Most delicious! Snape and Harry's reconciliation is awesome, and Marion pulling Snape's hair and his reaction was so SWEEET!!!!
that was a very nice short, i really like it more than a lot of longer stories!
It even seemed longer because of all the suprising things in there!!
Oh I really enjoyed it! I thought it was very cute and it was fun to see the way that things might turn out. The charity game was a great original idea. Maybe you could continue the story when Marion is at Hogwarts with her siblings?
enjoyed it?I absolutely LOVED IT!! Great job. I loved the bit about Snape holding Marion *snigger*
teriffic except for the fact im a harry/ginny and ron/hermione shipper....
i like it!