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Name: Mickay (Signed) · Date: 11/26/08 23:18 · For: Permanent
Honestly, your story turns me off of this site. That it could get site awards are shocking. Yeah, you had 'twists and turns', but it seemed to me that instead of having actual plot you just threw in every cliched occurrence you could think of and called it a story. There were various inconsistencies in the plot and all characters were extremely OOC. You definitely should think about employing the help of a beta, and if you had already then a different one. It started out as a good idea but seems as though you just went off on tangents without any sort of outline. Needless to say, I was disappointed, especially since you are supposed to be an esteemed author and this a favorite story. I won't be returning to these forums to read stories given the lack of standards for substantial writing technique.

Name: kdalve (Signed) · Date: 11/26/08 12:38 · For: Temporary
ive read this one a few times and i havent forgotten it yet. (:

Name: Fat_Bottem_Girl (Signed) · Date: 11/25/08 19:38 · For: Loving You
not lame beautiful

Name: myroomisvintage (Signed) · Date: 10/27/08 11:27 · For: All Over
idk maybe its just me but if i were hermione id be beyond pissed at ginny seeing as it was her idea for hermione to kiss neville

Name: confused_cinderella (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 10:16 · For: Permanent

Name: leamarie (Signed) · Date: 09/16/08 22:00 · For: Temporary
loved it!
this is purely amazing...
now if only you could write one like
this with harry and ginny

or do you know of any stories
with sorta the same subject with them two as a pair instead?

Name: Claudia M (Signed) · Date: 08/29/08 22:43 · For: You're Mine
awwww the ending is soo romantic

Name: Claudia M (Signed) · Date: 08/29/08 22:29 · For: On Top of Me
amazing.. this is just great :)
i absolutely love this :D

Name: Fat_Bottem_Girl (Signed) · Date: 08/15/08 17:28 · For: Loving You
that was so sweet

Name: scrat12 (Signed) · Date: 07/25/08 19:25 · For: Permanent
Love. it. amazing story.

Name: Fawksfriend (Signed) · Date: 07/14/08 11:19 · For: Temporary
How come when there is a Draco/Hermione pairing we always get the inevidable Ron bashing? Is he that bad a guy?

Name: R A i N B O W A (Signed) · Date: 06/26/08 21:41 · For: Permanent
The ending to your story, it was... sad. Not incomplete, you tied up all the loose ends, but it felt... hollow, somehow.
Your story was amazing though, very well written, and it had a lot of twists and turns. Stories that are too predictable are boring.
All in all, you did a very nice job and I loved reading it.

Name: Queen of the Highway (Signed) · Date: 06/22/08 19:38 · For: You're Mine
Aw, how cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute! Yay! He cares!

Name: Queen of the Highway (Signed) · Date: 06/22/08 19:23 · For: Temporary
Hermione seems a bit OOC, I mean, when would HERMIONE do this, but, hey, we never know what she does in her spare time.

Name: SaharaBlack (Signed) · Date: 06/19/08 17:17 · For: Permanent
oh no it's over !!
well done, i know this must have taken you foreverrrrr !
i loved it loved it loved it !
can't actually think of anything else to say !
i was hooked from start to finish as i'm sure everyone else was !
well done again !!!

Sahara Black


Name: fuzzy_peaches (Signed) · Date: 06/13/08 15:01 · For: Permanent
i liked the story but the ending seems,,,
un-finished :p

Name: Hermyone11 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 18:08 · For: Permanent
SO GOOD!! Overall I loved the story so much!! So many twists and turns!! I just loved it!!

Name: Hermyone11 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 17:46 · For: Power of Love
OMG awesome story!! I love it!!

Name: siriusblack1440 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/08 20:46 · For: Permanent
I can't even begin to tell you how incredible this story was. I'm so often amazed how you come up with these amazing ideas that seem so surreal. You truly have such an amazing talent.

Name: x_pureblood_x (Signed) · Date: 05/29/08 23:28 · For: Permanent
Wait so do they stay together or do that whole "parting" thing?
Why can't they EVER have a happy ending in a good story? Oh wait, the answer's in the question. It's not a good story unless it has a sad ending.

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