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Name: SilenceSSlytherin (Signed) · Date: 06/15/05 23:06 · For: The Waiting Is Over
That was amazing!!! And I, for one, am glad that you left it at the rating it currently is. The ending was so sweet and romantic. Thank you SO MUCH for sharing this story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, SilenceSSlytherin! I'm glad I left a rating as it is because I could complete the story on this archive and I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed it so much!

Name: SilenceSSlytherin (Signed) · Date: 06/15/05 22:35 · For: Awakening
Wow!!! I've been reading this story for an hour or so, and i made an account so i could review this. IT'S AWESOME! Very attention grabbing, and holding. I'm seriously lovin' it!

Author's Response: Thank you, SilenceSSlytherin! I'm so happy you went to so much trouble to leave a review and I'm so happy you're enjoying it!

Name: SakuraAi (Signed) · Date: 06/15/05 12:22 · For: The Waiting Is Over
I like the story, really. You have potential! ^_^ Good description of the developing of Snape's feelings. But... in personal opinion, I don't think you should've thought of marry them... I think just living together it's fine. Keep Going!

Author's Response: Thanks, SakuraAi! I'm happy you enjoyed it. I couldn't have them live together, because the whole first chapter was based on Snape wanting a wife. ;-D

Name: Izanogi (Signed) · Date: 06/12/05 9:42 · For: The Waiting Is Over
Great story, it shows a real understanding of the Enigma that is snape. Plus I love the Blackadder Goes Forth reference!

Author's Response: Thank you, Izanogi! I have to admit, I am a Snape-shipper. I do love Snape. I'm glad you enjoyed by reference, you're the first person to catch that!

Name: alexmac92 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/05 20:50 · For: The Waiting Is Over
totally awesome! I never really was much of a HG/SS shipper but now I see its possible since they are sooo alike. I also love the whole thing about trust in there, it made the story so lifelike! I give it two thumbs ways up!!! oh, and I've even added you to my fav. author's list ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, alexmac92! I'm so happy to know you like the story and thank you for adding me!

Name: Polaris Dakota (Signed) · Date: 06/07/05 12:54 · For: Serving Two Masters
::feeds plot bunnies lettus, carrots, condoms, tomatoes and chocolate:: ^-^ keep up the good work! Use a condom kids!

Author's Response: Thank you, Polaris Dakota! But if the bunnies start practicing safe sex, where will the little bunnies come from? :-)

Name: Polaris Dakota (Signed) · Date: 06/07/05 11:55 · For: Great Plans
I am not normally a great fan of the HG/SS stories but because you are such a wonderful writer i think you may have me converted! By the way, i reviewed yours, how about you review mine?! i wont advertise here but Hey! 10/10 wonderful writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Polaris Dakota! To be honest, this was my first attempt to write the good ship Granger-Snape. I had to wrap my mind around Snape's character in order to make it work. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Name: Lefty_Girl (Anonymous) · Date: 06/06/05 23:01 · For: Great Plans
THis is a very interesting story. I'm also not a great fan of the hermione/snape ship, but, regardless, i still find this fascinating! keep it up!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, Lefty_Girl! I'm glad you're enjoying this!

Name: Lovely Fatima (Signed) · Date: 06/06/05 19:53 · For: Scheming Snake
Scheming snake, indeed! Part of me LOVES Snape for his ability to so smoothly manipulate Hermione into doing what he wants her to do, and then again I absolutely hate the fact that he's being so damn manipulative! His handling of the Bill Weasley situation - loved the tight pants and earring reference, by the way - was brilliant. How do we make Hermione do what we want and make it seem like her idea? Simple, involve the enticement of new and formerly forbidden knowledge. That along with his calculated decision to use her first name was pure magic. I honestly feel like *I* am being seduced by Snape right along with Hermione. I'd love to read some of your other stories because this one is outstanding!

Author's Response: Thank you, Lovely Fatima! I think this is probably the way Snape would go courting... it refused to believe he has any sort of a chance unless it was sneaky and manipulative. I hope you do go on to read some of my other stories, however, most of mine are housed elsewhere because they are NC-17. I've got rather a long one with Snape and an OFC and I just submitted another one here with Snape and Hestia Jones. You might get the feeling I write Snape. :-)

Name: Lovely Fatima (Signed) · Date: 06/06/05 18:12 · For: Happy Christmas, Miss Granger
At last I feel like Hermione is herself in this chapter - and what a wonderful chapter it was. Snape's observation that those who give gifts often want something in return was spot-on for him. Her timidity and his...well...Snapishness blend so well that when he places his hands on her shoulders, any ookie feelings we might have had about the two of them together suddenly dissolve into a sort of rightness. I am very happy that you are taking time with this relationship and that you have Snape acknowledge that he does indeed want Hermione as a woman, not as a girl or a student. Excellent work.

Author's Response: Thank you, Lovely Fatima! I don't like stories that feature Snape and Hermione-as-a-student. That's just... WRONG (forgive me, WIKTT). This is a slow moving story and I hope you keep on enjoying it.

