dust bin should be one word.

Author's Response: You got me! I'll fix it! Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: redhead525
Date: 03/24/05 14:43
Chapter: One-shot

lol!funnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
M.I.T.: Entente Cordial by Northumbrian 6th-7th Years
A strange and seemingly inexplicable death in London's West End brings an unlikely...
A Squib's Journey by ntoforhp 6th-7th Years
Jeffery Potter always had sensed he was somehow different from his playmates...
Out of the Blue by Secret Marauder 90 1st-2nd Years
This story weaves the tale of James and Lily from the day they met right up...
FEATURED
Five Christmases by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
It took four Christmases for Andromeda Black and Ted Tonks to get together...
Coming Alive by The owl 6th-7th Years
Leanne Gamp hadn't wanted to be at that party, even though it was Christmas...
Graves by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
In December of 1997, Harry visits his parents' graves in Godric's Hollow and...
CATEGORIES