I love the story, its really cool, I like the way different people write each chapter its really interesting take. Also I loved the fact that Hermionie missed her appoitment (sp?) with Ginny and Bill. I love this story
Author's Response: Thank you, lavenderbrown. Different people aren't writing each chapter though, it's all just me and the voices in my head. :-) I'm glad you're enjoying it!
I'll feed the bunny anything it wants as long as you keep going:-) This is such an awesome fic, and it is taking some very interesting turns. Love it, keep it up!
Author's Response: The bunnies and I all thank you, silverlark17! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
I love the story, I like the suttleness of Snape, Also I know I didnt get to submit a review in the first chapter but I love the whole Ron bit I love love it.
Author's Response: Lavender, thank you so much! I am so happy you're enjoying it. :-)
"Dance bunnies, dance!"
I LOVE IT!!!!! This is by far one of my favorite Snape/Hermione fictions. I hope you update soon. I will be anxiously awaiting the upcoming chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks, DementorsKiss! I am so happy you're enjoying it! I will be submitting a new chapter tonight!
i love it!! more more more. can't wait. definetly feed the plot bunnies . . . they deserve it!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Sammy! I'm glad you liked it and the bunnies say thank you also!
WOW... There is some love tention going on... I love this one... These plot bunnies deserve some carrots... more please...BYE...LOL :)
Author's Response: Thank you, wizard girl! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I shall pet the plot bunnies for you!
more more, more more, more more! I love this... awwww sevy...
Author's Response: Thank you, darkness_falls! I'll be sending the chapter in the queue very shortly. I'm glad you like it!
If it had been me, I would've kissed him by now :-) tee hee. Love this story, great writing and both true to canon and character. Love it - keep going. **feeding plot bunnies**
Author's Response: Thanks, Bellatrixx! You would have just kissed him? :-) Just a kiss... the plot bunnies say thank you!
plz write more soon itsvery interesting
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll be posting an update very shortly!
Wow, I think underneath it all he does truly care for her. And she likes him back. *sighs* I love this fic, please write more :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Flame girl! I think you might have something there. :-)
nice plese update 12 out of 10
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you!
omg it was the best hg/ss fic ive read yet
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Hi, I read the first ch. when it was first posted, and I loved it. I have no complaints. This is very well written so far. I liked the second ch. too. Snape is acting a little weirder than usual in love stories. But, it's still really interesting. Wonderful so far...
Author's Response: Thank you, wizard girl! I'm glad you're enjoying it, but I'm wondering how Snape is acting a little weirder? Do you feel he's out of character?
jeeze...ron was kinda viscous. ah well. i love your story so far. by the way, where else do you write stories, and what is your username, Because you said you wrote other stories other places...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm not sure if Ron was vicious or simply randy. It's difficult to tell with teenage men. :-)
I write primarily at Sycophanthex.com and Ashwinder and Occlumency under the screen name LariLee. Those two archives contain my higher ratings as well is the complete works I'm posting here. Ashwinder is the Granger-Snape archive and Occlumency is Snape/OFC. I hope to see you there!
wow!snape seems so...lustful...well, it's pretty good so far, can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying this! New chapter soon.
It is stories like this that have me facinated with all the HG/SS ships!! You've done a great job esp. with the characters. Keep up the great work. I can't wait for your next chapter, so please post again soon!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Ronishot! I'm so glad you liked this! A new chapter should be up soon.
Wow, this just gets better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter, it's so intense! -Flame girl
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Flame girl! I'm so glad you're enjoying it, I'll be submitting the next chapter shortly!
Quite a story - Snape was so good. Look forward to your next chapter - hopefully soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Belinda! I'm happy you like this!
Wow. I really love Hermione/Snape fics and this one is the most original I have read. Snape is not a really sweet guy as he can sometimes appear and his evil side with his "plans" prove that. Both of them are portrayed with excellence. This is the most intriguing fic I have read for a whgile and I will definately continue to read! *10*
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Flame girl. I'm so glad you're enjoying this and find them in character!
I like your story a lot-- anything HG/SS is right up my alley!! LOL!! However, I do hope that Hermione has a say in this marriage thing. I don't like it when it's forced. Well, UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!