Name: Lovely Fatima (Signed) · Date: 06/06/05 17:35 · For: Protecting Her
Okay. Snape is just a smarmy bastard and I LOVE it! The implications of his little spells of manipulation are staggering. After all, why WAS Ron coming on so hot and heavy? I liked how you described Hermione's thoughts while Ron was "drooling" over her. Waiting for her body to take over, indeed. Somehow, though, I'm finding Hermione a bit...off. I'm not willing to say OOC, but just not quite herself. Perhaps its because in canon, Hermione's words and reactions to Snape are seen through the Harry-filter and we all know that Harry despises Snape. However, I would think that Hermione might show a bit more revulsion to being touched by Snape and looked at by him - especially at that electric feeling she got when he did touch her. Then again, that could be my personal bias talking. At any rate, I'm hooked into your story well and good now. And Snape does have redeeming qualities. His admonition that a man who would use fear to coerce a woman into his bed is half a man was the sort of chivalric thing I'd never have expected to come out of his mouth, and yet it sounds perfectly in character. Bravo. I look forward to Chapter 3.

Author's Response: Thank you, Lovely Fatima! Hermione though is always the one to insist that Snape be given respect. This was my first attempt at writing Hermione so I really appreciate the feedback!

Name: Lovely Fatima (Signed) · Date: 06/06/05 17:16 · For: Great Plans
Let me begin by saying that I'm not a big fan of the good ship HG/SS. However, I find that given the logic of Snape's decision and his desire to let her grow up a little more, I kinda like it in this story. I thought Hermione's tactic to force Snape to call on her was brilliant, even if he did take points away. I also like how you show that Snape is well aware that Draco has very few talents to recommend him, and that he acknowledges Harry's "adequate" abilities in Potions. Is the apprentice thing something you thought up? If so, I think I like it. It certainly makes sense, as there really isn't any mention of training schools for those who wish to be Wizarding teachers. But why Potions? I mean, I know it serves your story, obviously, but I would think Hermione might gravitate towards something like Transfiguration, Ancient Runes or Arithmancy just as much as she'd go for Potions. Hopefully this will be explained in later chapters. So although Snape's plans for Hermione leave me feeling a little ookie inside, I like where this is going. You've got an interesting story here!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Lovely Fatima! This started out as an exercise for me -- to see if I actually could write Granger/Snape and keep it believable.
Apprenticeship is used a lot in fan fiction. I merely borrowed it for the plot. I agree that Hermione probably would be more interested in Arithmancy, Transfiguration or Ancient Runes, however, Potions is another disciplined field of study that requires precision and I think that might appeal to her. And it did serve my story. :-) Thank you very much!

Name: Kerian (Signed) · Date: 06/04/05 20:51 · For: The Waiting Is Over
A truly lovely job! I'm so glad that you chose to continue with the story and you did such a great job of developing the characters as they aged! Great work, and congrats on a story finished!

Author's Response: Thank you, Kerian! I am so glad you enjoyed this and I'm very glad I got it finished!

Name: miss padfoot (Signed) · Date: 06/04/05 1:26 · For: Serving Two Masters
Though I can't imagine Hermione ending up with Snape, I do like your fanfic very much. Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you, Miss Padfoot! I'm glad you enjoyed this! And I will try to. :-)

Name: Campbell58 (Signed) · Date: 06/02/05 22:10 · For: The Waiting Is Over
While I am not usually a fan of SS/HG stories, I was sucked in by this one. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you, Campbell58! I'm glad you liked this one!

Name: SeaIsleWitch (Signed) · Date: 06/01/05 8:19 · For: The Waiting Is Over
LariLee, I like the way you propelled this story forward with your vignettes. I'm not a huge Snape/Hermione fan, but you convinced me that the relationship was plausible. She was old enough, he respected her, they took their time, and Snape was, well, Snape--scheming and (dare I say) snarky. It was beautifully written! This story merits my highest approval!

Author's Response: Thank you, SeaIsleWitch! I have to admit, this is not my favorite ship. But maybe I can talk you into reading my Snape-is-a-gigolo story on Ashwinder. :-) I am so happy you enjoyed this!

Name: Grainne (Signed) · Date: 05/31/05 21:21 · For: The Waiting Is Over
Oh, I see that Great Plans is featured, so all's "write" with the world. No there's nowt for Grainne to do but stand up and shout, "YOU GO GIRL!" Erm...sorry, Lisa. Too fangirly of me? But I just can't help but get excited when another of my favourite authors turns up in the featured section. Congrats!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Grainne! You can be fangirly as long as you're my fangirl. :-) I think we should form a mutual admiration society.

Name: SeaIsleWitch (Signed) · Date: 05/30/05 20:50 · For: Protecting Her
Ah, Snape the way I like him...plotting and scheming! (evil grin)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, SeaIsleWitch! You know, that's just the way I like him too

Name: SeaIsleWitch (Signed) · Date: 05/30/05 20:46 · For: Great Plans
LariLee, congrats on the featured story! I read the first two chapters last night, but was unable to review. Great beginning for Great Plans! You've peaked my interest!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, SeaIsleWitch! I hope you enjoy this!

Name: EmmaSGryffindor15 (Signed) · Date: 05/29/05 1:08 · For: The Waiting Is Over
its really good im really enjoying it so far! please post more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, EmmaSGryffindor15! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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