wow that was great if not a little suss!!!!!! I liked it, snape's kinda scaring the beejeebers outta me. oh yuck hes so slimy!!!!!!! great writing cant wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you, strawberry_sparkle_lipgloss. One woman's slimy is another woman stud muffin. :-) I'm glad you're enjoying it!
hey, i loved it! as always, i can't wait for the plot bunnies to get better and give us the rest!
Author's Response: Thank you, sammy2008! The final chapter is now in queue. I hope you enjoy it!
I really like this story. You are a talented writer and the characterization of both Hermione and Snape is really good. The plot bunny of Voldemort ordering Snape to seduce Hermione is convenient, but a love story wouldn't be complete wihtout a little convenient coincidence. : ) Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Fairhairedwitch! I'm so glad you're enjoying this! It is convenient, but I could not resist it. :-)
Don't say that about your bunny! I love the dark side of this fic and this chapter, more please. *10*
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Flame girl! The bunny is a nice bunny and I think he loves you. :-)
WHOA excellent! i'm the first to review this new ch yay!! cant wait for more, has me on my seat and beggin for more! interested in seeing snape's many sides.. always a 10!
Author's Response: Thank you, SiriusStar07! I am so glad you're enjoying this!
Well, in this chapter I feel that Ron is out of character. He would never, never act like that. Especially not with his best friend. The first chapter was great. Snape is not a goody-good, is he? And the second chapter was also great (if you don't count the Ron-thing). I would give you a 9, but since I'm reviewing for both of the first chapters it'll be a 10.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, Hermione. I'm sorry you feel Ron is out of character, however he is a 17 year old boy who wants some. And who is to say Snape isn't pulling some strings? I'm glad you like the rest of it!
Weird... I'm intrigued, however. It sort of works...
Author's Response: Welcome to the good ship Granger-Snape! I hope your voyage is a pleasant one. :-)
YOU ADDED MORE! YAY YAY YAY!
Author's Response: Thank you darkness_falls!
Author's Response: I D-I-D. :-) thank you!
please please update soon
Author's Response: I will, lavender! Thank you!
It's great to read a Hermione/Snape fic with such spot on characterization. I look forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, frogggirl2! I write Snape more than anyone and I was worried about Hermione, thank you for setting my worries straight!
This is the most IC Hermione/Snape fiction I have had the pleasure to read. You weave the tale slowly and hypnotically. It's almost as if Snape is trying to lull the reader into his world as well. Hermione, of course, is the best choice as an apprentice. What's more, is that this apprenticeship could not be better timed. She is ready to develop her abilities on a strictly academic level.
I did not spot any grammatical errors at all (which is a great blessing).
I can hear the curl of Snape's voice as he speaks. I can appreciate that Hermione's learned how to goad him into letting her speak. I can appreciate the subtle acknowledgement of her close relationship with Potter.
Lastly, it was lovely reading what he thinks about the various students in his class. I have long believed he didn't actually prefer Malfoy, but pretended to do so in an effort to annoy Potter. You've done a marvelous job. I applaud you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Alexis! I am so glad you're enjoying this. I normally write at sycophanthex and this is one of my secondary sites to post so it has already been Beta read before validation there (and they have some tough standards). I am just so happy you're enjoying this story and I hope you keep enjoying it!
I am throughly enjoying your story. Keep the plot bunnies reproducing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Alwritermom! I'm so glad you're enjoying it and the bunnies reproduce on their own (thank god).
I love the story, its really cool, I like the way different people write each chapter its really interesting take. Also I loved the fact that Hermionie missed her appoitment (sp?) with Ginny and Bill. I love this story
Author's Response: Thank you, lavenderbrown. Different people aren't writing each chapter though, it's all just me and the voices in my head. :-) I'm glad you're enjoying it!
I'll feed the bunny anything it wants as long as you keep going:-) This is such an awesome fic, and it is taking some very interesting turns. Love it, keep it up!
Author's Response: The bunnies and I all thank you, silverlark17! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
I love the story, I like the suttleness of Snape, Also I know I didnt get to submit a review in the first chapter but I love the whole Ron bit I love love it.
Author's Response: Lavender, thank you so much! I am so happy you're enjoying it. :-)
"Dance bunnies, dance!"
I LOVE IT!!!!! This is by far one of my favorite Snape/Hermione fictions. I hope you update soon. I will be anxiously awaiting the upcoming chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks, DementorsKiss! I am so happy you're enjoying it! I will be submitting a new chapter tonight!
i love it!! more more more. can't wait. definetly feed the plot bunnies . . . they deserve it!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Sammy! I'm glad you liked it and the bunnies say thank you also!
WOW... There is some love tention going on... I love this one... These plot bunnies deserve some carrots... more please...BYE...LOL :)
Author's Response: Thank you, wizard girl! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I shall pet the plot bunnies for you!
more more, more more, more more! I love this... awwww sevy...
Author's Response: Thank you, darkness_falls! I'll be sending the chapter in the queue very shortly. I'm glad you like it!