hmm i like that. very good.
Oh! I adore the motifs with the dragon and the eagle - don't know if they were intentional or not, but Lupin, the wolf, kinda acts like a dragon when he transforms... And Pettigrew was like an eagle when he was a rat for however many years, keeping his "eagle eye" open for the right time to leave. Wonderful!
I didn't get it unfortunately, though i can tell it's very well-written.
That was nice. :)
too vauge but good style
Really Really good
I liked it. I'm not very experienced when it comes to poetry, but you got a ten from me. And I also think it's not just each Marauder in itself. The poem, at least to me, describes WHAT the Marauder's are. You know, more than just personalities, their spirits. Maybe I'm looking too deep, but I liked it.
wow.short.sweet.lotas meaning. i liked it
nice love the maruaders
The eagle and dragon part is a bit strange, but I still liked it.
Me again OYE OYE OYE thats it not oy or oi grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr i read your poem again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u get 10 10s
Hi very good story!!!!! i likes it very much OYE ps you get a 10
Author's Response: OI? hehe thank you. dun dundun...
That's good you should put other poems about their adventures!
Author's Response: Thank you! i was working on one but i lost it somehow..hehe
That's great and an intertesting idea, but who are the eagle and dragon?
Author's Response: thanx! The eagle and dragon are just something to put in ... i didnt want it to be to short.