oooohhhhhh that was a twist! Love the story, hate the ships! lol
That is probably one of the best stories in the Hermione/Draco section. I loved it!! Great work!
i love the story but i've got to say this:
loose: my belt came loose and my pants fell down
lose: i don't want to lose him.
you've used loose in place of lose several times in this chapter and the last one. just fyi. great story!
Well i should say i am speechless and absolutely near the verge of nervous hysterics . i have read delightpul pain and this story as well and i should say that these were the best most amazing fanfics i have ever read. i should say that u crossed the boundary of a fanfic and tunrned them into a completely separtae unique piece of work! again i should say that i was dumbfounded when i finished reading this and i shud say that experienced various emotions throughout my read which i shud say have been caused by teh intensity of what u wrote. feels like u put yr heart into it. thanks so much for posting this and i shud say that this is abolutely AMAZING!!!! love ya hope u write more
*Looks thoughtful as munching on a cookie* (I was a faithful reader) I read this story in one night =]
Brilliant! I love it. Excellent excellent. I love the whole "Hermione & Draco" Love story. Thank you for writing such an excellent story :)
I enjoyed reading this story and it was just great. lol.
Omg!!! This chapter was fantastic!!! Wow. The details, and everything..
I can`t wait to read this last chapter :)
What a twist!!!?!?!?
But I actually kinna liked the thing going on between Hermione & Draco :(
This story has got me entranced!!
I thank you =]
Awww thats so cute!!! =]
I like this first chapter, it`s very detailed, and the author is a talented writer.
can't wait to see the reaction!
I luvd this story!!! Thsi is my 2nd time reading it. Its a bit graphic but good all the same!!!!!!!!! Dotn stop writing!!! I luv the all the romance and EVRYTHING!!! Go dramione!!!!!!!! Ur an aweosme writer!! GREAT STORY!!
OMG! This is one thing that i always hoped would happen. And i really dont think that this is that bad in a sexual way. I wish i could have read the first one :) Anyways good job.
loved this chapter, its probably my favorite. it is so descriptive and intense. your a great writer. =)
WOW.. so many twists and turns! I feel as if the last chapters weren't even the same story. Not knowing exactly what happened between them was a little upsetting, but overall i really enjoyed it.
Great job! =)
"What that fuck? Your Drakie Pooh? Listen hun, I got news for you, Draco doesn't belong to you, you piece of stuck up, snobby, wrinkled fingered, pureblood, pug-faced hag!" I told her.
She stood there ready to burst our crying at what I had told her. "You! YOU!" she was telling me, still pointing that yucky finger at me.
"Oh shut the fuck up Pansy!" I yelled. From the corner of my eye I was able to see that a crowd was forming around us. "Go and stuff that disgusting finger up your arse 'cause no one in their right mind would want to pleasure you. And I'm sure as soon as the pointed thing you call a finger, is gonna stay up there, it'll whither up and burn 'cause of the acid that's you!" I was going on a roll here and I loved it! "No wonder Crabbe and Goyle lost their dicks 'cause they shoved it up you're arse and once it was in there it shrunk up and broke off!" Ooo and I wasn't done yet. This time I pointed a finger at her. "Oh and get this straight you old hag, Draco isn't yours nor will he ever be. Got it!" And with that I left her and heard the crowd cheering after me.
Aren't I the greatest?
This was hilarious.I mean, seriously!!
what would we do without friends? =)
ahh, this is really getting good! =)
great! Loved it!
that made me giddy
thanks for the exquisite story