Nice summary very catchy. I know that it's what's-her-face's not yours but still. What's-her-face has style. It was well written and the beggining was good. But come on! Sirius was NOT NOT NEVER NEVER EVER EVER like that! I mean it's Sirius, you guys! Our favorite badboy! He was not like that! HE's a good guy. Not ever was he.......
Author's Response: Excuse me, how exactly do you know what Sirius was like when he was younger? Oh, that's right, you're not J.K. Rowling so you wouldn't. He very well could have been. You don't know. I don't mean to sound rude but I'm tired of people complaining about the way Sirius is portrayed because You DO NOT KNOW what he was like. You think and act as though you do but who is to really know what he was like when he was younger? He grew up with a prejudiced family, a rotten family. You can't be born into a family like that without carrying the prejudices with you. You have to be exposed to people, and the world to be able to fully understand the truth about life which Sirius was able to do once he was at Hogwarts. But before, you can't say that he didn't think like that at least a few times.
Author's Response: I realize I sounded really rude in my response and it makes me seem as though I'm not an author who can't take criticism. However, I must point out that you can't criticize my characterizations of a character that we don't know too much information about. You don't know what he was like and I don't know what he was like so neither of our assumptions may be correct.
I see I'm the first to review. Cool! I was flipping threw the pages of Dark/Angsty Fics looking for a story I read a long time ago, and I saw yours. It looked really interesting. It is very good! Two thumbs up and please keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read it and review.