Reviews For Great Plans
Reviewer: alexmac92
Date: 06/08/05 20:50
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

totally awesome! I never really was much of a HG/SS shipper but now I see its possible since they are sooo alike. I also love the whole thing about trust in there, it made the story so lifelike! I give it two thumbs ways up!!! oh, and I've even added you to my fav. author's list ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, alexmac92! I'm so happy to know you like the story and thank you for adding me!
~Lisa

Reviewer: Polaris Dakota
Date: 06/07/05 12:54
Chapter: Serving Two Masters

::feeds plot bunnies lettus, carrots, condoms, tomatoes and chocolate:: ^-^ keep up the good work! Use a condom kids!

Author's Response: Thank you, Polaris Dakota! But if the bunnies start practicing safe sex, where will the little bunnies come from? :-)
~Lisa

Reviewer: Polaris Dakota
Date: 06/07/05 11:55
Chapter: Great Plans

I am not normally a great fan of the HG/SS stories but because you are such a wonderful writer i think you may have me converted! By the way, i reviewed yours, how about you review mine?! i wont advertise here but Hey! 10/10 wonderful writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Polaris Dakota! To be honest, this was my first attempt to write the good ship Granger-Snape. I had to wrap my mind around Snape's character in order to make it work. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
~Lisa

Reviewer: Lefty_Girl
Date: 06/06/05 23:01
Chapter: Great Plans

THis is a very interesting story. I'm also not a great fan of the hermione/snape ship, but, regardless, i still find this fascinating! keep it up!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, Lefty_Girl! I'm glad you're enjoying this!
~Lisa

Reviewer: Lovely Fatima
Date: 06/06/05 19:53
Chapter: Scheming Snake

Scheming snake, indeed! Part of me LOVES Snape for his ability to so smoothly manipulate Hermione into doing what he wants her to do, and then again I absolutely hate the fact that he's being so damn manipulative! His handling of the Bill Weasley situation - loved the tight pants and earring reference, by the way - was brilliant. How do we make Hermione do what we want and make it seem like her idea? Simple, involve the enticement of new and formerly forbidden knowledge. That along with his calculated decision to use her first name was pure magic. I honestly feel like *I* am being seduced by Snape right along with Hermione. I'd love to read some of your other stories because this one is outstanding!

Author's Response: Thank you, Lovely Fatima! I think this is probably the way Snape would go courting... it refused to believe he has any sort of a chance unless it was sneaky and manipulative. I hope you do go on to read some of my other stories, however, most of mine are housed elsewhere because they are NC-17. I've got rather a long one with Snape and an OFC and I just submitted another one here with Snape and Hestia Jones. You might get the feeling I write Snape. :-)
~Lisa

Reviewer: Lovely Fatima
Date: 06/06/05 18:12
Chapter: Happy Christmas, Miss Granger

At last I feel like Hermione is herself in this chapter - and what a wonderful chapter it was. Snape's observation that those who give gifts often want something in return was spot-on for him. Her timidity and his...well...Snapishness blend so well that when he places his hands on her shoulders, any ookie feelings we might have had about the two of them together suddenly dissolve into a sort of rightness. I am very happy that you are taking time with this relationship and that you have Snape acknowledge that he does indeed want Hermione as a woman, not as a girl or a student. Excellent work.

Author's Response: Thank you, Lovely Fatima! I don't like stories that feature Snape and Hermione-as-a-student. That's just... WRONG (forgive me, WIKTT). This is a slow moving story and I hope you keep on enjoying it.
~Lisa

Reviewer: Lovely Fatima
Date: 06/06/05 17:35
Chapter: Protecting Her

Okay. Snape is just a smarmy bastard and I LOVE it! The implications of his little spells of manipulation are staggering. After all, why WAS Ron coming on so hot and heavy? I liked how you described Hermione's thoughts while Ron was "drooling" over her. Waiting for her body to take over, indeed. Somehow, though, I'm finding Hermione a bit...off. I'm not willing to say OOC, but just not quite herself. Perhaps its because in canon, Hermione's words and reactions to Snape are seen through the Harry-filter and we all know that Harry despises Snape. However, I would think that Hermione might show a bit more revulsion to being touched by Snape and looked at by him - especially at that electric feeling she got when he did touch her. Then again, that could be my personal bias talking. At any rate, I'm hooked into your story well and good now. And Snape does have redeeming qualities. His admonition that a man who would use fear to coerce a woman into his bed is half a man was the sort of chivalric thing I'd never have expected to come out of his mouth, and yet it sounds perfectly in character. Bravo. I look forward to Chapter 3.

