ive read this one a few times and i havent forgotten it yet. (:
not lame beautiful
idk maybe its just me but if i were hermione id be beyond pissed at ginny seeing as it was her idea for hermione to kiss neville
YOU HAVE TO WRITE A SEQUEL!!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! THIS STORY IS AWESOME! But it seems un-finished.
this is purely amazing...
now if only you could write one like
this with harry and ginny
or do you know of any stories
with sorta the same subject with them two as a pair instead?
awwww the ending is soo romantic
amazing.. this is just great :)
i absolutely love this :D
that was so sweet
Love. it. amazing story.
How come when there is a Draco/Hermione pairing we always get the inevidable Ron bashing? Is he that bad a guy?
The ending to your story, it was... sad. Not incomplete, you tied up all the loose ends, but it felt... hollow, somehow.
Your story was amazing though, very well written, and it had a lot of twists and turns. Stories that are too predictable are boring.
All in all, you did a very nice job and I loved reading it.
Aw, how cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute! Yay! He cares!
Hermione seems a bit OOC, I mean, when would HERMIONE do this, but, hey, we never know what she does in her spare time.
oh no it's over !!
well done, i know this must have taken you foreverrrrr !
i loved it loved it loved it !
can't actually think of anything else to say !
i was hooked from start to finish as i'm sure everyone else was !
well done again !!!
i liked the story but the ending seems,,,
SO GOOD!! Overall I loved the story so much!! So many twists and turns!! I just loved it!!
OMG awesome story!! I love it!!
I can't even begin to tell you how incredible this story was. I'm so often amazed how you come up with these amazing ideas that seem so surreal. You truly have such an amazing talent.
Wait so do they stay together or do that whole "parting" thing?
Why can't they EVER have a happy ending in a good story? Oh wait, the answer's in the question. It's not a good story unless it has a sad ending.
srry i meant dang gurl you have some passion keep writing