Reviews For Great Plans
Reviewer: americanidiot996
Date: 07/31/06 19:30
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

Extremely good story. At first the circumstances of their shared love seemed too unlikely but you turned it around quite nicely as the story progressed. I enjoyed the way you did not gloss over Snape's bad qualities and pretend he was just misunderstood but shaped his bad qualities gradually into better ones but still kept some of the bad.

Reviewer: qwerty83
Date: 06/14/06 9:22
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

Loved it!

Reviewer: baby_bea83
Date: 06/12/06 1:31
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

that was good needed a longer ending

Reviewer: baby_bea83
Date: 06/12/06 1:01
Chapter: Awakening

what was a great chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: baby_bea83
Date: 06/10/06 2:57
Chapter: Serving Two Masters


Reviewer: baby_bea83
Date: 06/10/06 2:43
Chapter: Scheming Snake

WOW I love it very nicly done!

Reviewer: baby_bea83
Date: 06/10/06 2:27
Chapter: Happy Christmas, Miss Granger


Reviewer: baby_bea83
Date: 06/10/06 2:15
Chapter: Protecting Her

very nice!!!

Reviewer: baby_bea83
Date: 06/10/06 2:06
Chapter: Great Plans

I liked it so far!

Reviewer: i_luv_snape
Date: 06/02/06 17:57
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

love the story you should write more stories.

Date: 05/31/06 19:09
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!ur a great author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: RedheadedWeasley
Date: 05/27/06 23:34
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

Good job! The plot bunnies did not fail you, even if the muses were a little insane.

Reviewer: RedheadedWeasley
Date: 05/27/06 23:33
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

Good job! The plot bunnies did not fail you, even if the muses were a little insane.

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 05/26/06 10:30
Chapter: Great Plans

Very interesting. I'm not a huge fan of Snape, but I guess this story isn't too far-fetched.

Reviewer: tazzmissionkid85
Date: 04/28/06 12:56
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

This was a wonderful story. I love your wit within the story as well as the disclaimers and authors notes. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 02/11/06 21:02
Chapter: Awakening

I'm too lazy to requote waht winky said, but that first one was also one of my most favorite lines. I also choose to review this chapter because it marks another significant change in their relationship. And also there's a bit of Bill/Hermione flirting, which I thought was cool. Did I already thank you for making this not NC? I don't read anything more than PG-13 and I'm so glad that I got to read this story.

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 02/04/06 12:29
Chapter: Happy Christmas, Miss Granger

Okay, it's time to admit it. I've read your whole story. But I thought that as a start I'd review this chapter (your plot bunny doesn't seem to need much help on this tale by now, anyway) because, I don't know, it could be viewed as a turning point. Or maybe I just like how Snape tries to be all calculating and "aha, she's growing up just according to plan" without admitting to himself that he's starting to kinda like her. I mean, of course it's possible that he got her that locket just to put her more under his power, but it had to have a little bit of genuine thoughtfulness too. And just in case I never get around to reviewing any of your other chapters: I loved this story. And I don't even go for the Hermione/Snape stuff regularly. Thank you for keeping your plot bunny alive. Have a nice day!

Reviewer: farnsworth
Date: 01/29/06 18:48
Chapter: Great Plans

Having become a fan of ss/hg fanfics, I've noticed that most portrayals of Snape leave him quite OOC. This fic howver managed to cover character justification quite nicely, and didn't have Snape suddenly falling for Hermione. I liked it, keep up the good work :)

Reviewer: Castles_made_of_sand
Date: 01/13/06 15:18
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

That waswonderful, I loved the way you made it pretty fluffy but yet kept Snape in charater; I love snape! Thanks for making me smile (and squeak hyper-activally in parts). A pleasure to read a pleasure to review (hope the plot bunnies feel well fedd).

Reviewer: Cyone
Date: 11/18/05 18:04
Chapter: Protecting Her

snape is such a jerk sometimes. Great work, loving it so far

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