Author's Response: Thank you, Lovely Fatima! Hermione though is always the one to insist that Snape be given respect. This was my first attempt at writing Hermione so I really appreciate the feedback!
~Lisa

Reviewer: Lovely Fatima
Date: 06/06/05 17:16
Chapter: Great Plans

Let me begin by saying that I'm not a big fan of the good ship HG/SS. However, I find that given the logic of Snape's decision and his desire to let her grow up a little more, I kinda like it in this story. I thought Hermione's tactic to force Snape to call on her was brilliant, even if he did take points away. I also like how you show that Snape is well aware that Draco has very few talents to recommend him, and that he acknowledges Harry's "adequate" abilities in Potions. Is the apprentice thing something you thought up? If so, I think I like it. It certainly makes sense, as there really isn't any mention of training schools for those who wish to be Wizarding teachers. But why Potions? I mean, I know it serves your story, obviously, but I would think Hermione might gravitate towards something like Transfiguration, Ancient Runes or Arithmancy just as much as she'd go for Potions. Hopefully this will be explained in later chapters. So although Snape's plans for Hermione leave me feeling a little ookie inside, I like where this is going. You've got an interesting story here!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Lovely Fatima! This started out as an exercise for me -- to see if I actually could write Granger/Snape and keep it believable.
Apprenticeship is used a lot in fan fiction. I merely borrowed it for the plot. I agree that Hermione probably would be more interested in Arithmancy, Transfiguration or Ancient Runes, however, Potions is another disciplined field of study that requires precision and I think that might appeal to her. And it did serve my story. :-) Thank you very much!
~Lisa

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 06/04/05 20:51
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

A truly lovely job! I'm so glad that you chose to continue with the story and you did such a great job of developing the characters as they aged! Great work, and congrats on a story finished!

Author's Response: Thank you, Kerian! I am so glad you enjoyed this and I'm very glad I got it finished!
~Lisa

Reviewer: miss padfoot
Date: 06/04/05 1:26
Chapter: Serving Two Masters

Though I can't imagine Hermione ending up with Snape, I do like your fanfic very much. Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you, Miss Padfoot! I'm glad you enjoyed this! And I will try to. :-)
~Lisa

Reviewer: Campbell58
Date: 06/02/05 22:10
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

While I am not usually a fan of SS/HG stories, I was sucked in by this one. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you, Campbell58! I'm glad you liked this one!
~Lisa

Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch
Date: 06/01/05 8:19
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

LariLee, I like the way you propelled this story forward with your vignettes. I'm not a huge Snape/Hermione fan, but you convinced me that the relationship was plausible. She was old enough, he respected her, they took their time, and Snape was, well, Snape--scheming and (dare I say) snarky. It was beautifully written! This story merits my highest approval!

Author's Response: Thank you, SeaIsleWitch! I have to admit, this is not my favorite ship. But maybe I can talk you into reading my Snape-is-a-gigolo story on Ashwinder. :-) I am so happy you enjoyed this!
~Lisa

Reviewer: Grainne
Date: 05/31/05 21:21
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

Oh, I see that Great Plans is featured, so all's "write" with the world. No there's nowt for Grainne to do but stand up and shout, "YOU GO GIRL!" Erm...sorry, Lisa. Too fangirly of me? But I just can't help but get excited when another of my favourite authors turns up in the featured section. Congrats!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Grainne! You can be fangirly as long as you're my fangirl. :-) I think we should form a mutual admiration society.
~Lisa

Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch
Date: 05/30/05 20:50
Chapter: Protecting Her

Ah, Snape the way I like him...plotting and scheming! (evil grin)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, SeaIsleWitch! You know, that's just the way I like him too
~Lisa

Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch
Date: 05/30/05 20:46
Chapter: Great Plans

LariLee, congrats on the featured story! I read the first two chapters last night, but was unable to review. Great beginning for Great Plans! You've peaked my interest!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, SeaIsleWitch! I hope you enjoy this!
~Lisa

Reviewer: EmmaSGryffindor15
Date: 05/29/05 1:08
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

its really good im really enjoying it so far! please post more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, EmmaSGryffindor15! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
~Lisa

Reviewer: HarryPotterlovesme
Date: 05/28/05 8:22
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

It is really excellent. I love it. Well done!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, HarryPotterlovesme! I am so happy you enjoyed it!
~Lisa

Reviewer: Flame girl
Date: 05/28/05 6:50
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

Just amazing. So brilliant I love it loads and it's over :( But it's still excellent and I love happy endings. I love this fic lots and lots and lots and lots and..... yeah, you get the picture. :) *10*

Author's Response: Thank you, Flame girl! I am so happy you like this! Thank you for being such a faithful reviewer, it's people like you that keep me writing!
~Lisa

Reviewer: Andie
Date: 05/27/05 18:05
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

I liked it very much the whole story was just right. Great job. Hope you write something else I'll be on the look out.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Andie! You may want to check some other sites for me, because I posted many places. Unfortunately, most of what I write is NC-17 and not appropriate for Mugglenet. I'm so happy you enjoyed this!
~Lisa

Reviewer: chattynatty
Date: 05/27/05 15:36
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

this was a great fanfic! very well written and very different o others i have read! try to write another fanfic soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, chattynatty! I've got to works-in-progress on other sites. But as soon as I can write something that does not exceed an R-rating, I will post it here!
~Lisa

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