Reviewer: electronicquillster
Date: 04/06/05 13:22
Chapter: Loneliness and Sympathy

I am really liking this story! I think you're able to capture extremely well the tension and anger - not a lot of writers can do that. I'm hoping that things will get better for Laura though. Being miserable sucks. But your story definitely doesn't.

Author's Response: I'm glad you think that the characters' feelings are coming through, especially since their feelings are a major part of the plot. And don't worry. Things start getting better for Laura soon.

Reviewer: OuchKibble
Date: 03/27/05 15:20
Chapter: Loneliness and Sympathy

Nope, you hit the nail right on the head. Update soon.

Reviewer: OuchKibble
Date: 03/24/05 15:06
Chapter: Loneliness and Sympathy

A little confusing, but I still want to see where you're going with the story. 8/10, update soon.

Author's Response: The next chapter (which I'm almost done typing and editing... I have several chapters of this already written.) explains the relationship between Percy, Oliver and Laura. I wanted to show the strong dislike in their relationship before explaining what caused it. In other words, I was vague on purpose, but I may have been too vague. Thanks for the review and let me know if what I explained above isn't what you thought was confusing. :)

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