Reviews For The Wounded
Reviewer: MrsH
Date: 06/11/07 13:37
Chapter: Chapter 16

I think this is one of the most original fanfics I'd read; I loved the idea of transfiguring Snape into sev-the-dog for theraputic purposes, and loved his reaction to the transformation back into himself. Lovely!

Reviewer: horntail123
Date: 08/10/06 9:19
Chapter: Chapter 16

i really enjoyed this story. Thanks!

Reviewer: LadyMI
Date: 06/21/06 22:07
Chapter: Chapter 16

That was really good. You even made me cry. T.T

Author's Response: Thanks - I cried when I thought it up.

Reviewer: DarkWind
Date: 05/14/06 7:45
Chapter: Chapter 16

I just finished reading your story, The Wounded. It is an amazing story, gripped me from the beginning. I had read Practically Brothers a while ago, and was equally fascinated. You have done something I had not thought possible...made me feel sympathetic towards Snape, caring about what happens to him, as much as the other main characters of the HP universe. I have to admit, when Snape disappeared to commit suicide, I was...choked with emotion, and yes, even felt a tear develope and escape the confines of my eyes. You have wonderful talent; I look forward to reading more of your works in the future.

Reviewer: SiriuslyCarla
Date: 04/23/06 13:24
Chapter: Chapter 16

That was sooooooooo good! I am really sad it's over! I cant wait to read more fo your stoires!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review - glad you liked the story. I have done a sequel, but it's a little too odd for mugglenet - I turn Lupin into a woman, and there's romance. But if you're interested, it's at my fanfiction.net account at www.fanfiction.net/~reerathered. It's called Home's the Farthest Way.

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 01/01/06 12:36
Chapter: Chapter 16

Excellent, another one! Must.....hug.....Severus.....to......make him......feel....better... Grrrr. Him changing back was so sad! Him meeting Harry again now should be.....interesting, so to speak.

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 12/31/05 16:33
Chapter: Chapter 7

Aww, poor doggy. Do you have any idea how much you're making me want to give them all hugs? I have to hug people to make them feel better and I CAN'T AHHHHHHHH. Mostly Severus, lots and lots of hugs for Severus, and chocolate.

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 12/31/05 16:22
Chapter: Chapter 6

Uummmm, oookay. If you say so. That's a little.....odd, but, if it makes you happy, um, okay. :)

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 12/31/05 15:49
Chapter: Chapter 3

I don't know how many times I can just say how much I like this fic and the previous one. I'm not a Harry Hermione shipper but I'll forgive you ;) I love the depth you put into the relationships between people.

Reviewer: pstibbons
Date: 10/25/05 22:19
Chapter: Chapter 7

I'm sorry that I've taken this many chapters to put my first review up. I was reading them on my cellphone, and just had to keep reading... it may deserve a 11 ranking. (Yes, it's not canon any more, but never mind that.)

I think you've captured Lupin's character, and Snape's, very well.

I think the idea of turning Snape into a dog is rather cheesy, but maybe it will turn out to be a fine, mature cheese. I liked the way you let Snape's species be decided by his character.

One thing that's missing is, I think, this : wouldn't Hermione run to the library to find out everything about spectral hounds? (And then tell us?)

Reviewer: pstibbons
Date: 10/25/05 22:18
Chapter: Chapter 7

I'm sorry that I've taken this many chapters to put my first review up. I was reading them on my cellphone, and just had to keep reading... it may deserve a 11 ranking. (Yes, it's not canon any more, but never mind that.)

I think you've captured Lupin's character, and Snape's, very well.

I think the idea of turning Snape into a dog is rather cheesy, but maybe it will turn out to be a fine, mature cheese. I liked the way you let Snape's species be decided by his character.

One thing that's missing is, I think, this : wouldn't Hermione run to the library to find out everything about spectral hounds? (And then tell us?)

Reviewer: rgreen
Date: 06/15/05 23:35
Chapter: Chapter 16

Very well written. i'm curious to see the sequal.

Reviewer: ellidiot
Date: 05/17/05 11:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

ah wow just read whole practically brothers/wounded and the next one on fanfiction.net, i love these stories! you're very talented and have captured both characters well. also interesting to see how lupin is affected by being a woman- v insightful. fantastic stories, please keep writing!

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 04/20/05 13:05
Chapter: Chapter 16

Aww I'm sorry that its over, and I truly enjoyed it! Well written and I love that you have the twist of Snape keeping his memories. I cant wait to read the sequel and congratulations on a story finished and well written!

Reviewer: SyraBillsLican
Date: 04/19/05 16:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. I really liked your story. Very interesting plot line. Some of it was really, really good. You could be a writer. 10/10. Do me a favor please! Read my story HARRY POTTER AND THE DRAGON OF VIRTUE. Search that or my penname SyraBillsLican. Please Read and Review.

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 04/19/05 13:44
Chapter: Chapter 15

Woah! Harry was getting awfully close to the truth there and I think the wheels in his head are turning. He's going to know soon, and will he be angry that he wasn't told? Hmm... another great chapter!

Reviewer: elka78
Date: 04/17/05 22:17
Chapter: Chapter 14

Wow, just the perfect gift for me to end the weekend. Thanks. I enjoyed the chapter. True, it is hard to see mistakes in the ones we love dearly.

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 04/17/05 15:56
Chapter: Chapter 14

Woah it feels like you add like 3 chapters a day! You can wait a while longer if you need to. I liked this chapter because of Lupin trying to make Harry understand Sirius's flaws. Its so hard for us to see the flaws in the people that we love and I thought that you did an amazing job of writing that conversation! And I love that you have the dog finally giving in to Harry. Great great story!

Reviewer: doggstarr
Date: 04/17/05 15:12
Chapter: Chapter 13

This is a relly moving story. Excellent work,. I love Sev-dog, much better than Snivellus.lol

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 04/15/05 14:03
Chapter: Chapter 11

Lets hope that Sev and Harry don't stay locked in an angry stalemate forever! I'm so glad that he reacted to Hermione well! Another great chapter!

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