Wow! you're talented! i could never write such lovely poems.
cute story, i loved it
Omg this was so cute!!!!!!
I love Lily/James and Lily Evans Riddle Me This was by far my favorite. Also for some reason Numb made me laugh, i mean cant u just picture 12 James trying to write a poem? lol good job :)
I really enjoyed this story. Ummm...the poem i liked best was obsesssion.
I loved all of the poems! My favorite would have to be Apparently too. This is a awesome James/Lily fiction! Love it! 200/10! ~MJ
Wow. You are an excellent poem writer! I loved all of them!
Imogen
That was cute!! I loved the poems!! I can't write a decient poem to save my life!! Just thought I'd let you know that I loved your story! :) !!
That was cute!! I loved the poems!! I can't write a decient poem to save my life!! Just thought I'd let you know that I loved your story! :) !!
Oh my god. This was fantasxtic becouse I'm a sucker for fluff. **sighs**James is too good to be true but thats why I liked it so much. As if an actual guy would be so romantic.lol.=Sammy
Yeah...that was not healthy. But i loved it!! obsession was my favorite or maybe it was the sheer irony of the poem
I lked them all they were sooooooooooooo good! You're an excellent writer, keep it up!!!! well done, 10000000000/10
this is great! you are a genius. those poems are hilarious. good job!
“He wrote this in his second year, when he actually realized he liked Lily. It’s not that good because.. well, he was twelve.” Lupin said earnestly, handing James the parchment.
Don't you mean he handed Harry the parchment?? I really liked it. =D
this was really sweet, i like the thought of james writing poetry about lily. i liked "obession." but they're all good! :)
That's very romantic without being fluffy. Congrats on this J/L poem collection (my fave is "Numb") ~Katie
PS: Please check out my H/Hr poem!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll go check out yours right now!
"And not to mention, I think you're pretty hot" That bit was so funny! James was all sweet and stuff and then he's just suddenly like that! Hilarious! *cough* anyway, great fic, it was really good poetry!
Author's Response: thank you very much =)
samantha i am touched that you would choose to portray james in such an obsessed way. we all know I can get a little overobsessed, too...great that i was prongs! oh, ps, i took that hp male quiz thing and i'm Mrs. Sirius Black, a position you most likeley wanted for yourself =P jk ily ttyl
nidale aka moroccanandproud
Author's Response: hahaha thanks nidale :P u stupid coconut
samantha i am touched that you would choose to portray james in such an obsessed way. we all know I can get a little overobsessed, too...great that i was prongs! oh, ps, i took that hp male quiz thing and i'm Mrs. Sirius Black, a position you most likeley wanted for yourself =P jk ily ttyl
nidale aka moroccanandproud
Very sweet. I think that ym favourite one was Apparently too. See that review just below mine? Mmm. Are you really 11? 'Cause if you are that's totally amazing, hey, even if you are 30 you're still a totally amazing writer.
Author's Response: well, i'm 12 now, but yes i was 11 when I wrote those poems. thankyou very much, it means a lot to me =]
That is really good for an eleven year old! If you really are eleven, you sure have a talent for writing. I'm impressed.
Author's Response: yeah, I was really 11 when I wrote those lol. I'm 12 now, almost 13 (in a couple months). Thankyou a lot!
